FF - Pati, Patni Aur Woh!- chapter 17 on page 150 - Page 75

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

Thanks for the update...Mallika is using the system against Nidhi...it will be counterproductive though, as it will bring Ashni even closer

Thanks Vidhihaa 😳...did you maybe get what I was trying with the police station scene...and my repetition?

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

Thanks Vidhihaa 😳...did you maybe get what I was trying with the police station scene...and my repetition?

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

You were poking fun at the establishment😊

I did not want to make it a high voltage dramatic scene...because it is not most often...I've been in a station twice,...and on both occasions, found the experience very boring and banal...hence the idea to make it that way...Reason why I got the guy to keep saying 'so' at the beginning of evey sentence...I gave him that mannerism to indicate how unimaginative they can get...how stuck in their methods 😆

Thanx a lot sujatha di for updating...😃 had been eagerly waiting since morning...
i loved the part where angie shouts at ashu... and ofcourse arman...he is too good😃

Just a question...would you guys like to read it if I post if in screenplay format...instead of a narrative format...or would it take the charm of reading away...because I love reading screenplays...!

Originally posted by: ZedZee92

Thanx a lot sujatha di for updating...😃 had been eagerly waiting since morning...
i loved the part where angie shouts at ashu... and ofcourse arman...he is too good😃

i guess he will be a huge support to ashni later on too😊
great going di...
Thanx again...🤗

Thanks Zara...yes, Armaa will be a source of support...

And Anji...more fireworks to follow 🤗

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

Just a question...would you guys like to read it if I post if in screenplay format...instead of a narrative format...or would it take the charm of reading away...because I love reading screenplays...!

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

Nope , it won't take the charm away...content is all that matters

Am going to try this with my next chapter...joote padenge toh bhi teekh hain...I love to experiment...even within the confines of an FF!

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

Am going to try this with my next chapter...joote padenge toh bhi teekh hain...I love to experiment...even within the confines of an FF!

Wonderful Sujatha. The story flows flawlessly, no evidence of your varied state of mind😛. Love this fiercely confident Nidhi and how their love is seeing all forms now and am sure will come clear of all these trials.