DESTINY'S COURSE chap 8 parts 1&2 updtd 1/6 page 130 - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Ashu and Nidhi's pre-marriage jitters...family's reaction...Shyama and Anji's arrival before marriage...the promises made to CV...Anji's doubts...Ashu and Nidhi's attraction and friendship everything great...including Armaan's and Nidhi's relation...

very eager to know how love will develop between them who will change their decision first...Ashu or Nidhi...and how Nidhi will blend with Ashu's family...


Thanx Anjaniji
I am glad you enjoyed reading the conversations. I don't think I have put so many in my updates before.๐Ÿ˜†
I myself dont know how or who will have a change of heart first. I will have to write to find out๐Ÿ˜†
And Nidhi will blend very well.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

I know your answer also but still not able to resist...when is the next update???? SFL?


I will do the best I can. I promise.
ASAP๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hilarious44

Hey Anu..๐Ÿ˜›.


Hi Fatimah

As usual an awesome updateโค๏ธ...truely worth the wait.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘.

Thank you๐Ÿ˜ƒ

All scenes n convos were very very well written..๐Ÿ˜ƒ.

I am glad you liked them, specially the conversations.๐Ÿ˜ณ


Each character given its due share of importance..that was great..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ.

Happy that you noticed that๐Ÿ˜ณ I worked hard at that part.
Loved how nidhi was nervous n was having trouble in getting reading๐Ÿ˜†...Anji n Shyma must have been a very pleasant surprise for her..๐Ÿ˜ƒ.

I think that every bride is nervous on her wedding day, and in this FF, Nidhi has even more reasons to be more nervous.๐Ÿ˜‰
And the fact that felt all alone, was also bothering her. So aAnji's and Shyama's arrival was indeed a very special and very welcome surprise.


Anji-Nidhi convo๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...SUPERB๐Ÿ‘...hats off to their friendship, trust, care n understanding..๐Ÿ‘

I think that everyone wishes for a friendship as as the one Anji and Nidhi share. I know I do.๐Ÿ˜ณ

CV is blessed to have a daughter like nidhi.๐Ÿ˜ณ.

He knows that is very blessed. he realizes that, which is why he was so concerned for her.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Ashu-Arman part๐Ÿ˜†...it is always a treat...Arman is such a great guy๐Ÿ˜†...i love his character๐Ÿ˜‰...
WHAT, HOW n WHEN part...too good...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
"So that's the way the wind is blowing," he thought to himself. "Well Well Well! This was going to be interesting."๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...Am glad he sensed that...its really gonna be very interesting.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰.


I think that we all loved Arman's character, and his love and concern for his friend was also very cute and very commendable.
I am glad you liked the What How and When part. I hoped it would be funny. Usually I stink at humor,I can never carry it off.๐Ÿ˜ณ
Arman is a very astute person, he will be the first person who will know when Ashutosh's feelings are going to change.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Marraige part...WOW๐Ÿ‘...brilliant job anu๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...u rocked it...all moments n convos were just WOW..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘.

Thanx ๐Ÿ˜ณ Although the wedding was not in detail. I feel we have had enough of those.๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Ashu unable to take his eyes off nidhi๐Ÿ˜ณ...totally understandable.๐Ÿ˜†..

Nidhi is beautiful, so its a natural reaction.

Ashu-CV convo was so very emotional๐Ÿ˜ญ...it was so touching...brought tears to my eyes..๐Ÿ˜ญ.

I am glad. it was meant too.

I really hope all of them manage to keep their promises...am sure they will..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ.

You got it.๐Ÿ‘
Arman making nidhi his little sis was such a sweet moment..๐Ÿ˜ณ.

Totally unplanned. I had not even thought of it initially. Just happened.๐Ÿ˜ณ
Anji teasing ashu n ashu's response...SUPERB๐Ÿ‘...This saali- jeeju relation will be very interesting.
๐Ÿ˜ƒ..

Yes they will have an interesting relationship, and a difficult one, initially. Real affection will come later..It will not be easy for them they will be playing tug of war with Nidhi.๐Ÿ˜†

Last but not the least...the bedroom part๐Ÿ˜ณ...Hmmm both gradually developing feelings for eachother๐Ÿ˜ณ...both able to sense that๐Ÿ‘...Cant wait to see how this is gonna progress..

