AshNi OS#14: Nazar Se Nazar Miley(Completed) - Page 4

Thanks for the lovely update Ana

Good one...do come up with more os...

Ana you are a very good writer with a very good imagination...single line appreciation might be a bit too dissapointing...but let me tell you personally i hve loved your each and every work till now. i am a bit not so well in expressing in words as i would like to...may be bec of my profession...

Hi ana,

first of all accept my apologies for being extremely late. Wasnt well and then things kept popping up. And then today being a holiday i came here and saw that the last part has been posted.

Coming to your work, hats off to you yaar. The way you handled the story was commendable. Your writings, concepts impart a freshness, a new flavour. Your style is just too good and i mean it.

Starting from ashu nidhi first meet to their budding relationship, it was a very beautifully portrayed journey.

Their starting as friends was really adorable. Nidhi, true to her word is a true friend apart from being a wonderful human being. Her optimism even has a positive affect on ashu. This nidhi reminds me of my very own best friend. You refreshed so many memories through this part.

Ashu is a sweetheart. He believes in nidhi as a person, as a friend. His help to nidhi for her assignment was actually great.

Although we as readers already knew that this is gonna be a love story, but ur depiction of this friendship was just fab. I applaud u for that.

Ashu's heartbreak and nidhi helping him out of it was super liked. The maggi funda was actually great. Nidhi's simple, sweet, honest, innocent gestures are enough to take away anyone's heart. Ashu is too lucky to have her.

Volleyball match... This was something different yet very endearing. Nidhi cheering for ashu was thumbs up. Nidhi ashu first hug was so dreamy, and ashu making her wear that shirt was really nice.

Goa trip was fantastic. Finally love strikes. They both have fallen for each other hard time. Awesome trips. Nidhi's friends are nice people.

Finale won. Yippie, our ashu won. And that hug and twirl by the waist was just perfect. Nice progress.

Aah, the prom night. Ashni together, that was what we were waiting for. Their dance and then the confession, everything was just too good. Glad ashu cleared it dat he didnt love radhika infront of nidhi.

And finally the first kiss. Aah, loved it. The setting was awesome. And the proposal also. Thank you for such a wonderful os. And i must say this one has become my favourite too.
Sorry again for the delay.
Now, when are you updating btoomh??

Wow Ana what a completion! You have presenedt your thoughts so beautifully. Through your story you have given a message to youngsters not to fall in love just going on looks or just because one person you are constantly in the company of as was the case with Ashutosh initially with Radhika. You should first try to understand the person well. One has to spend whole life with that person. So caring, sharing, maturity, understanding, depth of love, emotions, ready to stand by you in any circumstances, etc are the indicators to choose that person as your partner. Awesome work.👏👏

Outstanding OS,what a memorable journey!