os Missing my mine.kerala trip page 3 - Page 4

Loved it . It's do beautiful. Pls continue soon.

Very beautiful Alka ji ,loving it,wish show mein bhi Nidhi ko yeh sab kehte hue dikhate Asu ji se ya aisi diary hi dete Nidhi ki Ashu ji,ko,,unka reaction dekhne ki bahut ichcha ho rahi haui,specially after reading this os,please continue

Originally posted by: alkaparmart

Part 2:kerala trip ki

Wow u refreshed memories of kerala track beautifully.. u know i always find reading more engrossing and touching thn watching it playing on TV or big screen! AAh.. once an avid reader always a reader.. nothing can b more satisfying thn a nice little romantic story of luv!

Baba ke pas aaye the woh mera haath mangne.Lekin maine bhi unhe nakar diya.Dil ko kaise sambhal pai yeh toh main hi janati hoo.Apne pyaar ko apne se dur jate dekhna kitna takleef deta hai yeh koi muzse puchhe?hey bhagwan, tu muze meri mohobbat de de.Tab maine faisla kiya ki main Dr Ashutosh ko is zuthe rishto ki ummeed se aazaad kar dungi.Unki ummeede tod ne ka faisla kiya maine. Aaj humne ekdusrese humesha ke liye bichhad ne ka faisla kiya.Lekin maine ek wada apne aapse bhi kiya,Ki kuchh bhi ho jaye,main shadi nahi karoongi.Mere dil par dr Ashutosh ke alawa kisi aur ki dastak nahi hogi.Mere dil par dimag par aur ruh par wohi naam rahega.Main unse itna pyaar karti hoo ki shayad ab main kisi aur ko woh haq na de paoo.Us din mera hausla tut gaya.Tabhi dil kiya ki kahi jaoo aur jor jor se ro padu.Ya apni jaan de du!ek tu na mila sari duniya mili bhi to kya hai? lekin ek beti ka pyaar bich me aa gaya.

---👏such suffering of a daughter and a lover!

Dr Ashutosh ne woh panne padhe.Un panno me unke pyaar ki har dastaan thi.Nidhi apne dil me kitne toofan leke jeeti hai?humne kya kya nahi sahaa hai apne pyaar ko pane ke liye?aur aaj,kya main suchmuch apni jimmedari se chuk gaya.Woh Nidhi,jo chhoti si chhoti batome muzse khush ho jati thi,aaj andar hi andar ghut jati hai?kyn?Nahi yeh theek nahi hai.Yeh toh pyaar ki tauheen hai.

i luv this subtle quality of nobleness in luv.. Luv certainly makes a person a bttr human being.. a lot cud;ve been lost to understand had thr not been luv of this other kind!😳

Ashutosh . Nidhi,"main bahoot khush hoo ji.Bus muze aap mil gaye aur main khil gai.I love you too.

His Nidhi is really cool.. choti choti batoon se hi khush ho jaati hai!😳 Is really lucky to have such a wife!😆 Hope you like it

Originally posted by: rrdsu

just read the first part..Alkaben..very beautiful writing...will read second part in little bit..thank u..

thanks heena,waiting for your comment

Originally posted by: pansy123

Kahan tak suney gi raat kahan tak sunayen ge hum,
Shikwey saarey sabb aaj tere rubaruu karain..

Very nice alka ji. Loved it

thanks pansy for liking and commenting

Originally posted by: aardhan

The second part was equally beautiful. You have brought to life Nidhi's anguish in Kerala. You used the same images that we say in the show and explained from her POV. Your writing this time felt like poetry Alka. Just loved it.

Poor Ashu, was so affected by this. It was the first time that he realized how much pain and loneliness Nidhi hid from him. For the first time he understood how difficult the Kerala separation was for her. And her current anguish because he is so busy. Loved his response, loved how he wanted to make up for it. Loved that he did not show that he had read her dairy but was acting on it to give Nidhi's the happiness she craved for, just spending time with him was all that she wanted.

