DESTINY'S COURSE chap 8 parts 1&2 updtd 1/6 page 130 - Page 50

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aru29

It was a great chapter Anu ji ...simply awesome👏⭐️ Time can't make u lose the touch you have with writing...👍🏼

Shall be waiting for the next chapter,pls do update soon😛


Thanks Arushi for the wonderful
Compliment, and your
Applause. I am glad that you liked the chap.😃

Will PM you when I post next update.😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aardhan

Hello Anu, happy new year! 😊


Its wonderful to have you back in our midst, free of all your hardware problems. Hope this unintended time away from IF gave you plenty of time to spend your holidays with your kids and family.

For this chapter, its a good continuation, and I am glad CV illness was not dragged and he passed away a happy man. Seems as if in all this Ashni have forgotten, or atleast seem to have pushed the contract issue to the back burner. They are both genuinely caring for each other's family now and Nidhi was even impressed seeing Ashu look after her father. Overall you have nicely described a tough, emotional situation. Lets see what happens when reality in the form of the ugly truth of the contract hits them in the future. The entire family is in for a rude shock...

Nidhi is acting normal, she is in denial and everyone is worried. So, will she agree to go with Ashu? The solitary kiss they shared seemed to be something that neither could hold back on, so their attraction for each other is or was just too blatant to be ignored. But, after that neither had time nor opportunity to take it forward. And Ashu is even feeling bad thinking he pushed Nidhi too far and has backed off some. Now, they are on the verge of a trip... Nidhi is grieving and Ashu is feeling guilty, how are they going to overcome these feelings and proceed?

Really looking forward to see Ashni pick up where they left off. 😃


Very happy new year Aarti.
Its good to be back. And yes I did get to spend a lot of time with my children. It was a lot of fun.

Thanks for your comments, and you review. Your words are a really big source of encouragement
For me. I really appreciate it.
I am so glad that you liked the update. I will be PMing u a bit later. Want to bounce some ideas off u.
Anyways take care.
Love
Anu


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra


Hi Ena
Yeh kya😲
Mere wapas aate hi mujhe daant diya.😕
Chalo koi baat nahin. I deserved it.
Par yeh toh bataa dete ke mera chap kaisa laga.

And I promise that I will try and post as quickly as I can.😃

apke chapter k ware mein main aur kya kaho!? Sab tarif kar rahe hain to maine thoda dant dia! Happy new year! Really miss u a lot!
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Posted: 12 years ago
the first thing i did wen i realized u wer back was to read this chapter.. this is my most fav FF of urs.. and i really luved the way it progressed.. wud've liked to review in more detail bt my personal agendas for this new year r holding me back.. bt know tht i jst luv ur FFs and plz consider my likes as token of how much i appreciate ur FFs even if i dont put it in words..😳..
once i sort out things at my end.. both with my personal life and my FF.. i will surely come back and comment..😳
and sorry tht i blundered with the virus thing..i laughed at my stupidity so hard...😆😆😆😆..
eagerly waiting for SOL.. my third most favorite..😛 and yeah.. also This Time Forever!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey anu g...

so sorry for being extremely late on this FF...
but you do know i luv your work...dont you???

coming to this FF...in first part, i hated ashu like anything...
he is taking advantage of the situation by asking a girl half her age to marry him and that too a contract marriage...

but as story is progressing, it turning out that he is not that bad...but still...the reason to marry nidhi is not justified at all...

They get married and i really loved how ashu took care of col verma...col verma is satisfied with her daughter choice, not knowing in what mess, she put herself...

ashu n nidhi promised col verma, that they will take care of eachother...but then, ashu's intent to divorce her after the baby...so why did he promised...i get angry once again with him...

nidhi truly put a brave show infront of others when she was breaking inch by inch inside...

n then ashu hide out about col verma's falling health...when nidhi expected a few months with her father...she hardly get few days...

ashu is falling for her slowly but stopping himself thinking about the contract...but have he ever give it a thought how nidhi gonna live afterwards...i mean not many men are willing to marry a woman married once before...

and even then, he kissed her...n she did it back too...

the slowly moving relationship is what i am loving...n i hope, ashu don't do anything as such stupid as he said in contract...

love armaan nidhi's n nidhi anji's bond...they are adorable...

col verma died and nidhi didn't cried at all...poor girl...

i m so feeling sorry for nidhi...as the main aim to get into this contract for her was no longer there but she still has to go with it...

anji bhua, baba armaan n ashu all are worried for nidhi...n there nidhi coming out n saying that she don't wanna go...

