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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
When is the next update?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chap 7 part 1 Nidhi was standing near the window and remembering all that movments which she spend with Ashutosh.woh udas thi aur dil ke kone me kuchh khali pan tha.Ashutosh se woh peheli mulakat aur fir ashu ne use kahaa tha."Akeli mere saath dar toh nahi lagega na?" and she smiled.Baba was watching her each and every moment carefully.He put his hand on her shoulder.Baba,"Nidhi,yeh kya ho gaya hai tumhe?kabhi udas ho jati ho,kabhi hansne lagi ho.What's wrong with you? Nidhi: kuchh nahi baba ,woh toh bas aise hi. Baba: woh Nidhi hume Medical camp ki arrangments karni hai toh tumne ka socha hau uske bareme? Nidhi: baba,aapko fikar karneki jaroorat nahi hai.Humne doctors se contact kar liye hai.Kuchh specialist doctors bhi aaneke liye raji ho gaye hai.Aur fir tents aur baki sari arrangments aaj raat tak ho jayenge.Main Anji,Armaan aur sare dosto ne milkar arrangments kar liye.Baki kaam toh hum sab karhi lenge.Lekin aap,Papa aur solanki uncle ko bus dhyan rakhna padega ki kisiko koi shikayat ya unconvience na ho. London raat ke 12 baje. Ashutohs neend me tha aur uske ghar ki bell baji aur yahaa uske mobbile ki bhi.Ashutosh ne phone uthaya aur darwaja khola toh Courier wala tha jo parcel lekar aaya tha.Usne sign kiya aur fir phone bhi uthaya.phone nidhi ka tha.Nidhi: Happy Birthday to you dr Ashutosh." Ashutosh shocked,"Nidhi,tumhe kaise pata chala?"Nidhi,"Dr Ashutosh,aapko pata hai na baba,violin,Ph.D." Ashu:OK lekin gift? Nidhi: kholke toh dekhiye.Aap jab yahaa the tabhi maine bhej di thi taki aapko aaj ke din mile yeh gift." Ashutosh ne gift khola aur dekha toh usme ek sundar aur sobber ghadi thi.Jispe likha tha,"Humara achha samay aayega.Tab tak yeh ghadi uska intejaar karne me aapki madad karegi.Happpy Birthday to you,Dr Ashutosh." aur ashu ki aankhe bhar aayi.Usne nidhi ko phone lagaya.Ashutosh: Nidhi,Thank you so much.I am very very happy."Nidhi: welcome dr Ashutosh.Achha main phone rakhti hoo." Ashutosh: asie kaise?tumne muze aadhi raat ko jagaya toh uska kuchh toh fayada hona chahiye na? Nidhi: Abhi muze jaroori kaam hai,main aapse baad me baat karti hoo."Ashutosh: Lekin kyon Nidhi?bus muze tumse abhi baat karni hai." Nidhi:achha,theek hai boliye." Ashutosh: Nidhi,kya tum muze miss karti ho? Nidhi: ha!main aapko miss karti hoo.Bahoot hi jyada miss karti hoo. Ashutosh: Haa!mere aane ka intejaar karti ho? Nidhi: ha bilkul karti hoo.Roj din ginti hoo. Ashutosh: ab batao,mere bareme kya sochti ho? Nidhi: bus yahi sochti hoo ki aap agar mere pas hote toh kitna achha hota. Ashutosh: Matlab ki tum muze apne pas rakhna chahti hoo.Dur jane dena nahi chahti.Matlab ki main jitna tumhe miss karta hoo tum bhi karti ho right? Tabhi Nidhi ko baba ne aawaz di," Nidhi,kahaa ho tum,yahaa aao jaldi se." Aur Nidhi ne phone kaat diya.
Edited by alkaparmart - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 2 Ashu ne baba ko phone kiya," baba,kaise hai aap? aur sab theek hai na wahaa? Baba: theek hai,haa Hapy birthday beta.woh main bhul gaya ki aaj tumhara janamdin hai. Ashutosh: Baba,wahaa sab kaise hai? Baba: baki sab toh theek hai,lekin Nidhi kuchh badli badli si lag rahi hai.Pata nahi kyon?kabhi udas ho jati hai kabhi hansne lagti hai.Akele akele chand ko dekhti reheti hai maine puchha lekin muzse kuchh nahi keheti hai. Ashutosh: Baba,aapse ek baat kahoo?aap Nidhi aur Anji ko samzate kyon nahi ki woh aage MS keliye apply kare.Unka career achha ho jayega baba. Baba: maine toh Nidhi se kahaa tha lekin usne muze kahaa ki jabtak is hospital me doctors nahi aa jate,main kahi nahi jaoongi,aur Anji ab rangnath se dur jane se rahi.Pagal hai Nidhi.Abhi yehi dekh lo.Har mahine me teen deen Ananadnagar me Medical camp rakhti hai.Sare marijo ka free me check up hota hai.Na jane kahaa kahaa se specialist bulake lati hai.Lekin gaav ke liye apna best duty deti hai. Ashutosh was quite impressed with that."Theek hai na baba.chalo fir baat karenge baba.Apna khayal rakhiye ga." Raat ko Ashutohs ne phone kiya aur bola,"video calling on karo" Nidhi ko dekhte hi ashu ne puchha,"kaisee ho meri angel? Nidhi:kya angel? Ashtuosh: Haa,kyonki jo kaam tum kar rahi ho woh toh koi angel hi kar sakti hai.Muze yaad kar rahi thi na? Nidhi: nahi toh. Ashutosh:zuthbolne ki koshish kyon karti ho?tumhare peechhe pillow par meri tasweer hai.Matlab tum muze bahooot yaad karti ho na? Nidhi: dr Ashutosh pata nahi lekin main aapko aapke janeke baad bahoot yaad karti hoo.Aapke barme baba ne muze bataya tha lekin aapse milne ke bad personally jaan ne ke baad muze pata chala ki Ashutosh: Ki main heartstone hoo? Aur dono hansne lage. Pura ek mahina beet gaya ashu ko gaye hue.Ashutosh aur nidhi ka bandhan majboot hote ja raha tha.Woh ab ek dusrese khulke baat kar sakte the.Aur fir ek din Nidhi ne ashu se kahaa,"Jaldi aayiye na please,I am missing you more than anythng dr ashutosh" Ab Ashutosh bechain ho gaya.
Edited by alkaparmart - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
sorry Alka for the late reply you are too good as u are updates are so fast because of that i had to read the 4 , 5 , 6 together

