KTLK FF:[TH:1] Mere Jeewan Saathi- Chp-6 Pg-117 - Page 19

Originally posted by: sss97

loved the chapter review later😊

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

Lovely chap Aazeen!👍🏼.

-- Thank u Deepali di... (Sorry, I didn't know, that u are elder to me)

Filled with emotional moments, fun , joy , tiffs😆

--Thanx... I hope, I've covered all the relavant emotions there...

Nidhi's frnds n the way they tease her was nicely brought out . The way they used "Ashuji" playfully was adorable😊

-- I guess, that is what friends are for... Unless they turn the bride/groom completely insane with their antics, their roles are not fulfilled...😆

The Ashu Nidhi phone convo , the way Ashu makes her confess her love admist all her frnds was cute!

-- Thank u... I'm learning to put various Ashni scenes in different mannners...😆
the I love U part was a call for a moment... N what better to make it in a light manner...

The Nidhi Dadi convo was emotional , managed to touch quite a few chords!

-- Oh! Thanks a lot... I thought, you guys would fuss over me, for unnecessarily putting some scenes... But, I felt, that bond was somewhere missing to be shown between Nidhi n her Dadi...

The Sangeet was filled with fun , the songs quite apt for evry character of ur story .

-- Thanx a lot... Again, many songs in one chap... Anyways, I felt the need to put them, so did it...

U didn't miss the mehndi wala part either😆. I thot u were going to make Ashu look for his name in Nidhi's mehndi😆. But ur Ashni r diff so Ashu ended up praising Nidhi n her mehndi!

-- Yeah! I've included the Mehendi part too...
Finding name in mehendi, I think, was meant after wedding...😆
n yes, bcoz they are different this time, he ended up praising his lady n the mehendi...

The wedding part shows all the rituals , from jaimala , phreras ,, bidai nd finally greh pravesh!

Fitting everything into one chap must hv been quite a task for u😕.

-- True...😆 It was actually a task putting all the major rituals in one...😆 But, I was adamant to put them all in one... I really did not want to extend any more updates on the wedding...


Anyways thanks for not cutting short the grand Ashni wedding😃!

-- can say, I did it for u...😆 I tried being justified at both the ends... By Not cutting it too short and not keeping it too long... So, ended up with this...

Originally posted by: sshirley

Hey Aazeen,
-- Hi Shirley... Congo on becoing the Dotw this time...

Beautiful chapter - loved the subtle romance most of all.

-- Thank you so much dear... And loving the subtle romance I write... Thanx a lot...

Liked the hen party. Loved the way, girls saw and ogled at ashu's pics, ashu's call at that moment was like sone pe suhaaga,

Hehhe...😆 I wanted some fun in that... So who better than the Banno ki sahelis ogling over their Jeeja ji... I'v done that once...😆 I really admire, one of my close friend's hubby... I've been complimenting her abt such a handsome hubby, right from the day she got married, n asked her to promise me, that she won't ever tell him about this😆😆😆... Uske alaawa, I've never ogled on anybody's pati...

and ashu's immediate concern on hearing abt the hen;s party, regarding what they drink - nice touch.

-- Thank u... I don't know, why I put that scene, but anyways I do that...


then liked the way ashu makes her the butt of jokes before her friends by making her say i love you loudly. so this ashu is naughty p- i like it.

-- 😆 Indeed he is a naughty one... But, that wasn't intentional... He wanted to get that ILU from her by hook or crook... Becoming a joke among her friends, was the by-product of their conversation...😆😆

And Rohan joke on ashu - my god...lolzzz

-- I know...😆😆😆... Sach bataaoon, that was a real incident, that one of my cousin did to my other cousin on his wedding... That too had happened in the month of May some 10 years back...😆😆

Liked nidhi-dadi scene

-- Thank u... That was to show their bond...

Liked the mehndi and sangeet - song selection really good

-- Ismein sirf 2 songs were my own selection, baaki toh aap logon ki meherbani hai...😆😆😆
But thanx anyways...

So, neets wants rohan's no. - kya baat hai?

--Samjha kijiye na... Another story coming up...😆

the baarat and shaadi song were really good - very apt songs and v. well writtn concise weding... l

-- Thank u so much... One was the most demanded song, taare hain baarati... So I did go for it... N chori-chori is a song, I've so loved to put it there...

lekin yaar lage haathon sr bhi isi ch. me de dete

-- It had been quite late at night when I finished writing it... I had loads of work for the morning, n by gym trainer had already exausted me with the workout with machines...
Writing SR meant to sit for some more time, that too, for something that I never wrote...
I needed some strength to write it... Why to mess up things in a jiff, so thot to avoid writing it...

- chalo koi nahi will wait for next chapter.

-- Waise iski guarantee nahi h, ke I'll give SR in the next update...😆

this ff is coming out quite well, aazeen.

-- Oh! Thank u... U'r finding it good, when the actual story hasn't even started...😆😆😆
But thank u anyways...

Originally posted by: deepali.rock

Aazu down with fever due to throat infection and tonsils..feeling very weak..fri ko ye prac khatam hue aur sat se beemaar hun..writing it to let u knw ki main waada khilafi nhi kar rhi..

Originally posted by: swati62

Loved this chapter. Waiting for the next.