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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: karajekar


superb part ana ,this shows how much nidhi got hurt

aur zyda tab hurt hua ashu ne directly use sms kiya & he came to take her ,without any explanation or clarification ,ise toh kabhi kabhi aisa feel hota hai ke sab kuch ashu ke marzi pe depend karta jab chaha use ghar bulaliya jab chaha jaane ko bol diya ,

means nidhi ki feeling ki koi value nahi hai ,jab use laga nidhi aur amar ke achi ban rehe hai use gahr lekar aagay

i want that ashu ko nidhi ke value pata chale thats all


sonali



thanku so much sonali...🤗
yup...she came back just for her baba or otherwise, ashu would have a hard time to convince her to come back home...but now too...he need a lesson...
nidhi ki value bus agay dekho kaise realize karte hain saheb g...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: cool_SK



hehehe...readers se nahin darti main...there comments n criticize always are welcome...
but don't wanna disappoint friends...
2-3 updates kul milla k 5 ban jati hain...chalay ga😉



NO WAYS!!!! Maine aapko kal kaha tha 2-3 updates... Kal 1 ho gayi, 1-2 updates aur dekhoongi ( I mean padhungi)... Agar maahaul kuch sudharta nazar aaya toh theek warna kasam se review doongi hi nahi... Yaar hum yaha apne dimag ko halka karne aate hain, khud ki zindagi k problems kam hain jo yaha aur jhelne baith jaaye... Theek hai main maan rahi hu k up-downs chalte h... Par aise bhi roller-coaster rides par nahi jaana mujhe... Baksh do mujhe... Aur 5 updates kuch zyaada nahi ho gayi? (read it in SK style)...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Ashutosh woke up in the morning with a sweetest smile. He stretched his arms out and turn to look at his sleeping wife, sleeping on her stomach. Her one hand was tucked under the soft pillow while the other was lazily wrapped around him. Her hairs were a mess, the kohl of her eyes was smudged, her lips were swelled up telling the beautiful tale of their night. The duvet was hardly covering her till her shoulders as her bare feet were out from it. This small duvet and the two of them, this idea made him groan as he moved his hand around her bare waist to pull her closer. The little moment made her alert as she peak at him from her lashes.

"Good morning" He said softly getting near her face to place a kiss in between her hairs.

"What a beautiful start of the day" She said with a dreamy face and a smile on her lips that made him smile too.

"If you ask, I can always wake you up like that...Only if you can stay sleep this late...Mostly, you are awake and running around in the home before I can actually wish you" She chuckled and get closer to him to hide her face in his chest. She took a deep breath in there and softly whispered.

"I missed you" Her small confession made his heart filled with enormous love.

"I missed US" He replied caressing her hairs letting her know that now he is here and neither leaving nor gonna let her leave for anything

"So what's the agenda for today?" He asked a while later

"Its our last day on this camp...so lets just went out and check our patients for now...and If we get free earlier then our schedule, then we can decide what we can do" The naughtiness was evident from her tone as it changed from serious to teasy.

He raised his eye-brows as if saying DO-WE-REALLY-NEED-TO-THINK on that and a blush rushed through her cheeks. They stayed that way a lil more time. It was still early in the morning and they had an hour to get out for their breakfast.

Few minutes later, she turned



Originally posted by: Aazeen02



NO WAYS!!!! Maine aapko kal kaha tha 2-3 updates... Kal 1 ho gayi, 1-2 updates aur dekhoongi ( I mean padhungi)... Agar maahaul kuch sudharta nazar aaya toh theek warna kasam se review doongi hi nahi... Yaar hum yaha apne dimag ko halka karne aate hain, khud ki zindagi k problems kam hain jo yaha aur jhelne baith jaaye... Theek hai main maan rahi hu k up-downs chalte h... Par aise bhi roller-coaster rides par nahi jaana mujhe... Baksh do mujhe... Aur 5 updates kuch zyaada nahi ho gayi? (read it in SK style)...



hehehe...phir dhamki...but madam apko meri dhamki bhi yaad honi chahiye...
yar BTOOMH main itnay romantic part day rahi hoon...compensate ho raha hai na...😆😆
ok ok...tau main next 2 updates ke baad mahool sudhar doon gi...fikar na karoo...
waise bhi i think this fic with max have 10 parts...can't stand more than that tau happy parts tau anay he walay hain😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: cool_SK



hehehe...phir dhamki...

Ji... Phir dhamki... Itne haq se bohot kam logon ko dhamkati hu... Basicaly unhe jinhe farq padta h meri dhamki se... Warna hum toh bohot kuch kehke bhool bhi jaate hain...



but madam apko meri dhamki bhi yaad honi chahiye...


bilkul yaad hai aapki dhamki bhi... Isi liye kal bhi review diya aur aagey k 2 updates mein bhi doongi... Dhamki toh uske baad ki hai na...




yar BTOOMH main itnay romantic part day rahi hoon...compensate ho raha hai na...😆😆


Aaha! Uske updates bhi aap badi ghaneemat se maheeney mein 1 baar karti hain... Pichle 2 updates mein se ek aapne ramzan mein kiya tha, and last waala eid k kuch dino baad kiya... Ek aaj kar rahi hain n I'm sure agla bakra eid (Eid-ul-zuha) k aas-paas karengi... Hai na? Ye toh wahi baat hui k roz marra mein chutni roti khaa lo, chahe nigalte bane ya na bane... Kya farq padta h... Mahiney mein ek baar daawat denge, kha lena usme haleem aur biryaan...




ok ok...tau main next 2 updates ke baad mahool sudhar doon gi...fikar na karoo...
waise bhi i think this fic with max have 10 parts...can't stand more than that tau happy parts tau anay he walay hain😳



waah bhai waah! 10 parts mein se 4 aa chuke hain 2 parts k baad maahaul kuch sudhrega... Baaki 4 parts mein khushiyan de rahi hain aap... Badi meherbaani aapki...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#95


ohoo tanay...heheehe...
chalo haq samjh k dhamki di...khush ho gaye main...😳
yaar kia karon BTOOMH ka...itnay lambe parts hotay hain...k likhte likhte he mera mood badal jata hai n chote part doon tau phir sub bolte hain...abhi bhi usi ko likh rahi thi

oye madam g...do OS's bhi tau deen na BTOOMH ki update k baad...wo kiss khatay main daal rahay hoo...
itni cute OS thi...n 2nd tau romantic bhi thi...
chalo aj raat ko update karoon gi BTOOMH...n phr kal raat ko ye as k kal din main bz hoon gii...

take care g😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
#96


hey ana waiting for you next chap 😊



sonali
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: karajekar



hey ana waiting for you next chap 😊



sonali



sonali tonight i will update BTOOMH dear...
will update this tomorrow...😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Ana, waiting for the next update to this story.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Libra

Ana, waiting for the next update to this story.😃



tomorrow anu...
sorry to keep you guys waiting today😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Agar BTOOMH likh liya ho toh post kar dijiye... Meri ye 4 maasoom aankhein pathra gayi h aapke update ka rastaa dekhte-dekhte... Ya phir as usual main jab aadhi raat k baad uthu tab padhu... Kya h na, baar-baar login nahi karungi n directly tabhi aa jaungi... Wat say?

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