SFL {Th:2}Chap 12 parts 1 & 2 pg42 updtd 9/1/13 - Page 26

Originally posted by: suku_07

Wonderful update Anu ji... Its good to see you back and you not only back but back with bang of course !!

Thank you

😳

You made up for your absence with the two super AWESOME updates, great!

Nahin it was not two updates. It was one very long update, but I had to post it in two parts.😳

Poor Ashni, what an adventurous start to their marriage, first Komal, then Purab and lock up and then a fight...

Liked the way both comforted each other in just 2 mins and then were ready to face the world... Lolz Nidhi is really a kid, loved her reaction on seeing Komal for the first time in her house and their banter that followed.. Lolz both are hardcore Shakespeare fan 😉 Poor Ashu, phir ek bachchi mil gayi 😉

Marriages need to have a bit of adventure! Nahin? Otherwise things get boring.😆

I am planning to do more with Komals Character. I think that differents characters add spice to a story, and keep in interesting.😃 And I am a hard core SHakespeare Fan. Akhir apna stamp toh story mein lagana chahiye na.😳

Well, it was really nice to see Manny and Amy together... Nothing in this world can beat a true and old friend !! BTW this Manny is too cute... But what i am enjoying the most is Rohan's role in this FF, I am liking Ashu's dependence and trust on him. Its really going to be very difficult for Purab this time...

I agree. Nothing is sweeter than old friends. I recently hooked up with a few friends whom I have not had any contact with in about 28 years. It was amazing. Bachpan yaad aa gaya.

And Purab is going to regret that he ever took pangas with Hamare Ashman.😉 Wait and see in the next update.😉

Back at home this was nice to see Ashni's second but actually first fight after marriage... It again showed Nidhi's maturity level and Ashu's stubborn attitude.. Loved how Nidhi gave him back... But the best part of this FF was Ashu singing for his ruthi hui bride, it was so cute... Armaan is his best buddy actually !! It was a nice reception followed by the sizzling hot session in night. OMG, this was BEST!

Ab I have to try and keep the original character intact a little bit, yes? Show mein bhi toh Nidhi is shown as very mature and responsible, when need be. Is liye I did not want to deviate from that. And Ashuji as always, stubborn to a fault. But then just as quick to try and make up. And what is a make up in newly weds other than some hot and happening romance.😳

LOLz this Nidhi is really priceless what a question Nidhi woh bhi on her second night... Bravo... Poor Ashu... Beware Ashu yeh Nidhi kuch alag hai 😉

Kitni alag, yeh also will be revealed as the story unfolds.😃 Just wait and watch. Abhi toh shuruaat hai Mam.😉

Eagerly waiting for next update !!

Working on it.😃

Originally posted by: anjalini

Hi,

Welcome back Anu,with a wonderful, super long,superfluous update.👍🏼

Loved it every bit,especially your hand on humor! I swear I read it full 2 parts at one go and it was exhausting but enjoyable at the same time.Look Anu I am hanging out here only to read your stories and have not ventured to start reading any new FFs or anything on any forum. I would request you to Plz give subsequent updates of all your FFs fast and help me abstain from my addiction.

Love,

Anju. 😃

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Purab has hit them major way.

Yep But Ashuji kam nahin hain. Next update will tell.😃

If not for Manny and his sister AshNi would have landed in a embarrassing situation with the party in the evening.

Yes, Ashni would have been in a pickle. But you know what they say. Pata nahin kab kaun kiss samay, kiss mod par mil jaye. Well Manny proved to e godsent, and his sister, well ...there is more to come.😉

They are just lucky to come out of that situation. They have not estimated the trouble coming in the form of Purab well.😔

I think that, for right now at least, I will let AshNi have a break from Purab. Later on he will make a re-entery.😉 So next update mein I will finish this drama, and let Ashutosh and Nidhi go on their Honeymoon peacefully.😳

But knowing Ashu's position, how is Purab willing to take that risk?😕

He is a psycho.😆 Thought he was too clever. More to his story also...but that is for later.😃

But Ashu is not bothered what others think...the way he was holding her in front of Manny and his jid before reception.😉

Yes This Ashu is not afraid to show his affection and love for his wife.😳

Nidhi is swinging between her childishness & innocence to matured woman who bothers about her family & friends.😊

Yes, I always liked that aspect of his nature. Able to deal with the serious, and at the same time is innocent enough to enjoy the delights that life has to offer.😃

You have tried humor in this update and it is too good. Ammy & Manny and Komal...👏

I am so glad you liked the Humor. I am never sure how it will come out. And abhi Manny and Komal are not done yet. More to come.😃

Their fight is very romantic this time...Ashu is only thinking about sleeping on Sofa and Armaan is also scaring him about that...😆

Ab agar a husband of one night has to sleep on the sofa, toh phir toh sochne ki baat hai na, koi bhi dar jayega, uski jagah. Nahin? and Arman is Arman we all know and love him. How can he reform. He has to tease Ashutosh. Nahin toh uska khaana kaise pachega?😆

Their moonlight lit night and Nidhi's questions...☺️

Haan par abhi Ashutosh ka jawab baaki hai. That is at the start of the next update. I can guarantee it will have you o the floor with laughter.

Thank you for such a looong update...

YO ARE WELCOME😃

Originally posted by: ssktlk

Hi Anu,

Great to see you back after long. Missed u sooo much. Loved both updates as always. After a long gap also your story flows so flawlessly, hats off to you. Absolutely love the humor in this ff. Ha ha, Ashu says he ended up with the queen of loonies🤣

Can't wait for the next update. Hope u re feeling better now.

Originally posted by: suku_07

Arre you give updates at your own sweet time, no problem at all...Health and work comes first 😛 but please don't leave the forum 😆... we all love you a lot... and for updates they can surely wait 😛

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Delighted to see you online...😊

Originally posted by: Anjani9

How is your health now???

Originally posted by: Libra

Awww!😳

Thanks, I love all you guys a lot too.😃