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IN MN: Nidhi : Baba pari so rahi hai,jara uske pas baithiye na?main kitchen me ja rahi hoo.Use waise bhi nind me karwate badalne ki aadat hai.Toh aap uske pas honge toh woh nahi giregi. Baba : theek hai Nidhi,main baithta hoo.Tu chinta mat kar. Baba is now sitting near pari.And he remembered Nandini's childhood. Past: Nandini is 7 years old.Baba is teaching her.Baba: Nandini,dekh Maths ke sums kitne kathin hote hai na?lekin agar tum practice karogi baar baar toh woh tumhe aa jayenge. Nandini: baba,zindagi bhi aisee hi hoti hai? Baba: Nahi beti,zindgi badi kathin hoti hai.usme sukh aur dukh dono aate hai.Lekin tumhe toh koi dukh aa nahi sakta.Tera baba hai na?tumhe har dukh har dard se bachane ke liye. Aangan me baba ,Nandini khel rahe hai. Nandini: baba,ghoda baniye na?muze sawari karni hai. Baba: Guddi,tere liya main ghoda kya gadha bhi banoonga.Lekin agar meri kamar me dardshuru hua toh tumhe hi dabani padegi theek hai? Nandini: baba,aapki kamar me dard ho raha hai?laiye main daba deti hoo. Baba: are na re?beti se kamar ya paav dabaye nahi jate.Paap lagta hai.Chal ab violin ka riyaaz kare? Nandini: baba,maine violin pe ek dhun taiyaar ki hai?sunenge? Baba: Meri Guddi koi bhi dhun sunayengi na toh uske baba ko woh achhi hi lagegi.Meri pyari gudiya rani. Aur baba ne Nadini ko apni god me uthaya.Aur pyaar se chummi di. Nandini pure 21 saal ki ho gai. Baba : Nandini,ab tuh pure 21 saal ki ho gai hai.Aur do saal me doctor bhi ban jayegi.Main chahta hoo ki tum bahoot badi doctor bane.Aur marijo ki sewa kare.Bus yehi maine aur teri ma ne sapna dekha tha tere liye. Aur usi raat Nandini Colonel verma se shadi karke aashirwad lene aayi thi.Aur baba ne use darwaje se hi lauta diya tha.Baba: Yeh tune galat kiya Nandini.Main tumhare shadi ke khilaaf nahi hoo.Lekin dr banane ke baad bhi toh tum shadi kar sakti thi na?lakin ab main tumhara chehera zindagi bhar nahi dekhunga. Aur baba ne apni beti ko dhukar diya.Apni beti jiske liye unhone sape dekhe,jiske liye woh ped ki ghani chhav banana chahte the.Usi apne ghar ki Laxmi ko dehlij se hi bida kar diya unhone.Bina use aashirwaad diye. Present. Baba ne pari ko dekha bahoot pyaar se fir soch me pad gaye.meri beti thi Nandini.Use pyaar se bhi samaza sakta tha na main?Agar pyar se samazata toh maan jati woh.Apnee padhai jari rakhti.Lekin maine kya kiya?apni pari jaisee beti ko puri duniya me anath banake chhod diya.Fir kabhi mudkar nahi dekha,uske bareme nahi socha.Woh jinda hai ya mar gai nahi dekha. Kitna patthar dil ho gaya tha,ki apni beti ki maut ka matam manane bhi nahi gaya.Baap sabse jyada pyaar apni beti se karta hai lekin maine kya kiya?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2 Baba soch me dub gaye,"Muze kyon apni poti ko dekhne ki,milne ki ichha nahi hui?Kya usko meri god me aane ka haq nahi tha?Uske nanhe hath,paav kitne taraste honge apne nana se milne ke liye? Kyon maine us se milne ki koshish ki nahi?usne apni maa ko toh bachpan me kho diya,lekin main toh tha na?agar main apna guroor chhodkar us se milne chala jata toh kya jata mera?Ab in sabme us masoom ki kya galti thi?Woh toh masoom,sab baat se anjaan thi na?fir kyon?usne bhi toh kabhi muze pukara hoga na?Anji jab apne nana ke ghar jati hogi ya toh uske nana aate hoge tab Nidhi ke dil pe kya bitti hogi? Aur agar Ashutosh aur Nidhi me pyaar ka rishta nahi banata toh kya main Nidhi ko dhundneki koshish karta?nahi,kabhi nahi.Ab such main muze aisa lagta hai ki maine Nandini ke saath saath Nidhi ko bhi anyay kiya hai. Main Ashu ka baba humesha bana raha lekin Nidhi ka nana kabhi nahi ban paya. Aur tabhi Pari uth gai.Usne baba ko dekha aur usne aisee khubsurat hansi di par nana ko.Baba ne use sine se lagaya aur bole,"main tumhe tumhari ma ke aur nani ke hisse ka bhi pyaar doonga,taki Nandini muze maaf kare aur nidhi bhi." Tabhi Nidhi Pari ki aawaz sunkar wahaa aayi.Aur baba ne uske sur par haath rakha aur b ole,"Nidhi,tumhe jab meri jaroorat thi,tab main tumhare saath nahi reh saka.Uske liye muze maaf kar do?please.I am sorry,Nidhi. Aur unke aankhose aasoo behene lage. Hope you all like it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Emotional os , love it so much as u have selected a topic which no ff writer in the forum not even thought to write
you are great alka




like it so much as it shows the baba and beti relationship very well
want see your next update soon
thank u very much for making loving os like this

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ariyadasa

Emotional os , love it so much as u have selected a topic which no ff writer in the forum not even thought to write
you are great alka




like it so much as it shows the baba and beti relationship very well
want see your next update soon
thank u very much for making loving os like this

thank you ariya for your appreciation.The forum is too thanda yaar.so afraid to post anything
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great post! 👏
This part never happened in ktlk. Nice to see you tried to bridge that gap.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Once again a nice OS. A very sensitive thought, BB's self-realization on seeing Nidhi and Ashu's that he had been unfair to his daughter and grand-daughter is nicely described. Very simple apology but very heart felt and an attempt to make amends.

Honestly these are the type of subtle emotional scenes between all the relations that we wanted to see so badly in the show. Thanks Alka. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kritika4ever

Great post! 👏
This part never happened in ktlk. Nice to see you tried to bridge that gap.

thanks kritika 4 ever for the appreciation.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aardhan

Once again a nice OS. A very sensitive thought, BB's self-realization on seeing Nidhi and Ashu's that he had been unfair to his daughter and grand-daughter is nicely described. Very simple apology but very heart felt and an attempt to make amends.

Honestly these are the type of subtle emotional scenes between all the relations that we wanted to see so badly in the show. Thanks Alka. 😳

Aardhan,thank you very much.I missed all this simple but sweet memories in ktlk.I wanted to ralize BB that what he done in his life?but in ktlk too he never opolise officially or said sorry to Nidhi at all
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very emotional OS. Alkaji. Baba,s emotions very well depicted.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful Os indeed Alkaben. 👏👏👏👏👏👏 Both parts are mind blowing... Loved them so much!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I always wished to see Nana-Naatin bond in ktlk. I love Ashu-BB relationship but at some point, I wished BB should realize that he had been unfair to Nandiniji and to Nidhi in particular. Ur OS gave those scenes that KTLK show never did!! Thank you very very much. 🤗

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