Jab Koi Baat Bigad Jaaye ch10 p94, epi-p99 - Page 73

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

awesome part cont soon

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

wow that was super romantic story with suspence ka tadka...enjoyed it very much.

Thanks dear - i m glad u enjoyed it

Nidhi's PCO is out in open...needs to be solved and nice preggy track

Come on - mild PCOS hi toh hai

good going.keep it up.

Originally posted by: shreyalvashni

Good going keep it up 👏

Originally posted by: sshirley

Thank you so much.

@bold - oh come on, isn't that understood? Mild PCOS toh hai. 😉😉😉why do you need an epilogue for that

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Originally posted by: lee_Ashni

Great Shirley. Interesting chapter yaar. You are a great writer. Keep writing. You can be a romantic as well as suspense story writer.👏👏👏

Originally posted by: turags

Originally posted by: sshirley

The contest winners are Turags and Aardhan. So, chapter 10 dedicated to you gals

Pl. see the pages 84-90 to know why there are 2 winners.

Congrats to both of you and also to everyone else, who guessed correctly

Thank you everyone for participating in the contest

Originally posted by: turags

First of all Hearty Congratulations on the successful completion of your FIRST FF (yeah i know..Epilogue is still pending...we will be waiting for that but since this is technically the last chapter...)

Thank you dear, this would not have been possible without your encouragement, But more than that, thank you for being my critic. A good critic is most important for a writer.

Epilogue sach me chahiye kya? it's obvious ke epi me kya hoga

I think compared to the rest of the chapters, this one was longer...may be because you wanted to tie up all loose ends and cover all the points in the case...

Yes it was more than 13 pages and yes u r right, i needed to tie up too many lose ends

Personally, i felt Nidhi saying"i killed her" and Ashu saying "no. i killed her" could have been avoided. i understand the circumstances but felt the whole court case should have stuck with Ashu and Solanki defending Ashu...it would have made things more..practical...(hope you don't mind my saying this...just my POV)

I know thoda filmy ho gaya but here can see influence of BR Chopra's dhund. Kya karoon can't help myself such a hopeless case.

@ no way, i look foward to your criticism - so, i m so happy that you told me your POV)

oh..Solanki's change of mind is brought into the story at the correct time...but i wanted to see more scenes where he tries to patch things up with Nidhi and DB also does the same...some emotional convo etc etc...would have loved that...but i understand your need to rush so no complaints...

Good point, but as you urself understand the time crunch. well but, i did show nidhi not forgiving him so easily and Solanki only talked to DB and told her abt ashu's sacrifice and his love for nidhi. given the contrainsts, that was the best i could do

you know shirley, when IK was questioning Ashu about Ashu and Mallika friendship, the way he asked the questions, brought out a lot of questions in my mind too...Mallika proposed Ashu multiple times and he said no multiple times...YET..he remained her friend...somehow that whole concept (in the serial) was something i could not understand...i mean ok she was with him when no one else was there, but...i don't know..that part of Ashu's behaviour is something i probably can never justify...he is too good for his own good and expects the same innate goodness from the opposite person too...

Good point and a point that bothered me a lot too, and what bothered me even more was that the wwriter never even bothered to explain this properly. well, lets leave the show - i have too many complaints if i start you know.. ..

@bold - yes that too, and i feel the other reason his desparate need to cling on to the one constant in his life

i liked the way you brought out Suhasini and how she planned the whole thing...it was not a separate scene or even shown as a flashback..but the way Solanki questioned and Suhasini's replies gave the readers the complete picture of what happened that night...you didn't leave any loopholes in that...

Thank God, i could give a complete picture with only the Q&A.

@Bold - i m so relieved.

and one more thing i noticed that you did very well...you showed the difference in Shyama's way of questioning and Solanki's. Shyama..out of pratice and Solanki more confident and very much in control of the situation...loved the subtle way you showed that...

I knew it! Atleast you and fatima would definitely notice this - i like subtility u know. Although i expected it, still feels good, thanks a lot.

all in all great chapter and a wonderful FF!!

THank you - i take a bow

chaloji...we will wait for your next FF in your next vacation...when is the epilogue going to be posted?

Originally posted by: ariyadasa

😊sshirely you are a brilliant writer too good yarr too good 😊

never mine i loose the game 😆

Thanks a lot dear - such words really make me happy 😃😃

well, game hai toh someone will lose and koi toh jitega but thanks a lot for participating dear

let me ask one question from you sshirely ,are you a lawyer ? as i feel you have handle the court case in a proper manner as there is no space for faults

@red - no, but my parents being in the legal field explains it

• It's really fantastic the court conversation superb dear superb ,
  

Thank you. i take a bow

• How you brought forward the strong bond between Ashni in the courts totally remarkable, when nidi says "i kill Malika" and how Ashu reply for it really emotional

I am so happy u liked it - i was worried it would look filmy

• How you shows Ashu as a really hubby in front of ks and the family members using the word "gem " really applicable for the situation

THank you so much dear

• The way you join the wedding anniversary for the situation shows you as a brilliant writer yarr
  

THANKS AGAIN

• Ending was superb

I m glad you liked it

Total chap impress me a lot i am speechless Fabulous work

👏congrats 👏

Thank you so very much - means a lot to me