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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey sweety...πŸ˜›
How in the world can u believe that someone can dislike ur chapter...
I was driving home when i just logged in to check for ur chapter at a traffic signal...parked my car on roadside...read it n then moved...that was my level of desperation...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Coming to the chapter...
It was simply FABULOUS...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Ashni as usual were sweet n adorable...😳😳.
DB...God she is tooo much...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Rohan-anchal wedding was a very simply yet very very sweet affair..😳.
Reception part was great fun.πŸ˜ƒ.
Loved ashu-arman convoπŸ‘...i just adore their friendship...arman is such a sincere fellow..πŸ˜ƒ.
Ashu dreamng about the little one n realizing how nidhi has changed his life was so heart warming..😳😳😳.
I wish I could dance Armaan! ...Awww Ashu is a sweeheartπŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
So whats my kid doing in there today? and nidhi's reaction to that touched me to core..πŸ‘πŸ‘
Arman n his bachelor partyπŸ˜†πŸ˜†...God he is so funnyπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Ashu pampering nidhi...massaging her back n then talking to his babyπŸ˜ƒ...Awww😳...that was my favourite partπŸ‘πŸ‘...it always brings tears to my eyes...very very well written..πŸ‘πŸ‘
Ashu gradually coming in terms with the fact of becoming parents was really sweet😳...he shifted the room downstairs...Awww😳
Coming to the painful part😭...i dont know how u managed to write all thatπŸ‘πŸ‘...it was out of this worldπŸ‘πŸ‘...u wrote it such as it was happening infront of my eyes...Poor ashu having such a tough time fighting the demons of his past😭😭...could feel all the pain, fear n helplessness...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Ashu's nightmare😭...God it was so dreadful😭...ashu's condition following that n the way nidhi took care of him was commendable.πŸ‘πŸ‘..
Ashu avoiding nidhi, his session with the doctor n then visit to mandir...awesome part...πŸ‘πŸ‘
if anything..ANYTHING..EVER happens to my wife OR my kid because of me, I will hold YOU responsible...Literally had goosebumps reading that.πŸ‘..
Then the best part...Ashu n nidhi having first look of their baby😳😳...awww that was a perfect momentπŸ‘πŸΌ...so so beautiful.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘.
All the following events from godh bharai to nidhi seding ashu MISS U sms to DB screeches were fabulous..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†..
Ashu instucting Anji not to drive was hilarious..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†.
Finally, CONGRATULATIONS at safe arrival of the little princess..😳😳
Cant wait to read how ashu is gonna react to first sight of his angel..
MINDBLOWING chapter...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘.
Loved it..😳😳😳.
Smiled, laughed n cried reading it...πŸ˜ƒ
Thanku so much..
U rockπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Edited by hilarious44 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome chap, with everything progressing so naturally, ashu's resurfaced fears, his past in his dream, his prayers for Nidhi n his child. It was just beautiful. Will the next chapter delve into his past or its buried now? Sad to see it end, but you have completed it in all means, so I guess, can't stretch it further. Would await u in sujatha's ff and hoping for a new ff from u soon.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
very very well written ...u dealt with ashu's fears so well its just awesome...ab to the baby is here..lets see how ashu manages everything...πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Turags
Great Chap. I loved the way you have shown the bond between Anj and Ashutosh.
Also Dadi Bua and Ashutosh. So finally Dadi Bua like Ashutosh more huh?πŸ˜†
Also love the Arman Nidhi relationship is too cute. Kaash show mein bhi aisa dikhate.
So finally the mystery of what happened to Ashutosh in childhood is revealed.
And loved the SMS's between AshNi. So Baby girl, huh?😳
Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gosh Turags..πŸ˜‰.
I am so sorry sweety but i dont know why but i love love love to tease u...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
U are just adorable...😳😳
Will be back with my original comments in a while...πŸ˜†

you were teasing me?? and here i was ready to
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Posted: 12 years ago

YES i know ,will be seeing you in Sujataji's FF.waitong for that.

don't remind me...i am shivering here...pre-FF jitters...(like pre wedding jitters) πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchshah

Finally read the entire update...wow!!

thank you...😳

So a beautiful baby girl is hereπŸ‘πŸ‘...i am sure Ashu is going to be a putty in the hands of his two girls!!! i am very interested in scenes where there's Ashu-Nidhi -baby interaction...wonder when any esteemed writers will write a story beginning with the kid...i mean Ashu+ Nidhi in full parent mode of kids,teens n adult children??

