Originally posted by: deepaligupta197
A magnificent way to end the story ! Every word keeps the reader on the seat of her chair and the imagination and the visualisation of the story floats through the brain... the picture painted...awesome!!! And what we conjure up in our imagination upon reading those words is mindblowing!i visualize the scene and feel the emotion first and try to pen it down as best as i can...so glad its coming out well..Why is she crying so much? Her leg seems a bit swollen too...Ashu is troubled by Aasha's crying, whimpering and cooing. Their mutual bonding is more than a source of physical satisfaction; a place of security for both of them. These affective ties are necessary for their intellectual development! Aasha brings a new meaning to Ashu's life , he feels happy, he feels wonderful when she smiles , he has so many more emotions than he is aware of, more than he did before. It's hard to believe what a baby can do!so true...he slides into the role of her father without thought...and yes, you are right..something happens to him the moment he holds her in his arms..Success is not final, failure is not fatal..it is the courage to continue that counts...Taking the small defeats in life in stride, and continuing to put forth your best effort are the things important to survival and to eventual success. Very aptly used in Ashu's context...he has been fighting his inner demons n has been dwelling between success n failure ...but Nidhi's love gives him all the courage to fight back. Nidhi taught him out of the love in her heart that the present moment is all they have, and it's in their power that future events are created through the energy of the thoughts that dominate the human mind. Love and faith in most cases will always find a way.The episode where Ashu has to nurse Aasha overnight...incredibly vivid and the believability of AShu's character, makes it the best testament of the joy of living life fully. I see a picture of a father holding, hugging, kissing or sleeping with his child and it melts me to the core!Yes Dr Rishab. She is her father's darling daughter....Just loved the pride on Ashu's face when he introduces his daughter to Dr. Rishab. Something phenomenal happens when Ashu holds the baby in his arms ,unsaid words like , I'm your father, and I will always be there for you, you will be loved... some rush of energy makes him snap out of his intoxication of fear .đđđźđ¤A sense of peace that he never felt before overcomes his body, mind and spirit. In a flash, his life has changed forever. The storm clouds have finally left his life completely , forever! That tiny life form brought all positive affirmations in him ,in a place driven by fear.The essence of the story which is love, is a matter of releasing those limited and limiting thoughts . it is a profound story of self-healing with the deeply powerful emotions. How fear, doubt, and negativity are replaced with optimism, joy, and love.
that was indeed my aim when this story took shape in my head..thanks to my editors..who made sure the believability is not lost..i tend to get carried away sometimes..Divya quite literally drags me back with her ever present logic.
KSMK 2 provides an unflinching look at the overwhelming challenges, the painstaking process of overcoming fear, and the responsibilities that fall to a loving spouse who wants the best possible for his wife , to a responsible father. The story chronicles the lives of two extraordinary people and their journey towards a contented future.A perfect balance of long ago tragedy n healing , their sorrow and joy , beautifully done. It's honest and candid, and I thought it was inspirational on every level.
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