Kashmakash S2 Th 10 Epilogue Pg 69 Aug 2 - Page 9

Originally posted by: suku_07

So here goes my review for chapter 18...

Firstly awesome chapters dear... But Ashu ko scans ke liye kyu nahi bheja 😡... But I can actually see in this KSMK he is actually struggling with himself... Great... One more thing the small scenes that you write about Ashu's past are way beyond awesome...I van actually feel the pain and silent suffering of Ashu and his mother...

thank you Suku...i was too raw the previous time to concentrate on these scenes..glad i got a chance again now..

Ashni's gift for Ranji... very nice... 2 nights at taj kya baat hai... I loved the way Ashu take cares of Nidhi... nice spl the foot massages I really wonder if it happens in real life too ??

yes. it does..

So slowly slowly he is shedding his fears but not completly... My poor Ashu dada ke naam par apne papa ki yaad aa gayi but still I loved the way you showed he went for the scans...

I really wish you had elaborated the god barai function that was too small... but still the reason behind it was more important... Poor Ashutosh just a nightmare amd he sends Nidhi away...

buddy..don't ask me to elaborate on functions..i am horrible at them...but yes, the reason behind was what was more important...

Well on last line mein toh yeh bhi nahi keh sakti ki ab kya hOga 😆

but i can say na..abhi next review kab??😳😆

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Guys..me off for

if Sagi comes, please tell her to wait..i will be back in half hour.

Originally posted by: nidhirohan

hello suku kaisee ho😆

Originally posted by: Suvika.

next one will be a fresh story Suku..