Kashmakash Season 2 Th 2 Ch-5 Pg 103 June 19

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Jayasree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Sujataji,

It is nice reading the second version of KASHMAKASH. There are many minute changes in this chapter as far as I can understand.

1. Ranganath is on the terrace and Nidhi does not go and sit in Ashutosh's cabin.

2. Their conversation re. her mother and her studies aswell as returning the coat is during their way back home.

3. The last few lines of Baba and Hiraman About his finding someone is new.

4. Also Nidhi's mischievous smile and Ashu thinking" Apke ankhen hume mardalenge Nidhi Verma"

Please check the spelling -- the word I think should be perfunctionary laugh instead of perfectionary.

Thanks for the beautiful chapter.

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KamnaSharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Thanks 4 d update Suja...we worked v hard y'day night ...what I cud say is you have made some cosmetic changes in this chapter..waiting 4 chap 4...Suvikans have given an exhausting list reg the additions from earlier version so nothing left 4 me 2 add...

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ruchshah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Awesome update...n i loved this version...

Changes, as far as i can remember: Ranganath didnot come to the terrace to look for Nidhi...so that entire scene comes out differently.

Nidhi comes to return Ashu's coat..which was not d case earlier...

Ashu offering a lift to Nidhi is different scene,

Looking forward to the new chapters .

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Suvika.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197
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mujhe toh koi problem nahi hota..which one are you using??

Ya right Who dares to create a problem for the She Devil😆!

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mine too..

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Suvika.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: suku_07

😆 yeah..u do that..

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Suvika.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao
Sujataji,

😲 Jayasree garu..you have finally commented in my thread!!! 😆 thank you ji. 😳

It is nice reading the second version of KASHMAKASH. There are many minute changes in this chapter as far as I can understand.

1. Ranganath is on the terrace and Nidhi does not go and sit in Ashutosh's cabin.

2. Their conversation re. her mother and her studies aswell as returning the coat is during their way back home.

3. The last few lines of Baba and Hiraman About his finding someone is new.

4. Also Nidhi's mischievous smile and Ashu thinking" Apke ankhen hume mardalenge Nidhi Verma"

Please check the spelling -- the word I think should be perfunctionary laugh instead of perfectionary.

Thanks for the beautiful chapter.

@red..fantastic Jayasreegaru..you got that one bang on!! and thanks for the spell check. running to correct it right away.

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Suvika.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: arpitajaan
Thanks 4 d update Suja...we worked v hard y'day night ...what I cud say is you have made some cosmetic changes in this chapter..waiting 4 chap 4...Suvikans have given an exhausting list reg the additions from earlier version so nothing left 4 me 2 add...

sab ka apna apna list hain Arpita. you can't say that and skip your own homework...😆

but yes, you guys really worked very hard last night. 👏

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ssktlk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Vry nice, loving this K-2. Perfect in this beautiful rainy weather. Ye aankhen hume maar daalegi is new. Also Nidhi going to return ashu's coat is new. Ashni holding hands after Nidhi's breakdown is new I think.

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parmarA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Suvika ji,i read third chap.Abhi do to baki reh gaye.But this chap is amazing and enjoyable.Nidhi is quite cute here.And ashu too cute here.I loved Ashni's exchange here.Nidhi trying ashu's liking and ashu trying nidhi"s liking.And loved both.I am just thinking they started to love each other and don't know about it.When Nidhi closed her eyes,she found ashu's face right there.And i will be here after reading two chapters.Congrats for 2nd thread suvikaji.Waise fizul ki baat karne ki aadat toh muze hai nahi fir bhi keh deti hoo,"Haye ,just perfect."