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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Sai, When is the next update????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjani9

Sai, When is the next update????


May be tomorrow , almost done ...will try to finish writing tonight and post tomorrow morning 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am trying my best to give next chapter tomorrow morning ...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi sai...

I know, u r probably mad at me, fpr being compltely absent since ur last fic.. Sorry babes... I cudn't...

Coming to this fic, Awesome dear... 👏 Arranged marriage...[I tried my hands writing it... But failed miserably... 🤣 ]

Both reluctant initially, n then, starting on a new thing, after leaving behind their broken hearts.. 👏

I've read chap-1 only till now, going to read chap-2...

Thanks for this new fic.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey- sorry for late comments😳

pehle to it was a wonderful read.
their first meeting was beautifully described.

loved how u described ashu
he really is our greek god😉

liked the last part especially where she says" good bye till we meet again"

pl do continue soon

getting restless to read the next part😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ohhh my... Havent ever imagined anyone discussing in favor/opposite of Hitler in matrimony related meeting... that too very first one...😃 Cute update Sai. Awaiting next chapter. Please try to post in weekend if possible. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely Chapters…I read the two in one go and I was like…why I can't have more to read… such was the narration …

The plot is too good and it has already kept me on edge to know more and more what it reveals and how the story turns…Two persons meet hiding the story of their share of deceits, little skeptical, little hopeful to make a world of their own…that's what their disappointment at the second chapter reveals… both unknowingly have already their set of expectations with the meet…

"Confused and ….huh complicated!" she made a mental note

Even before she could stop, she heard her voice "goodbye for now …" she repeated again

His frown disappeared and his contracted chest heaved in relief" Sure, goodbye until we meet again ..." he smiled back like he could not help it, like all teeth and sparkling eyes.

"My goodness! Is it a yes then?" she stared at him, startled, pleased and what not with a joy which she never felt from a quite a long time …..

Baba and son relation nicely depicted….and it also gives me a glimpse of Ashu Mallu relationship though not revealing fully…. Nidhi's hard striving life… Anji- Nidhi bond shown beautifully… waiting to read more….

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sai my friend first of all i would say , my dream is to see all these scene in KTLK season2😊as it 's so lovely and so cute .

after reading ur update i thought if ashu is 43 this will be much interesting
but i feel this might be ur choice 😉

love these ones specially

She did not expected this '.not some Greek god waiting for her with a smile which can kill her so smoothly "hell no! "She thought.

"seriously ...is he really 33" she frowned just then her cell phone buzzed showing a message from Anjie '

"I hope, you bathed and brushed??'

No visible hair on nose, upper lip and chin??

No dirty chipped nails??ROFLMAO Enjoy "😆

so nicely u have describe the conversation between nidhi and anji


"Hitler lover?!!...That is the most extraordinary compliment I ever got so far '." He grinned which made her throw her head back and join in his laughter '.

When she stopped and looked at him, he looked flushed nad shaken just like her older self'.it was abrupt and impossible to avoid the new glint in his eyes, their eyes instantly met and the cheek so of each were overspread with deepest blush. He looked absolutely startled and for a moment immoveable by surprise '.but shortly recovering himself, he mumbled in his frigid trembling voice "I think, we should go now '.."

It was abrupt and she was taken aback with this sudden change in him and this sudden coldness reminded of someone she knew!

She was not pleased and she did not try to hide her annoyance...And with one swift motion, she got up and made a move out of barista'.

"Ok, what next? Final good bye from MR. Hitler lover huh" She frowned; A small sweeping disappointment lingered in her head even before she could register it '😳

Starting up her car, she waited for him to say something but he just stood still as if he is freezed under light blue sky '

Turning around, she took one last look at his face, his tall frame, his masculine arms hugging around his chest '.he looked pale, shaken and like someone whose inside is flared up and full of chaos "Good bye ..." she mumbled😛


sai


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Hi sai...

I know, u r probably mad at me, fpr being compltely absent since ur last fic.. Sorry babes... I cudn't...


Mad at you 😲, but i feel you have every right to be mad at me Azeen ...i did not gave one proper review for your fic ...but i love reading it .😳

I am sorry ( i know even sorry will not do ) but i wil give review soon ...there are so many fic i am not able to give review ...I am extremely sorry

Coming to this fic, Awesome dear... 👏 Arranged marriage...[I tried my hands writing it... But failed miserably... 🤣 ]

don't think like that , i like your story ...i feel your story progressing so well ..I am liking it .😃

Both reluctant initially, n then, starting on a new thing, after leaving behind their broken hearts.. 👏



I've read chap-1 only till now, going to read chap-2...

Thanks for this new fic.

take your time ..Thank you so much Aazeen , you are sweetheart 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nandinibose

hey- sorry for late comments😳


not a problem dear , you liked the story ..it is more than enough 😃

pehle to it was a wonderful read.
their first meeting was beautifully described.

Thank you so much 🤗

loved how u described ashu
he really is our greek god😉

so I enjoyed penning it down ...😳

liked the last part especially where she says" good bye till we meet again"

I really hope you like coming chapters, even though I am bit apprehensive about it .....😳

pl do continue soon

getting restless to read the next part😃

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