love the concept as their were some of the similarities with real KTLK but some feels totally different specially the way you bring the bond of Ashu and Nidhi

love some of the hospital incidents really loving

after all i got fear when u introduced Mallika but feel you may use Malika in your style not in KP style 😆

waiting to see the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Loving the story. Pl cont soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely concept alka ji...read all parts in one go...loved Nidhi's character-truly representing today's young generation. Baba purposefully made Ashutosh to visit India for two days? Loved Ashu's transformation. All generous people bundled in one place. would love to see what happens next?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Enjoying this OS alka ben. really very cute. Ashu ko wapas le aao kahi mallu pakad na le😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: ariyadasa

sorry Alka for the late reply you are too good as u are updates are so fast because of that i had to read the 4 , 5 , 6 together


love the concept as their were some of the similarities with real KTLK but some feels totally different specially the way you bring the bond of Ashu and Nidhi

love some of the hospital incidents really loving

after all i got fear when u introduced Mallika but feel you may use Malika in your style not in KP style 😆

waiting to see the next update

thanks ariya.For me mallu is truely usless.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: swati62

Loving the story. Pl cont soon.

thanks swati,Monday morning pakka
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pansy123


Lovely concept alka ji...read all parts in one go...loved Nidhi's character-truly representing today's young generation. Baba purposefully made Ashutosh to visit India for two days? Loved Ashu's transformation. All generous people bundled in one place. would love to see what happens next?

thanks pansy,everything will be very good and read the next chap

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