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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

Very good update, Suja

thank you Sujatha..

liked the vignette from Ashu's childhood that revisited him in the form of a dream...at least that is what I assume it was...

yup...its Ashu's childhood...precisely what he went through during his mom's death...

The part about them seeing the baby's first pics together was nice...

so, baby girl it is,..

After all these pregnancies and deliveries, I dont think it matters anymore that the show won't have it...😉

so true...😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Malvika_rajeev

Detailed review later...but nice chapter. Nice that you took portions from the prologue...

Busy in the hospital right now. Will talk later. Sending from mobile.


thanks Doc...don't worry...take care of things at your personal front first...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aarundhati

Superb...awesome...fantastic...u r just tooo good...!loved it...wonderful...!👏


thank you so very much...
Dil khil gaya hain aur jine ko aur kuch chahiye bhi nahi...really great...👍🏼

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Awesome...it's a girl...Ashu would want her to be hr mom's replica, in every sense obviously...finally a father...he is going to be the happiest person on earth, in spite of the bache-kuche insecurities...he will be a fantastic father...!
yup...next chap is all about Ashu taking baby steps towards his baby..😊

Just scared that this fantastic journey of your FF nearing it's end...? KASHMAKASH is absolutely mindblowing...has turned out to be a masterpiece...🤗

yes...next chapter..chap 23 is the last chapter of Kashmakash...
Hope it just never ends...!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

Very nice chapter.Thanks Anuji for informing me about this update
I really enjoyed it. A very good break from Khushi .
Thank u for this wonderful chapter
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thanks you rajani...

and its turags btw...Anu is Libra..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW.. The baby is here!!...

Very nice chapter...

Ashu's concern at every step of the way it very heart warming..
DB is such a typical saas... they go overboard with their damaad's I tell you!!
Rohan's wedding sequence was very nice and simple... Each dialogue beautiful... I could sense everyone's excitement and happiness... 😃

Rohan's relationship with Sid was soo cutely described... Ashu was longing for such a relationship with his child... but he doesn't know it yet... Very nice 👏

Why make poor Anji miss the wedding? 😉 .. but I didn't miss her... 😆😆
Rohan... Yeh Banda to sach mein gaya!!😆😆
Ashu singing for Anchal nice touch... you are already getting him to do a kanyadaan!! 😆😆

Armaan making him realize that soon a little one will be tagging... and it hitting Ashu like a ton of bricks... The most obvious fact missed by Ashu...Awesome!!

I know we see SK in this FF.. par apna Ashu to ke saath saath... bhi karta hai...

Chalo DB gets an occasion to gloat and be proud of him...
Ashu: how is what?

Nidhi: dancing

Ashu: I don't know. I am just looking at you and going with you. that's it.


Ashu is so smitten by Nidhi...


""My Kid""... Wah bhai yeh to line par aa gaya!!

Nidhi's prayer to make her strong for Ashu... very very emotional...

Poor Armaan no one takes his Bachalor Party advice seriously!!!

How you think of incidents to show Ashu so sensitive is beyond me!! He changed his room... Oh this Ashu is sooo cute!! 😳

The description of the nightmare... Mind Blowing!!

I wondered what triggered it.. I had to go back and read the para again and realized that it was the cricket bat and ball...

Oh the poor kid... You described the entire nightmare so beautifully... I was sense the pain!! 👏


After all the hard work.. Ashu took a step back.. I was worried he'd sulk some more... but liked to see him deal with his doctor and bounce right back!! Very very Strong Character...

The conversation with the ONE... reminded me of Deewar... aaj khush toh bahut hoge tum!!... So suddenly SK , AB ban gaya... Wah kya scene hai!! 😉😉

The sms sequence.. got to see the naughty Nidhi again!!

Glad you didn't stretch too much and Jr. Nidhi is here!!

Over all a every sweet chapter... smooth flow not a roller coaster ride!! 👍🏼


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Posted: 12 years ago
Super update! Really such incidents when occured infront of a child, it changes d whole world of him! Bt ur nidhi is so cute nd strong! Nd ashu loves her a lot...uh! Such kind of ff make me dream abt marrige!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you for the update, review after reading...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ashu has finally become Papa.
celebration time.
Enjoyed the chap Sujatha.
Net not working hence delayed coment.
Ashu's dream for a moment made me apprehensive ...how he will react to it. But you covered it beautifully.
Thank you...keep writing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Comments coming up😉
Edited by hilarious44 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

thank you 😃

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