πŸ˜† i don't think this one will go that far

i had expected Ashu in the delivery room as he's a doc too...but chalta hai...i enjoyed the Ashu n Anji scene outside in the waiting room!πŸ˜ƒwaiting 4 baby's day:1,...i hope u update soon!

we had Ashu in the delivery room in FF version 1 right?? so made this one a bit different...πŸ˜‰
Thanks for PM!
you are most welcome 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: turags

Gosh Turags..πŸ˜‰.

I am so sorry sweety but i dont know why but i love love love to tease u...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
U are just adorable...😳😳
Will be back with my original comments in a while...πŸ˜†


you were teasing me?? and here i was ready to
...just couldnt resist..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hilarious44

Hey sweety...πŸ˜›

How in the world can u believe that someone can dislike ur chapter...

having fun at my expense huh!! mera bhi time aayega Fatima...

I was driving home when i just logged in to check for ur chapter at a traffic signal...parked my car on roadside...read it n then moved...that was my level of desperation...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

really??? i feel knowing that...
DB...God she is tooo much...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

yup..DB back with a BANG!! πŸ˜†
Rohan-anchal wedding was a very simply yet very very sweet affair..😳.
Reception part was great fun.πŸ˜ƒ.

after dealing with AshNi wedding...didn't have the energy for the whole process again..πŸ˜›

Arman n his bachelor partyπŸ˜†πŸ˜†...God he is so funnyπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

πŸ˜† bechara...stuck between two joru ka ghulams..πŸ˜‰
Ashu pampering nidhi...massaging her back n then talking to his babyπŸ˜ƒ...Awww😳...that was my favourite partπŸ‘πŸ‘...it always brings tears to my eyes...very very well written..πŸ‘πŸ‘

Coming to the painful part😭...i dont know how u managed to write all thatπŸ‘πŸ‘...it was out of this worldπŸ‘πŸ‘...u wrote it such as it was happening infront of my eyes...Poor ashu having such a tough time fighting the demons of his past😭😭...could feel all the pain, fear n helplessness...πŸ‘
Ashu's nightmare😭...God it was so dreadful😭...ashu's condition following that n the way nidhi took care of him was commendable.πŸ‘πŸ‘..

@red..had help from Doc Malvika in that...😊

Ashu avoiding nidhi, his session with the doctor n then visit to mandir...awesome part...πŸ‘πŸ‘
if anything..ANYTHING..EVER happens to my wife OR my kid because of me, I will hold YOU responsible...Literally had goosebumps reading that.πŸ‘..

really glad that part touched you...

Ashu instucting Anji not to drive was hilarious..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†.

i was waiting for you to mention this one...its my fav...and as usual u caught what most missed..
Finally, CONGRATULATIONS at safe arrival of the little princess..😳😳
Cant wait to read how ashu is gonna react to first sight of his angel..
MINDBLOWING chapter...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘.
Loved it..😳😳😳.
Smiled, laughed n cried reading it...πŸ˜ƒ
Thanku so much..
U rockπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ssktlk

awesome chap, with everything progressing so naturally, ashu's resurfaced fears, his past in his dream, his prayers for Nidhi n his child. It was just beautiful. Will the next chapter delve into his past or its buried now? Sad to see it end, but you have completed it in all means, so I guess, can't stretch it further. Would await u in sujatha's ff and hoping for a new ff from u soon.😊


can one really bury the past?? i don't think so...it would just seize to matter so much after a point...

thank you Sanya..give me some time once i wrap this one up...have to completely think differently for that FF na..

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