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i think ur chapter 6 answers lot of questions and logically.. and finallly i can connect allt he dots..😳 at least regarding Nidhi.. i think everyhing rolled her over over a period of time and thts wat made her slowly go into shell i think her suffering was worse thn Ashu.. ashu dealt with blows Nidhi dealt with slow death!👏
i think this is brilliant part of this story.. hats off to have come up with this idea and story! Wen it comes to a gripping story.. u nail it every time!👏 U mst write dramas! U r born to write thm!😳
and finally finally Ashu realizing his grave.. grave mistakes of judging her as a lifeless soulless being!😳 Bt nidhi didnt make her life look as miserable as he had made it!
and u turned the tables and justified his lust with addiction.. i was beginning to think wat he is.. does he not even stop to think its repurcussions on Nidhi however vindictive he mite b!😆 He seemed human bt he acted like a lech!😆
I luved ur thot behind putting the aftereffects of tht long happened incidents tht r still haunting her now! well thot of!👏
and luved the changeover of Ashu..
lesson learned.. dont stress ur brain on ur story.. as u will definitely connect all the dots in the end logically and flawlessly!😆 something surely was missing in previous chapters.. its falling into place slowly.. at least both character's stance r justified... bt still Ashu has lot to do..
bt he is starting at the right point now.. and he is finally trying to "see" Nidhi.. register her reactions..thts encouraging for this rship!
I luv BBQ Nation!
I luved his convesation tactic!😆
okay overall good going.. ur stories neednt need to b dissected at every chapter.. bt analysed as a whole!
u have deep insight of situations, ppl's pysche, and a grt brain to churn out beautiful dramatic stories!
thnk u for this FF..
please a request dont upload soon!! I guess me the only one who is telling this.. bt really need a few days brk to catch up with ur story as well as with other FFs too!
i think it wudnt make sense if one rushes on with the story jst to know wat happens nxt without relishing on the flavor and the msg tht the chapter want to relay!
okay i have said tht.. i hope i wont b booted for tht!😆
c ya!
chalo a fine brk till u update ur nxt chapter!😳
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everyone is eager to jump on judging someone characterless at drop of hat.. if thy cud only see wat thy r inside!
.. the goodboy Ashu took his wife on a date... hmm.. missed turags's usual touch of gestures... like, 
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