The Apple Tree - Page 4

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Thank you Tanu..😊

I tried Rabz's writing style... I hope I could reach upto atleast 10% of her level...😊..please tell me..

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Thank you Deba..😊

This was the result of your encouragement yesterday...🤗

Originally posted by: debaparna77

u guys r probably d best writer of this forum 😃

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Mudra...I think you have got me wrong...I did not say the child was flawed...I said I found the writing flawed...and I love children...I am a mother too...there is no way I can hate a child...but I hate the fact that he uses the child as a propaganda piece...the same effect could have been achieved with a cleverer piece of writing...am sorry...but I do not approve of the treatment of the track...conceptually it is great...but treatment and execution wise, it is a very poor track...but then that is just my pov...no offense meant 😊

Originally posted by: debaparna77

humne keya kia 😲

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

Mudra...I think you have got me wrong...I did not say the child was flawed...I said I found the writing flawed...and I love children...I am a mother too...there is no way I can hate a child...but I hate the fact that he uses the child as a propaganda piece...the same effect could have been achieved with a cleverer piece of writing...am sorry...but I do not approve of the treatment of the track...conceptually it is great...but treatment and execution wise, it is a very poor track...but then that is just my pov...no offense meant 😊

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

Sorry Mudra i am replying in hindi...

Sabse pehle...Main personally isse eye opener post kahungi..Ashu ke andar ghumte sare jhanjhawaat(storms) ko aapne 'apple tree' ke metaphor se express kiya hai...
ek insaan jo zindagi ki beraham sachchaiyon,kashton se jhujhta huaa..bada huaa hai..usse lag rahaa hai..khusi ke bachpan ko wo bacha sakta hai..unn beraham toofano se...
uski bechaini uska lagaw ko behatreen paribhasa diya hai aapne..👏

Har bachcha pyari pyari baatein karein jaruri nahi...par mujhe bas itni jigyasa hai...Khusi ke aise bartaw par thoda prakaash daalte writer to better hota..wo Bado ka naam lekar kyu bulati hai??...agar wo bahut jyada rude hai to wo..sirf naam kyu.."tu." "abe" jaise shabdon ka bhi use karegi..

mujhe bachche se nahi uske not well defined characterisation se thodi pareshani hai..mujhe samajh nahi aata..

Mudra aap behatreen writer hai..maine jo bhi seekha hai aapse seekha hai..
aap ne encourage nahi kiya hota..Main kabhi forum mein nahi likhti..

ye baat maine Deba ko kayi baar bola hai...Aapse jyada encourage karne wala insaan nahi dekha maine..

aapko teacher jee bone ka main reason ye hai..aaj disclose kiya...
You are my dronacharya...🤗

Aardhan is another great writer i look upto...

For this post..i agree its one of your best..
Bow down..
And lastly..
Thanks for keeping my request..❤️

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Yes.. Rabz.. I agree... But for some strange and unknown reason... I am ignoring them...

Rahi baat encouragement ki.. aap chane ki jhaad pe bitha rahi ho mujhe...

I ahve tried your writing style here... I hope I could do justice to that... please tell me...

I read a man's lone journey yesterday and somehow... reflected the same here too... 😊

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

Nahi main wahi keh rahi hoon..jo sach hai...Justice??..you have excelled...

you know what i will make a post on Mallus POV today..😉...Aapke liye...😳