hurt warming story new FF part 4 (pg 5)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ashutosh and Nidhi are just married . They know each other for nearly 5days after nidhi's mom death . Ashutosh have somthing for her in his hurt . but he cant express it now as he knows nidhi is not in state to bear all this thing at this time .It was about 2 am at night when ashu enter his room . He was surprise to see nidhi covering so much pain . he was tring hard to stop himself to go near here and leave her alone . but he cant bear any pain and grief in her eyes . he also dont know reason why . he start walking near her
Ashu : Nidhi tum ro kyu rahi ho ?
Nidhi starred at him for some time and then continued cring ...
Ashu felt bad but ask her matter
Nidhi : pls pls leave me alone fo sum time pls dr ashutosh
ashu feel little bad but went to guest room and tries to sleep . meanwhile Nidhi was slept after cring for so long .
Next morning nidhi opened her eyes soon . She was surprised when she didn't see ashu there . she then remmber that she has asked him to leave her alone . she was thinking that why she made ashu suffer for her sadness . she dicided to apologies him . and went for fresh n up . after getting ready she went to dining room . There baba , ashu and heraman kaka were present there . she was looking so adorable that they all starred at her . Nidhi started apologiesing . ashu stoped her in between and said :
there is no need for this nidhi
nidhi self thought that ashu is a good man .
every one ask nidhi to sit . baba confirmed in his mind that he will help nidhi to come out from this pain . but he knew it will take some time ...


so do u like it or not pls do cmment on my 1st ff
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Posted: 12 years ago
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not a 1 cmt also I think i have done sm thing wrong that u all are angry with me ... 😭 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continue...and plz make the updates longer😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb start sweet heart

pls do continue,you know what dear agar chap chota ho toh comment karne mein prb hota hai

i m talking about me not about every 1,so pls do continue so that i can comment properly

otherwise you have came with such a new concept


will wait for your chap
with lots of love

sonali
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very good start yashvi,and please continue,Ashu is good in each and every ff,next update soon,please.make it more long.hope you don't mind
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanx acctualy I came late from school so started shortly continue tommorow and try to make good long chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">chapter 2</font>[DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">After having breakfast Nidhi decided that she have to talk to ashu . Nidhi called him in his room .</font>[/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Ashu : bolo Nidhi tumha kuch chahiya kya ...</font>[/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Nidhi : ha</font>[/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Ashu : bolo kya</font>[/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Nidhi : mujha time chahiya</font>[/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">ashu looked at her surprisingly</font>[/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Ashu : time ??? kaisa time ??</font>[/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Nidhi : ap to jantay hay ki apki or meri shadhi kin halato mai hui hai . may janti hu ki may ap say pehla bhi bahut bar mili hu kyu ki baba hamari family kay bahut karib thay . par mena apko kabhi us nazar say nahi dekha to muja pehla meri mamy ki mot say bahar ana paday ga fir may apko janna ki koshish karogi .</font>[/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">ashu understand her problem and said</font>[/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Ashu:may sumaj sakta hu nidhi ki tumhay kitna kuch jhalna padraha hoga . tumha jitna time cahiya tum la lo .</font>[/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Nidhi : may chati hu ki jab tak mai apna time lau jab tak may tusra kamra may rahu . to pls</font>[/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">ashu felt bad but ...</font>[/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Ashu : its ok with me nidhi tumay kahi jana ki jarurat nahi hay may hi tusra kamray may chala jata hu</font>[/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Nidhi : par ap kyu ...</font>[/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Ashu : manay kaha na nidhi it's ok</font>[/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">ashu started paking his thing so that he can shift to another room . since nidhi was feeling bad but that was what her mind was thinking .</font>[/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">-------------------------------------------------------------------------</font>[/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">AFTER 3 MONTHS</font>[/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">since that time ashu have gotten very busy in kgh . But till that nidhi also started her new life . Due to loads of work he cant consantrate to nidhi . Nidhi has also started feeling somthing about him in her heart since the time he cared for her when she got hit with a major accident . she was shure that she is here because of his care . but she started feeling very bad as ashu always busy in his work</font>[/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Nidhi thought why is she feeling bad as she wanted this only then why why why ???? tears fell down her eye ... sudenly somthing struck in her mind and decided to talk to ashutosh</font>[/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">she hurried and went straight to kgh . and ask resp. where ashu is . she told her that he is in his cabin . she went to his cabin and noked .</font>[/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4"></font>[/DIV][DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Ashu : come in ...</font>[/DIV][DIV]<font size="4">he see at the door and is surprised</font>[/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV][DIV][BR][/DIV]
Edited by yashvi_ashni - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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there seems to be a lot of confusion in the update? Did anything go wrong in pasting it?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I read it...it was nice...just try to make it longer...itne kam khane se hamara peth nahi bharta😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yes it is but it is good because I have a better update then th at will post it tommorow

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