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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#461

I am not leaving this thread.. looks like you dont want me here.. but you see i am very thick skinned. Someone told me not to make cap posts -- i made them everyday...

SO I WILL BE HERE.. EVERYDAY.. ASKING Q'S AND DEMANDING UPDATES...

SO WHEN IS YOUR NEXT UPDATE...

Oh, so u still remember me and my poor ff? kamaal hai!

u r most welcome here.

next update, when I m almost done typing ch 5.

Next question please...

btw, congrats on getting the first ever copy of THT

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rayafan17

@rayafan17

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#462

Originally posted by: sshirley

I am not leaving this thread.. looks like you dont want me here.. but you see i am very thick skinned. Someone told me not to make cap posts -- i made them everyday...

SO I WILL BE HERE.. EVERYDAY.. ASKING Q'S AND DEMANDING UPDATES...

SO WHEN IS YOUR NEXT UPDATE...

Oh, so u still remember me and my poor ff? kamaal hai!

u r most welcome here.

next update, when I m almost done typing ch 5.

Next question please...

btw, congrats on getting the first ever copy of THT

That is not good enough ... who told you that i have forgotten your FF..😡

Do you remember i told you i will be back in the weekend...

Need a date please..

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deepaligupta197

@deepaligupta197

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#463

Originally posted by: sshirley

Oh ok ! Mera bhi din aayega, then I wud show u what teasing is all abt?😆

Eagerly waiting for the day.

Aayega next chap post karo woh din bhi aayega!

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deepaligupta197

@deepaligupta197

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#464

Originally posted by: sshirley

Kyunji, ab kis baat pe naraazgi hai?

No narazgi , jst saving u the trouble of pulling up excuses , u knw!🤔

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deepaligupta197

@deepaligupta197

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#465

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Haye ram , itne sare sorry kahan rakhoon 🤔

Rakhiye Sambhaal ke, shayad future me kaam aaye - jab main sorry bolna bhool jaaoon.

See Pakki dramebaaz!

WThis was soo worth the wait and to get it earlier then it was planned is so awesome in itself . The flow and pace is perfect, you are literally hanging on every word.

Well, I am really thankful to have such loyal and loving readers who get happy if I post earlier - I feel overwhelmed by all you love.

I am glad u like the pace and flow,

@bold - thank you for saying this. its taking a lot of hard work to see that every word I type has a reason/meaning.

Understandable...BTW it takes equal efforts to appreciate late lateefs n dramebaaz like u😆

Main Dramebaaz toh aap kya? Maha dramebaaz?

Jst wait n watch...had ho gayi itna soch ke review likho or koi dramebaaz kehta hai to koi angootha chap

Basically a chap of magic(saints), love with some interesting twisted plots.

Thanks - I hope I could do justice to the verses u provided me with, did I meet ur expectation?

You bet , the Sanskrit vs were perfectly used! Happy I cud help!

Thank you so much 🤗

Deep breath, and I cudn't wipe that big goofy grin off my face. I cudn't guess you were mocking with this Rohan Nidhi proposal issue.

Strange thing is even though Rohan's proposal was cheesy, no one suspected it was fake - I thought someone would definitely catch me 😆

These teenagers party hard and live rich. Nidhi's wish to transform from high class girl to high society princess shows she's smart, beautiful, and strong headed.

Exactly... but u think she is smart? in wat sense?

If she knows exactly what n how to get , I thnk she is very strong headed! You need guts to gamble ur life for money for a bigda shehzada like Rohan!

Oh! in that sense! I understand now

"Love? What is love Anji? Wohi jo filmo me dekhte hain? Come on Anji, grow up" she chided.

She knows exactly what she wants n how to get it! Obstinate n endeavoring Nidhi!

Hehe! Yes, she is hell bent on marrying Rohan, lets see if she can resist Ashu's charms.

Woh to aapke hath mein hai😆 . So u can twist n turn the way u want!

Filhaal toh ye maine bhi nahi socha hai - ye sab bahut aage hai abhi

Anji , another adorable character of ur story who is concerned about her friend nd her stand abt life.

She didn't understand life at all. For her, life was all about enjoyment and indulgence. Indeed I don't even know how I managed to keep my friendship intact with such a self-centered person like Nidhi. But the fact is that I genuinely love her and am worried for her future.

The extract clearly shows Anji has all elements of frndship in her : accountabiliy , reliability , honesty n truly cares n loves the selfcentered Nidhi!

