DESTINY'S COURSE chap 8 parts 1&2 updtd 1/6 page 130

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ssss97

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

hi anu

thanks for coming back. Actually feeling gr reading ur chapter update the others soon😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Anu, so glad to see your FF. Hope you are fully well now. Heard you had been to the hospital.All okay with you?

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rayafan17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#443

Just read it - wow as always - nice to have u back.

Nice gradual attraction btw Ashni - sad about her father's early death. Hopefully ashni go on the trip. Waiting for the next update here & also the FF's.

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Swati Mehta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Just read it superb chapter. Missed ur ff so glad u are back.

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sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#445

Hey Anuji,

You are back and saying that you are back with a bang would be an understatement.

There was not a single word in the whole chapter that i didnt like. i just loved how the feelings are developing between AshNi and not only attraction, but the way Nidhi feels when she sees Ashu genuinely caring for and respecting her father was very well brought out.

The kiss was just scintiliating and yet, the way u wrote, very natural under the circumstances.

So, her father passed away contented and peacefully, thankfully u did not drag the death part too much and moved the story forward.

now i m eagerly aawaiting ur next update. and moreover, want to know which ff would u update next?

Waise i hope you remember me - i was a big fan of urs and turags joint ff. Then got busy with my career. got one month free - had thought would have unrestrained fun with ur ffs and commenting and recommenting - but aap toh gayab hi the - no issues i can understand abhi toh bas 5 din aur uske baad will have to stop all this.

And btw, i am writing an ff - jab koi baat bigad jaaye, so pl. read and give honest feedback on that.

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shivani sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#446

Hi Anu, good to have you back 😊. This is my working weekend, will read it at night and comment.

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: Malvika_rajeev
Wow Libra good to have you back...

Nice chapter...post marriage scenes are too cute. And Nidhi's discovery of Ashu's 6 pck Abs...OMG...its quite like whats been shown in the serial right now...Can imagine the scene.

Nidhi's father passed away...And she hasnt cried? nice to take her to Mahabaleshwar...maybe next chapter would be full of *ahem* *ahem* you know what...

Well, nice to have you baclk...

hey Doc

Nice to see your comments on my chap, after a long time.

Thank you for the compliments.

I am very glad that u enjoyed reading it.

Yes I guess, I have to start heating things up a bit in the next chap...😳

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: ruchshah
You are back with a bang!!!!!👏
loved the sheer size of the update!! The kiss was mind-blowing!!!! You wrote it awww too well...So, Col. Verma left as a peaceful n contented man!!! Ashu's interaction with him was heart-warming!!! Nidhi has stopped being participative...hope she doesnot blame herself!!!😕Its rendering to see, that ashu n Nidhi both are attracted to eachother right from meeting each other...hope Nidhi finally is convinced to visit n take a short break!!! Wonder Armaan can use the elder-bro card for this????hope u'll update all your works in the coming days!😭Thanks for the PM! Enjoyed the update!

And thank you so much for the lovely and encouraging comments.

I am glad that the chap came up to your expectations.

I wasn't sure, as I was writing after such a long break.

Anyway.

Thanks once again.

Arman ka elder Bro card, bad mein use hoga. Abhi toh

AshNi need to try an figure it out by themselves.

And yes, I will try and post my updates, as fast as I can.😃

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: ssktlk
Welcome back and Happy New year Anu. Missed you a lottt!!!!. So good to see your chap after so long. After such a long time also you have written it so well, and everything seems so well connected, smooth. Nice to see the gradual physical attraction between Ashni, and how Ashu wanted to keep him himself away from Nidhi but can't. CV's death is very sad and shocking for Nidhi, and I think she is not talking only to Ashu as she feels guilty about their physical advances, is it? Can't wait for your other ffs too and hoping you will make up for the lost time soon.😊

Hi Sanya

A very happy New Year to you also. I missed you guys a lot too,

But one thing after another just kept me from posting.😳

Thankyou so much for the compliments, and also for liking the chap.

I will deffo try to make up for lost time as best as I possibly can.. 😃

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: bc123456
So very glad to have you back after a very long break , hope all is well now , have a wonderful newyear and hope we all greedy forumites get lots of your work to read , the present chapter seemlessly has continued from the last loved ashu - nidhi's attraction to each other , sad about CVs death Nidhi shattered , hope to see her picking up strings of her life again , hope you will update all the Ffs quickly waiting and waiting , but take care of yourself

I Doc

Wish you a happy new year also.

And thank you so much for all the concern that you have shown for my health.

It means a lot to know that I am missed, and worried about.😳

Thanks so much for the comments, I am so glad that u enjoyed the update.😃

I will definitely try and update as quickly as I can.😃