CRAP...

i just seriously wish that ashu realize his mistake...

amazing story janab...but i know, as right now i m hating ashu...u will make us love him later on too...

luv you anu g

ana

P.S: sorry for such a hurry reply...but i loved the emotional rollarcoaster in here...muwahh janab
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Posted: 12 years ago


hey anu sorry for late reply

nice chap anu

coming to the chap preview

why ashu behaving impatiently with nidhi ,he have to understand nidhi state of mind

love the way armaan & anji are taking care of nidhi

i was happy with ashu how he tooked care of baba

feeling sorry for nidhi yaar becoz she could not spend more time with her baba

now ashu is slightly started falling in love with nidhi ,but there also he is remembering the contract

i hope soon he will forget the contract & truly fall in love with nidhi ,

i hope nidhi will soon come out from her pain ,becoz now she all alone in this whole word

i know ashu is there for her ,but for now she is all alone


pls anu continue soon next part 😃

which ff you are going to update pls zara wo bhi bata dena 😃


love you

sonali
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra

Thanks Arushi for the wonderful
Compliment, and your
Applause. I am glad that you liked the chap.😃

Will PM you when I post next update.😃


Shall eagerly await ur updates in the rest of ur FF's too...and pls update season of love soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: achiever

the first thing i did wen i realized u wer back was to read this chapter.. this is my most fav FF of urs.. and i really luved the way it progressed.. wud've liked to review in more detail bt my personal agendas for this new year r holding me back.. bt know tht i jst luv ur FFs and plz consider my likes as token of how much i appreciate ur FFs even if i dont put it in words..😳..

once i sort out things at my end.. both with my personal life and my FF.. i will surely come back and comment..😳
and sorry tht i blundered with the virus thing..i laughed at my stupidity so hard...😆..
eagerly waiting for SOL.. my third most favorite..😛 and yeah.. also This Time Forever!!


Hi Manisha
Thanx for the lovely review.
and I really appreciate your taking the time to give
comments on my chap. Glad that you
enjoyed it.😃
I will be updating SFL next, hopefully by saturday morning.😃
Thanks once again
and TC.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_SK

hey anu g...

so sorry for being extremely late on this FF...
but you do know i luv your work...dont you???

coming to this FF...in first part, i hated ashu like anything...
he is taking advantage of the situation by asking a girl half her age to marry him and that too a contract marriage...

but as story is progressing, it turning out that he is not that bad...but still...the reason to marry nidhi is not justified at all...

They get married and i really loved how ashu took care of col verma...col verma is satisfied with her daughter choice, not knowing in what mess, she put herself...

ashu n nidhi promised col verma, that they will take care of eachother...but then, ashu's intent to divorce her after the baby...so why did he promised...i get angry once again with him...

nidhi truly put a brave show infront of others when she was breaking inch by inch inside...

n then ashu hide out about col verma's falling health...when nidhi expected a few months with her father...she hardly get few days...

ashu is falling for her slowly but stopping himself thinking about the contract...but have he ever give it a thought how nidhi gonna live afterwards...i mean not many men are willing to marry a woman married once before...

and even then, he kissed her...n she did it back too...

the slowly moving relationship is what i am loving...n i hope, ashu don't do anything as such stupid as he said in contract...

love armaan nidhi's n nidhi anji's bond...they are adorable...

col verma died and nidhi didn't cried at all...poor girl...

i m so feeling sorry for nidhi...as the main aim to get into this contract for her was no longer there but she still has to go with it...

anji bhua, baba armaan n ashu all are worried for nidhi...n there nidhi coming out n saying that she don't wanna go...

CRAP...

i just seriously wish that ashu realize his mistake...

amazing story janab...but i know, as right now i m hating ashu...u will make us love him later on too...

luv you anu g

ana

P.S: sorry for such a hurry reply...but i loved the emotional rollarcoaster in here...muwahh janab


Hi Ana
thank you so much for this lovey, and long review on my chapter.
I really appreciate it Ana, considering that you are not well
the fact that you tok and time and effort to post this for me
mean a lot. and I love you for it.

Now for your concerns about Ashutosh's character. I know that he has made a mistake
but you will see as the story progresses that he will realize his mistake.
I promise that y the time I am done you will love Ashutosh here in this FF also.
As for them going on the trip, I dont know yet whether they should or not. I will find out myself
when I am penning down the next chap.😳
Thanks for the compliments Ana.

Anu
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for the late post-

I had read it in a hurry and then forgot to write a review( and was a bit lazy too)

I liked the way you have written about Nidhi's grief at the prospect of losing her Dad...and the state of denial she was in after his death.

There was a sexual tension in Ashni's room and the tripping incident intensified it...but CV's condition created a storm in Nidhi's mind...and sent the wrong signals to Ashu.

Loved the way Ashu took care of his dying fil...heartwarming.

Overall a good update..looking forward for SFL update..( and also one for hum ho gaye aapke...want to know about how Nidhi's makeover will create a sensation in Ashni's room)

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