PERFECT description of Anji and her friendship/love for Nidhi👏

Apt use of lyrics , clearly signifies Mallikas state of mind who immensely loves Ashu n expects to b loved by him.

Thank you, I actually had to sit for hours to find this song. although m crazy ant old songs, this song was never on my list so had to listen to it thrice to convince myself of its suitability.

When Ashu tagged along with Mallika to the saints house the last thing he expected was to meet a girl.. But this wasn't just any girl.. Even more surprising Ashu seemed truly mesmerized by her. I love it when characters need to make choices. It is all about making those mistakes and figuring out what directions you want to go in in life. The protagonist is torn between two suitors who personify battling concepts that that the protagonist is wrestling with.

@Bold - Awesome. At the cost of giving hints about the future story, I have to say you summed it up perfectly..👏👏👏

And that girl? My goodness! What was she? An enigma? Bilkul aandhi ki tarah aayi aur toofan ki tarah, mujhe bechain karke chali gayi! Was she actually for real? Or did I hallucinate?

Clearly shows his inner turmoil, a form of what love conquers can all mean!

Do you think its love already? 😛😛

Yes , if her eyes r haunting him , isn't this love at first sight ?

Is it love? Is it just intrigue or is it infactuation? Sochiye aur bataiye.

Infatuation , Na...it is plain simple love.

So how wud Ashu n Nidhi pair up , what abt Mallika .Okay, the anticipation is driving me mad n I have no theories to put forward , so post the next chap.

And you actually think the next chapter will reveal all these answers? Ho sakta hai, it would drive you mre crazy with more and more questions 😉😆😆 I m just saying ho sakta hai

Thank you once again for such an awesome review. 🤗🤗🤗

Most welcome...but next time awesome hoga ya nahi , can't say...

Arre yaar aise dil todne wali baaten mat kariye - aapke reviews pe hi mera motivation depend karta hai

Phir drama😡

I am trying my best to give u frequent updates

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#466

Originally posted by: deepa17

I am not leaving this thread.. looks like you dont want me here.. but you see i am very thick skinned. Someone told me not to make cap posts -- i made them everyday...

SO I WILL BE HERE.. EVERYDAY.. ASKING Q'S AND DEMANDING UPDATES...

SO WHEN IS YOUR NEXT UPDATE...

Oh, so u still remember me and my poor ff? kamaal hai!

u r most welcome here.

next update, when I m almost done typing ch 5.

Next question please...

btw, congrats on getting the first ever copy of THT

That is not good enough ... who told you that i have forgotten your FF..😡

Arre yaar, ab suja ke saath mera kya muquabla?

Do you remember i told you i will be back in the weekend...

Yes, but I thought u will be busy on ksmk thread.

Need a date please..

Not possible - things are crazy over here, so I myself don't know my own schedule for the next 2-3 days.

Edited by sshirley - 12 years ago

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#467

Originally posted by: sshirley

Yes that's your homework till I post the next chapter.

😲 Omg meeting ek chp aur aage badha di...u have prooved that U R also SHE DEVIL...

phir se home work,itna home work to kabhi school me bhi nahi kiya...😔.

Arre yaar human hoon, typo ho gaya and yes, let me tell u a fact I m the original she-devil. suja toh meri sangat me rehke she devil bani hai

Ok to aap original SHE DEVIL hain...When will u give next update??

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#468

Originally posted by: alkaparmart
Sshirley sorry for late reply.And you are pairing Mallika and Ashutosh and nidhi with rohan.Verynew concept.And your flow of words are superb.And want to know whether you are turning your story to ashu mallu to ashu nidhi.Or you want to maintain it same.And waiting for the next chap.And Sanskrit shloak are too good.As i am from Deshasth Brahmin family and my father was Acharya,i can understand some shloak in sanskrit.Thanks dear

@green, no apology required - atleast u give me a review. Look at me, I don't even give u review for ur beautiful posts even though I enjoy them immensely. I am extremely sorry - but kya karoon, khud ka thread mushkil se sambhaal paati hoon aajkal - things are hectic these days at my end.

@Blue - thank you so much dear. But you have an excellent command over hindi too.

@Red - regarding pairing - u just have to wait and watch buddy. if I tell u everything now, toh phir ff me rahega kya?

@Pink - oh wow, u belong to a Brahmin family - great to know. And the entire credit for the Sanskrit verses and the translation goes to Deeps (deepaligupta197)

next chapter somewhere in the middle of the next week - cant say exactly.