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Posted: 12 years ago
Great Update Ena😃
Enjoyed every bit of it.

I specially like the little googly you sent our way with rohan👏
So he is in love with Riddhi huh?😳
Great twist.
loved the little tiff over lunch,
and loved the little roothna, and jealous
hona by the both of them, towards each other.😃
wonder why Ashutosh doesn't like rohan. he is such a cutie pie.😳
Plz update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the last 2 chaps...update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra

Great Update Ena😃

Enjoyed every bit of it.

I specially like the little googly you sent our way with rohan👏
So he is in love with Riddhi huh?😳
Great twist.
loved the little tiff over lunch,
and loved the little roothna, and jealous
hona by the both of them, towards each other.😃
wonder why Ashutosh doesn't like rohan. he is such a cutie pie.😳
Plz update soon.


thank u di! Haan rohan ko yahan ridhi k liye fix karliya! Agar koi aur direction mein jata to use thik karna mushkil tha! Long ho jata-- actually here i want to focus only ashni relation! Aur unko milana bhi to hain na! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: niniborn2rule

loved the last 2 chaps...update soon..


thank u ,nini! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello every1!! My chapter is ready..nd it's a eid gift frm me! Pls let me know if u like it or nt! 😃

Chapter 7

after d cold fight wid ashu, nidhi also went to sleep without having dinner. She just switched off d light nd closed her eyes to think over all things of her first day of internship. She thought over rohan nd ridhima's relation.
Both of them love each other a lot. When she came to know abt their relation, she was so much happy fr ridhima. She knew that rohan was a nice guy bt at that time she was fully unaware abt rohan's family background. Even ridhima had no idea abt that. She was such badly in love wid rohan that she didn't think even ask abt his family.
Nidhi came to know abt rohan just 1 months ago that he had come frm a family which was famous fr smugling. His whole family was attached wid that business except rohan. Even rohan was become a owner of a prostitute house after his father's death. though he had no idea abt that before d death. When d maneger hand over d paper of that house to him, he was truly at a loss. He even had gone to that house to meet those girls nd setteled them in their lifes in other ways. Bt he failed everytime he tried. In his those state of mind, ridhima was always wid him. Bt nw d prblm was ashutosh. He loved her sister very very much nd wouldn't agree fr this relation at any cost. Nidhi tried her best to alert ridhima... Bt their love was so strong that a second thought over it was just impossible. Nd nw this rohan had joined kgh...god knows what would happen when dr. Ashutosh knew abt d relation.!

Nidhi was lost in her thought that kind that she even hadn't noticed when ashu left d bed. She turns nd found him missing on d bed. Where could he gone!?-- she wondered. She switch on d light nd went downstaires in search for him. Bt he was no where in sight. Suddenly nidhi heard some noise frm d kitchen. She tiptoed there and her utmost surprise to find ashutosh there searching something.
...ap yaha kya kar rahe hain? Chori??
She asked suddenly nd her sudden voice choked ashutosh.
...wo main..mujhe bhook laga tha to..
... Apko bhook lagi hain to akela hi kitchen agaye!? Mera khayal nehi aya akbar bhi?
Ashu couldn't answer her qustn just stare at her. She hadn't eaten yet fr him! Nd he was thinking...
... Hatiye! Main serve kar deti hoon. Ap ja k table par baithiye!
Ashu reluctantly do that what she said. Nidhi came wid a plate within some minutes nd gave it to him. She then started to go frm their when ashu hold her wrist to stop her.
Nidhi looked at him nd ashu gesture her to sit beside him. She took d seat silently...looked into ashu's eyes nd saw only love nd concern there. He took a piece of roti nd fed it to her. Nidhi couldn't hold her tears anymore nd d tear drops made their own way on her cheeks.
...nidhi! Nidhi! I'm sorry. Really sorry! Pls ro maat.
Nidhi looked at him bt didn't say anything. Ashu dragged his chair near her nd wiped out her tears wid his palm. He gave her a apologetic look nd nidhi smiled at last making ashu relief.
She also took a piece of roti nd fid him.
...wo lady kaun tha? Aur apne mujhe lunch k liye bulaya ku nehi??
Nidhi couldn't hide her jealousy tone anymore nd ashu laughed at that.
...woh to mere coligue hain! Aur mere dost bhi! Unmarried hain!
...haan! Par ap marraied hain! Yaad hain na apko?
...yaad hain issiliye to..
... Issiliye kya??
...kuch nehi! Ab apka interrogation khatam hogaya hain to hum sone chale?
Nidhi smiled nd nodded in a no!
...to madam apko itni rat main kya karna hain?
...dr. Ashutosh! Hum drive par chale?
...drive? Itni raat ko?? Nidhi tum pagal ho kya? Kal hospital nehi jana?
Nidhi pouted at being called pagal. She want to spend some more time wid him nd here she was called a pagal.
Ashu noticed her pouted face nd felt a sudden desire to taste those beautiful pouted lips. He didn't know how could he hide his inner desire nd how much time! Every passing minutes his love fr her increased! He couldn't even know or think what would happen if he left her.
... Ap sach-much nahi chalenge?
Nidhi's qustn broke his thoughts. He smiled at her nd said '' chalo''!
Nidhi jumped frm her chair in delight nd hugged him in excitement.
...thank u! Thank u! Thank u!
Main abhi change karke ati ho!
Ashu nodded in agreement .


