DESTINY'S COURSE chap 8 parts 1&2 updtd 1/6 page 130 - Page 49

Originally posted by: GoodOne

great like always

Anu Aunty, m extremely sorry 4 the delay... Cudn't get back to writing a review 4 the chap... Sorry!

1st of all, tell me one thing,how do u people write with so much flow n u specially in detail 4 the illness part? I myself know, until u feel the pain, it won't come in the writing... A pain to lose ur only support n all... I feel it so heart wrenching... Hats off to u for the detailing and flow with which u wrote...

U've written Nidhi's pain in an outstanding manner... All she wants is to spend every single second with her father, but is caughtt up in those rituals... Awesome! Her attraction towards Ashutosh, n the tension for her father... U've described it very well as to her swinging between different kind of emotions...

Admist all this, U've created a very sweet character- Ashutosh... A man, who had come here after a contract, but is all devoted to his FIL forgetting every other fact... He, taking CV aside during the rituals, lovingly feeding him the soup later, taking care of him, ruuning 4 him at the midst of Night, when he needed him... All in total, playing the role of a son in a complete sense...

Then the intimacy factor, Ashu trying to evade those thots, keeping the contract in mind, on the other hand, getting carried away with her beauty... Undestanding the fact that, she's his wife, n he can go infront of her even in a towel... Awesome!!! But the next moment, waiting to see Nidhi's reaction onto seeing his well shaped up, 6 packed body...

Infact, Nidhi's reactions were priceless seing him in a towel... Oops! These phone calls have turned into 'breaking the strance' factor... Her hesitation later, seeing him, was written very well,...

Ashu after finally making his mind to talk abt her father's health, turned out to be an intimate one... By God! Anu Aunty what a sizzling one... 1 month se gayab hone ka saara quota poora kar diya... Shaandaar!

But, this has made Nidhi quite uncomfortable... Except for her father's topic, she has started avoiding him... Again, she spending almost all the time possible with her father, devoid of all the grief, that she's bottling up, maybe becoz, she cud find no one to be As close as her Father to her, to share her pain...

CV passed away, without much hitches... Heart wrenching... Losing the one n only parent, the only support, the feeling itself broke my heart into pieces... Nidhi, not crying at all is another worrying factor...

Admist all this, a sweet bonding of Ashu n Anji... Very-very cute... Both almost ready to take care of nidhi in the times of crisis, express their love for her...

Ashu deciding to take Nidhi to Mahabaleshwar, to reset her mood, by taking her to her place of sweet memories, beautiful touch!

But ye kya,? Nidhi ne outrightly manaa kar diya... Ab aa gey kya hoga? The suspense remains till u update next...

Updating next se yaad aaya, kitne din ho gaye, I havn't asked u, which ff next... *** Aazeen rubbing her palms in excitement!!!***

ANU AUNTY! WHEN ARE U GOING TO UPDATE NEXT? WHICH FF???

All in total, a fantastic, long, super update...

N m really sorry for so much delay... I guess I must have been the latest one...

Ok, u tc...

Love..

Aazeen...

Wow Anu di , Read your chapter ..it is too good 👏

got back home today and read it immediately. it was too good.

Going off to read chap 4 ...will come with the comments after reading and dinner😛

It was a great chapter Anu ji ...simply awesome👏⭐️ Time can't make u lose the touch you have with writing...👍🏼

Hello Anu, happy new year! 😊

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Anu Aunty, m extremely sorry 4 the delay... Cudn't get back to writing a review 4 the chap... Sorry!

1st of all, tell me one thing,how do u people write with so much flow n u specially in detail 4 the illness part? I myself know, until u feel the pain, it won't come in the writing... A pain to lose ur only support n all... I feel it so heart wrenching... Hats off to u for the detailing and flow with which u wrote...

U've written Nidhi's pain in an outstanding manner... All she wants is to spend every single second with her father, but is caughtt up in those rituals... Awesome! Her attraction towards Ashutosh, n the tension for her father... U've described it very well as to her swinging between different kind of emotions...

Admist all this, U've created a very sweet character- Ashutosh... A man, who had come here after a contract, but is all devoted to his FIL forgetting every other fact... He, taking CV aside during the rituals, lovingly feeding him the soup later, taking care of him, ruuning 4 him at the midst of Night, when he needed him... All in total, playing the role of a son in a complete sense...

Then the intimacy factor, Ashu trying to evade those thots, keeping the contract in mind, on the other hand, getting carried away with her beauty... Undestanding the fact that, she's his wife, n he can go infront of her even in a towel... Awesome!!! But the next moment, waiting to see Nidhi's reaction onto seeing his well shaped up, 6 packed body...

Infact, Nidhi's reactions were priceless seing him in a towel... Oops! These phone calls have turned into 'breaking the strance' factor... Her hesitation later, seeing him, was written very well,...

Ashu after finally making his mind to talk abt her father's health, turned out to be an intimate one... By God! Anu Aunty what a sizzling one... 1 month se gayab hone ka saara quota poora kar diya... Shaandaar!

But, this has made Nidhi quite uncomfortable... Except for her father's topic, she has started avoiding him... Again, she spending almost all the time possible with her father, devoid of all the grief, that she's bottling up, maybe becoz, she cud find no one to be As close as her Father to her, to share her pain...

CV passed away, without much hitches... Heart wrenching... Losing the one n only parent, the only support, the feeling itself broke my heart into pieces... Nidhi, not crying at all is another worrying factor...

Admist all this, a sweet bonding of Ashu n Anji... Very-very cute... Both almost ready to take care of nidhi in the times of crisis, express their love for her...

Ashu deciding to take Nidhi to Mahabaleshwar, to reset her mood, by taking her to her place of sweet memories, beautiful touch!

But ye kya,? Nidhi ne outrightly manaa kar diya... Ab aa gey kya hoga? The suspense remains till u update next...

Updating next se yaad aaya, kitne din ho gaye, I havn't asked u, which ff next... *** Aazeen rubbing her palms in excitement!!!***

ANU AUNTY! WHEN ARE U GOING TO UPDATE NEXT? WHICH FF???

All in total, a fantastic, long, super update...

N m really sorry for so much delay... I guess I must have been the latest one...

Ok, u tc...

Love..

Aazeen...

Originally posted by: saibanu

First of all , Welcome back Anu di ...Missed you too much 😳

Wow Anu di , Read your chapter ..it is too good 👏

Liked the way ashu taking care of Nidhi and her father ...His concern when he asked Col verma whether he is having any pain , any discomfort ..I like this caring Ashu 😳

So now Baba died 😭, Poor Nidhi , it must be very hard for her to cope this loss ...I know ashu will be ter for her but still ...

Waiting for next chapter Anu di ...Please continue soon 😃

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

got back home today and read it immediately. it was too good.

Ashu comforting Nidhi was very sweet ...it was very emotional the way Nidhi took care of cv's hand and hugged him after his death.

was missing your updates badly...hope you are back to stay!🥳

waiting for the next update Anu.