Thats one of the reasons they got married na. so they have to be aware. But they will be friends, and Ashutosh will be a big support in her time of need.
Its not as if he was inexperienced or anything. He had had his share of affairs, and liaisons, like any other normal red blooded male...is some past event gonna come up??๐Ÿ˜•

No. no past issues like that. Only the one mentioned in the first chapter.๐Ÿ˜•
Mujh say dosti karogi๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...Yup filmy but perfect fit for the situation..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜ƒ.

Couldn't resist. It was too perfect a fit.๐Ÿ˜†

"Friendship means trust, Ashutosh. And as my friend I trust you, and myself. Why can't you do the same and trust in yourself and me the same way...i loved this line..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘.

Thank you. I was happy with the way it came out.๐Ÿ˜ณ
All in all superb n very touching update..๐Ÿ‘.
Beautifully written..๐Ÿ˜ƒ..
I always wish my WORDS do justice to the intensity of admiration n love that i have for u n ur work BUT i always feel them failing in that department.๐Ÿ˜ญ.
U ROCK anu.๐Ÿ˜ƒ.
U are amazing dear...๐Ÿค—


Thanks for the awesome review Fatimah.
I am very happy you liked the chapter.
I appreciate all the detailed comments
and the applause, and compliments.
Love u too
Anu
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wizardofoz

Super duper chapter. You are a very talented writer. It is not easy to weave the magic in every new FF a person writes. Simple Awesome. Truly appreciate the time and effort.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ


Thank you so very much
for the sweet compliment.๐Ÿ˜ณ
It it very much appreciated.
Actually writing the updates gives me as much pleasure as you all get reading them.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Binat

Loved all the convos, and cried thru most of them๐Ÿ˜ญ


You sure have a way with words. Felt like I was watching this rather than reading it๐Ÿ˜ƒ

So when can we expect the next chapter??๐Ÿ˜‰

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Thanx Binat I am so glad that ou liked it.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
I am still working n chap 4. almost done with it in fact.
but i will not post it right now. I have to take care of the other FFs first.
If I dont meri pitai ho jayegi.๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wow really beautiful part cont soon


Thanx Jyothi
Glad you enjoyed it.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanx Swati๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! Thats a fantastic one... Full of promises...! So many new realtions were made... A father got a son, a daughter goty father n mother., a sister got an elder brother, a sister got a brother in law, a husband and wife got each others as friends, a r'ship of trust is made...
I felt really miserable, during Ashi-nidhi-cv scene... Tears pricked my eyes... How helpless a human can be...
I loved, that Ashu kept noticing every lil n small things abt nidhi... N the way, he resisted himself with her, was really caring... I hope this trust gets deeper day by day, n the frndship turns into love...
Thnk u 4 such a nice update... N so sorry 4 being late.. Got busy chatting wid my sis... N now, extremely tired...! I am jst keeping myslf awake to read n comment on ur update, b4 I sleep,,, now, bcz hv done it... I wud say gudnite... Its already 2 AM here...

Love ya...
Aazeen...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Finally u updated this one...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Ok...so Anji could attend the wedding...she seems an interesting character...but sensible enough!Armaan's genrosity is also a giant positive...he realised rite beofre the wedding happend...that Nidhi might get hurt in the end...loved how he came forward to be her brother...he's the one who knows of the arrangement n inspite that he forged a new relation with her๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Liked Ashu's convo with CV...despite knowing the root of this contractual marriage...i am sure all what he promised was not pre-planned n he has every intention to be bound by it!Lastly...Ashu n Nidhi are both aware about thier attractions towards the otherwonder how long they'll last??๐Ÿ˜‰Thanks for the PM! update soon!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra


Thanx Binat I am so glad that ou liked it.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
I am still working n chap 4. almost done with it in fact.
but i will not post it right now. I have to take care of the other FFs first.
If I dont meri pitai ho jayegi.๐Ÿ˜†


If You have it written - take us out of our misery and post it. Sure everyone else in the forum will agree that some update is better than no update๐Ÿ˜ณ

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