wonderful update Anu.. and hope u r doing well now.. didnt know u wer ill.. *shame*.. bt pray u get well soon!😳
DC is one of my favorite story of yours.. and its more emotional thn any of ur stories.. and Nidhi has tht inherent and intrinsic qualities tht every woman possess... i think thts y this Nidhi touches to my heart more thn anyone else.. . she is strong and yet pretty vulnerable wen it comes to luv and relationships.. 😳
Ashu ne accha nahi kiya.. bt wen he realized it was too late! Okay.. i wudnt say he didnt deserve!😈 I hated the whole idea of him talking Nidhi in to this whole contract mrg thing.. watever the reasons mite b.. to get physical is always very hard for any woman without getting emotionally entangled and thn Nidhi was always so emotionally sensitive girl.. he overlooked her this trait in his selfishness..
I wudnt say he did not change.. he changed for better and cud not see Nidhi suffer.. and he fell in luv.. bt it was too late.. u cannot bargain in luv.. he made a mistake.. and wud pay..
and Gosh... u revealed ur storyline.. waise i always knew.. tht the actual confession will not happen and a baby will b born to bring thm together and complicate thr rship and emotions even further..
bt its the way u put things and bring out thr emotions tht attracts me to ur FF
again.. very well written..👏
Edited by achiever - 12 years ago