They both were in d car fr their late night drive. Nidhi switch on d radio nd a beautiful sweet soft music started nd made d whole environment more charming. Nidhi also surprised ashu wearing a beautiful blak shari with silver embrodary. The shaari nd simple jwelary was perfect with her silfer white skin. Ashu was mesmerised wid her beauty nd couldn't find enough word to express his heart...in this dark late night d beautiful lady beside him made some issence that he missed his whole life. Life with nidhi was a blessed fr him! If he could pass every moment of life with her, than life would b seem like a dream!!
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Part 2

the both were silent nd enjoying d circumstances through their silence. Suddenly rain had started to show their magic with a cold breeze. Nidhi opened d glass window nd tried to catch d drop. Ashu was staring at her with a smile in his leaps nd which formed in d core of his heart.
...stop! Pls..stop d car!
Ashu stoped d car nd tried to ask nidhi what hapened. Bt he couldn't get enough time to do that bcs nidhi already opened d door nd got out frm d car.
She closed her eyes nd let d rain drops discover her every bare skin. She was looking so beautiful that it's hard to take away his eyes frm her. He even didn't realise when he also came out frm d car nd started to walk towards her. He held her frm her waist nd pulled close to him.
The sudden thouch of a pair of hands on her waist made nidhi open her eyes. She saw ashu standing so close to her that she could hear d continuous thumbing of his heart. He looked deep into her eyes..those eyes where he always try to find love fr him. He looked at her tremble lips. Rain drops were caressing them. He want to taste those rain drops through her lips. He thought he was living a dream. This night, this darkness..this rain nd with all that surroundings d two were both in their arms. Ashu pulled her more closed to his chest nd started to reach to her tremble lips. Nidhi closed her eyes in anticipetion! Bt she found d grip on her waist losen nd so she open her eyes. She found ashu facing his back towards her. How much time she cherished this moment bt when d moment come it looks like it bring also lots of pain wid it. Tears of her eyes were flowing with those rain drops. There was pin point silent fr some time. Then suddenly ashu spoke-- '' i..i'm sorry, nidhi!''

nidhi was astonished, wonderd..at d same time heart broken! He was feling sorry fr that beautiful moment which had come nd just went away!! She was just stood blank headed fr sometime. Then silently took her seat on d car.
Ashu saw her miserable condition. He thought he had hurt her with his action. What would nidhi think abt him?he was feling guilty nd at d same time helpless. He couldn't loose nidhi's trust..nt in any cost.

The next day both of them tried their best to behave normal though their inner fight wid their emotions could seem in their eyes. Ashu's eyes were red as a sighn of coming fever. So bb advised him to stay at home nd rest bt he denied. Both nidhi nd ashu reach kgh in due time.

Nidhi was very busy wid her new work nd the childrens hue nd cry kept her busy all day long. She even couldn't find a moment over d incident of night. She was though worried abt ashu's health bt hadn't d courage to ask him abt that.

In lunch time,she came into his cabin to check abt his health. Bt d cabin was empty. She bumped with dr. Ranganath on d door!
...oh! Dr. Nidhi!? Ap ab tak yehi hain? Maine socha ap dr. Ashutosh k saath ghar chale gaye honge!
... Ku! Kya hua? Dr. Ashutosh ghar gaye hain?
... Haan! Apko pata nahin? Unhe to bahot tej bukhar hain!
... Kya?
Nidhi was panicked nd without saying furthur word she rushed fr d home. Both bb nd ridhima was nt there in d home. God knows who would b there to take care him!!

She went to her bed room straight nd find dr. Ashutosh their wid high fever lying on d bed. His eyes were deep red nd his whole body was trembling with heat. Nidhi rushed to him nd touched his forhead to chek d fever!
Ashu open his eyes nd gave her a sweet smile! He tried to sit bt nidhi stoped him.
...tum agaye! Main kabse tumhara intezar kar raha tha!!
... Apne mujhe bulaya ku nehi!? Apka sarir to pura jal raha hain. Rukiye main pani leati hoon patti k liye!
Nidhi started to go bt ashu hold his hand!
...nehi! Main tumhe kahin jane nahi dunga! Dekho main tumhe bandh liya!
He hold her hands nd make it like a handcafe!
... Nidhi! Tum mujhe nafrat to nehi karti na? Main tumhara nafrat nehi sehsakta! Kal jo bhi hua..
...dr. Ashutosh! Ap jyada baat mat kijiye!
... Pls, nidhi! Bolne do mujhe! Tumhe pata hain nidhi main tumse kitna pyaar karta hoon?
Tears were flowing uncontrolably frm her eyes.
...itna pyaar k main tumhare liye duniya k sabse pure insaan banna cahta hoon!
Nidhi huged him tight nd buried her head on her neck.
... Ap duniya k sabse asse insaan hain! Par pls ab ap chup hojaiye..pls. Apka bukhar badgaya hain.
...assa hain na! Iss bukhar k tej se mein khud ko itna pure banaonga k ayinda mere wajah se tumhare aankho mein kabhi aansu na aye!
Nidhi kept her hand over his mouth to stop her.
...dr. Ashutosh! I love u..i love u so very much aur ap mere liye iss duniya k sabse pure insaan hain!
A smile of satiesfaction formed on his lips!
' i love u too, nidhi! Aur aj shayaad main iss duniya k sabse khush kismat insaan hoon tumhe apne pass pake! I want to b d puriest human being in this world nd with ur touch i'll b sure that one!''-- he thought to himself!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kisiko accha nehi laga!? 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the gift...btw will that lady friend play an important role??? i expected Nidhi to find her at home...caring for ashu
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Posted: 12 years ago

super chap ena

i m not having word to describe ,just as soft as ashni relation

perfectly you created love between them ,ekdum magical love with some soft feeling

will wait for your next part


lots of love & eid mubarak

sonali
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Posted: 12 years ago
Acha laga yaar
well written
rohan track twist was good n also long rain black saree drive ..!!

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