Very touching Alka, superb. Please continue to write this, explain some other parts too, like what Nidhi went through after Mallika took Ashu away at night to play the violin and she was left crying, or what she went through when Mallika tore those photos or he combed her hair...

This is a love story through letters, I am loving it.

thanks aardhan for your lovely comment.And yes i am planning to inclue that incident too.Thanks for pointing out.

Originally posted by: sonyjknum

Very beautiful Alka ji ,loving it,wish show mein bhi Nidhi ko yeh sab kehte hue dikhate Asu ji se ya aisi diary hi dete Nidhi ki Ashu ji,ko,,unka reaction dekhne ki bahut ichcha ho rahi haui,specially after reading this os,please continue

yes sony,we missed it in real ktlk.Thanks.I will continue it soon

Originally posted by: achiever

Chalo diary ne kaam kardiya..

to ab ek kerala trip to banta hai .. alkaji.. 😛

thanks a bunch achiever for this lovely comment.And yes i will write a romantic os about kerala track.But before that i want to write nidhi's pain in mallika's track.And yes,pyaar insaan ko achha bana deta hai

Awesome story Alkaben... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Super duper like!! Nidhi's pain, her feelings have been depicted very very nicely once again... Loved it absolutely!! ❤️

Many a times I have read ppl saying that Nidhi never cared for Ashutosh and ditched him for her family in Kerala😡 and KPji never showed anything for Nidhi's pov that how and what she felt while taking such a big decision... Your OS says it all that Nidhi should have said and Ashu should have heard from her...

Amidst all her pain, she is happy that Ashutosh has survived such a grave accident and is able to walk again. But the very next meoment, she recalls her promise to her father: Ladki hoo na?baba ko aur DB ko bhi toh dukhi nahi dekh sakti.😭😭😭😭😭😭

Kearla aa to gai lekin lagta hai dil aur dimag Lucknow me bhul ke aa gai.Unko bahoot yaad karti hoo.Unki fikar karti hoo.Dil ke dard ko kaise sahoo?😭😭😭😭😭😭

Wherever she looks, she finds Dr. Ashutosh... She regrets for causing him so much emotional turmoil and considers herself guilty... pehele se hi duniya ne unhe itne dard diye.Abhi toh sambhale the aur maine unhe ek aur dard de diya.Main unke pyaar ke kabil nahi hoo. 😭😭😭😭😭😭

Baba ke pas aaye the woh mera haath mangne.Lekin maine bhi unhe nakar diya.Dil ko kaise sambhal pai yeh toh main hi janati hoo.Apne pyaar ko apne se dur jate dekhna kitna takleef deta hai yeh koi muzse puchhe?hey bhagwan, tu muze meri mohobbat de de.Tab maine faisla kiya ki main Dr Ashutosh ko is zuthe rishto ki ummeed se aazaad kar dungi.Unki ummeede tod ne ka faisla kiya maine.

maine ek wada apne aapse bhi kiya,Ki kuchh bhi ho jaye,main shadi nahi karoongi.Mere dil par dr Ashutosh ke alawa kisi aur ki dastak nahi hogi.Mere dil par dimag par aur ruh par wohi naam rahega.Main unse itna pyaar karti hoo ki shayad ab main kisi aur ko woh haq na de paoo.


kya har pyaar ka anjaam yahi hota hai?kya pyaar sirf adhura rhehene ke liye hota hai?pyaar ko manzil milne me itni takleefe kyon hoti hai?Agar aaj bhagwan muzse kuchh mangne ke liye kahe toh main yahi kahoo,"Muze mera pyaar wapis do warna meri sase hi chheen lo."


👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Very very nice and touching story... brought tears in my eyes... so well narrated... Loved how Ashu got to read Nidhi's diary and realized Nidhi's agonies also... Loved how he wanted to make up for it... by offering Nidhi what she always wanted: spending time with him. ❤️ And Nidhi's response: Bus muze aap mil gaye aur main khil gai. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️