Nidhi ki diary [v day celebration]part 2 page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ps :As you all know i had started Nidhi's diary.Lekin main woh kya hai na main kabhi kabhi bhulakkad ho jati hoo aur fir serial ki gadbadi ho jati hai.Toh i am extremely sorry for that.I want to express nidhi's joy of valentine day celebration two times.Bec in KTLK V-Day had been celebrated two times beautifully. ____________________________________________________ Maine dr Ashutosh ko valentine day ke bareme puchha toh unhone muze suna diya ki meri umar I-Tax ki date yaad rakhne ki hai,V-Day yaad rakhne ki nahi.Unhone muze bahoot disappoint kiya hai.Toh muze toh ummeed hi nahi thi ki unhone mere liye V-Day ka planning kiya hai. Unhone mere liye khubsurat V-Day bash ki ticket ka arrangement kiya.Kitne dashing lag rahe the woh safed suit me.Unhone muze bola ki tum kahaa ho main tumhe lene aa raha hoo.Muze laga ki woh toh yuhi milne aa rahe honge.Lekin woh muze apni gadi me bithakar le gaye ek khubsurat resturant me. Muze kitni khushi hui andar se ki unhe mere jajbato ki kitni parwaah hai.Itna sab karne baad bhi jab unhone mera udas chehera dekha toh woh dukhi ho gaye.Unhone turant muzse kahaa,"Yeh sab maine tumhare liye kiya hai.Agar tum khush nahi toh in sabka mere liye koi matlab nahi.Ab muze tum batao ki tum kis tarah se celebrate karna chahti ho?main sirf tumhari khushi chahta hoo." Kitna khush ho gai me unki batose? Aur main unhe apne dreamland Shehjadi Salubah ki baradari par le gai.Unki aankhose aisa laga ki hum jaise jannat me aa gaye ho.Jab main unhe Shehjadi Salubah ki kahani suna rahi thi toh unki aankhe kitne pyaar se dekh rahi thi muze.Unki har dil ki dhadkan sunai de rahi thi muze,bilkul saaf tarah se.Unki viraan aankhome maine pyaar dekha sirf mere liye. Hum dono ne milkar wahaa kandil jalaye aur humne humare pyaar ki kamiyaabi ke liye duaye bhi ki.Hum dono ko apne pyaar par yakeen tha,lekin apni kismat par nahi.Us ek kandil ke jalne se humare dil me ek asha ki kiran ya yu keh sakte hai ki halki si rohsani jal gai aur hume laga ki hum ek honge. Hum dono ek dusreki aankhome kho gaye the jaise.Aur tabhi unhone muze gift diya.Heart wale pendal wali chain.Muze aaj bhi yakeen nahi ho raha hai ki woh apni marji se mere liye gift laye the.Ab main unke bareme kya kahoo?pyaar toh bahoot karte hai muzse,lekin bayaan nahi kar pate.Jaise hai woh,waise hi muze pasand hai.Bahoot jyada pasand hai. Jab hum wapis aaye toh maine unse woh chain apne gale me pehenane ko kahaa aur mera woh bhi sapna unhone pura kar diya.Main tab apne aapko duniya ki sabse khushnaseeb ladki samazne lagi.Jis tarah unhone meri Mandira di ko support kiya,mere dil me unke pyaar ki jagah aur geheri ban gai aur woh ab shayad puja lagne lagi.Mandira di akeli thi.Unke support me kahe shabd woh aise keh rahe the mano muzse keh rahe ho ki ,"Fikar mat karo,hum apne pyaar ke liye ladenge.Aur tumhare ek baar bulane par main dauda chala aawoonga.Tumhare har jajbaat me,har ek aawaz me,har ek ladai me main tumhare saath hoo. Bus unka yahi nature,yahi pyar mere dil ko majboot banata hai.Main unse pyaar toh karti hoo,lekin tabse woh mere Hero ban gaye.Sirf hero nahi Superstar Ashutosh Mathur. Aur yeh sab padhkar ashu ki aankhe bhar aayi.Woh sochne lage,"Pyaar toh wohi jo aankhose baya ho.Main kab iske pyaar ki bhasha samazoonga?" Hope you like it.Please hit like button if you like it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Alka, I am reading this diary thing for the first time.. I didn't know about it..
You have depicted Nidhi's thought beautifully..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: neelimapn4

Alka, I am reading this diary thing for the first time.. I didn't know about it..

You have depicted Nidhi's thought beautifully..

Neelima i had started this diary before 15 days.I had written Mallika's presence,BKM and Bhole saiya in this series.If you are interested then go with it.please.Thank you for the comment dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Alkaji well narrated Ashni's maiden VD celebrations. Aapne nostalgic bana diya. Sub purani yaade taza ho gayi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful alka, just simply beautiful.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Another nice one Alka. 👏 This time its the thoughts about a very happy occasion for Ashni when they celebrated something together for the very first time as a couple.

I still remember Nidhi's expressions when Ashu comes to pick her up, arranges for the tickets to the bash but then she takes him to SSKB and then her absolute joy when he gifts her a pendant in the heart shape she loved. And that scene in her room where the light goes off and later he puts the chain on... you have so beautifully expressed Nidhi's thoughts on this.

Sometimes I feel if the show had taken things more slowly and actually given more time to reflect the thoughts of Ashni after each milestone it would have been an even better experience for the viewers... this unique love story deserved a unique treatment. But alas, the CVs were always ready with their Mallika or Mallika-like tadka to spoil the effect!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well written and great thought od writing Nidihis diary specially for VD
Love it really nice alka

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have not watched this first VDay episode till date Alkaben, but gonna watch it tonight for sure. So beautifully you have portrayed Nidhi's emotions on first VDay that it really brought tears in my eyes... Please continue with Nidhi ki diary... Muze
bahot pasand hai appki yeh series of posts... 🤗 And thank you so very much for such lovely stories from "diary ke panne" I absolutely love them!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aardhan

Another nice one Alka. 👏 This time its the thoughts about a very happy occasion for Ashni when they celebrated something together for the very first time as a couple.


I still remember Nidhi's expressions when Ashu comes to pick her up, arranges for the tickets to the bash but then she takes him to SSKB and then her absolute joy when he gifts her a pendant in the heart shape she loved. And that scene in her room where the light goes off and later he puts the chain on... you have so beautifully expressed Nidhi's thoughts on this.

Sometimes I feel if the show had taken things more slowly and actually given more time to reflect the thoughts of Ashni after each milestone it would have been an even better experience for the viewers... this unique love story deserved a unique treatment. But alas, the CVs were always ready with their Mallika or Mallika-like tadka to spoil the effect!!

@bold: Bingo!! 👍🏼 Perfectly put Aartiji... Writers' supreme fondness for negativity ruined all the happiness from the show.😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very beatiful Alkaji,purani yaadein taaza ho gayi.

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