AshNi OS#11:Pyar Ko Ho Janay Do(Completed/pg1) - Page 2

Awesome OS di...aap to bade shaitan ho itani intresting mode pe aake ruk gaye ab humara kya hoga?hehe...koi bat nahi hum intzar kar lenge...

Awesome story Ana 👏
Plz continue soon I m eagerly waiting for next part
❤️

Great OS sweety...will be waiting for next...plzzz post soon

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Aap aisa kyu karti hain...? Kitna achha chal raha tha, aagey likha hi nahi... Main aapko yaad dila doon, this is One Shot, toh likho na one shot mein, humein atka diya...
Btw jahaan par aapne roka h... Bada bazaa aayega aagey read karne mein... Aur iss OS ki sabse khaas baat h aapki commentry... Main apne room se bahar bhaag gayi, warna next room mein ammi-papa so rahe thhey, sochte ye subah k 4.30 bajey, Aazeen ko kya ho gaya...
Waise ye wala OS aapne Coming together se pehle post kar diya tha? Maine kyu nahi dekha?

hehehe aazeen dear
yaar aisa karne main tau maza ata hai...curiosity rise hoti hai😆😆
nahin bohut neend aa rahi thi tau itna likha n i was off...
main one shot k v nikay nikay shot bana deti hoon janab😉
par app bhagay kyun😉🤣
nahin baad main raat ko post kia tha ye janab...aj raat ko coming together update karoon gii😃

Originally posted by: Malvika_rajeev

Loved the post Ana...par aage ka kya? Jaldi karo,,,

thanku malvika...
agay jald hi likhoon gi yara...dont worry😳

Originally posted by: ZedZee92

What an ending ana... Seriously... How on earth do u expect as to wait for part 2 😉

Nway...great OS 👏 Plzzz jaldi se continue 😳

hehehe...well i do think after seeing ur guys response that it was indeed a good ending😉😆
thanku for liking it zee...muwah...😊
😳

Originally posted by: OneWish

Very sweet beginning. Looking forward to what's ahead. TFS.

thanku so much dear...
will update asap for me🤗

Originally posted by: ssktlk

How romantic, Just the name Ashni weaves magic, even if the story is different. Please write soon. By starting like this, you have gripped us all to your story. Very good writing.

yup yaar...ashni are 2nd name of romance...🤗
i don't like to write mostly on current story track...just wrote one OS on the current track of KTLK...all 10 others were totally my imagination...😊
i m glad the story get a grip on ur mind...will cont asap😳

Originally posted by: SSA777

How can you stop and leave us hanging?😉😛 A beautiful start. Waiting for the next chapter.

hehehehe...hanging is the part where you can run your imaginations in diff directions😆😆😛
will update asap for me😳

Originally posted by: alkaparmart

aap bhi ajeeb hai,adhuri kahaani,chaliye,koi baat nahi,dil majboot banate hai,aur sare part ek saath hi padhenge,punishment hai aapki,😆😆just kidding,good start

hehehe...adhuri kahani ko jald poora karoon gi...
it was just a teaser😆😆
thanku for liking this alka...🤗