KTLK- 2nd Ver. Chap 9 Final Chap page 55

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BayofSarcasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Libra, awesome writing!👏👏

Love your narrative skills, it was so gripping, that I could actually visualize the scenes. You have narrated Nidhi's point of view and made her that much stronger but still retained her original caring, giving, sensitive and empathetic personality. Hats off to you!!

Waiting to read the next part.😳

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Suvika.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Anu...fantabulous...no words can do justice for what you have written and shown...hats off my friend...

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ruchshah

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Posted: 13 years ago

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(this one is for part 1)

wow...this is awesome!!!

U have covered every action..rather inaction of Ashutosh...from the beginning to the end!!!👏This is a fierce retort for Nidhi...i appreciate that Nidhi could bring out all the moments where Ashu should have stood by her..atleast in this OS of yours Nidhi got the turn!!!😃I wonder with all the maturity, experience etc etc. which Ashu is supposed to possess..how come he has never stood up for Nidhi...its always Nidhi being supportive n understanding...Also, she needs to confront her Grand father...he had been unjustnot only to his daughter/son-in-law...but grand daughter too..he has always behaved as Ashu's baba n never as her Grand father thru out...this should come out in the next update...which means asking the Q.. I sincerly hope, wish that u are updating this story???

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Chitra RaviKiran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Hey awesome prediction track man! Just loved it

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ruchshah

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Posted: 13 years ago

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view/appreciation for part-2...

I am so happy that u are continuing this story...loved how u too agree about Nidhi's reaction to BB...

I think Ashutosh has a long way to go...n he deserves all the blows n shouts nidhi's offering him...not in a sadistic way...but i guess he needs to be told n made realized about his actions...👏

its good that nidhi's view on living separately from Ashu n their relation being only of parents is open to her father n dadi bua..that lady can come n held nidhi responsible in the future...i hate that after all nidhi told him..ashu was defending malika in front to CV n DB...i wonder he's truly heartstone...

He has a large forgiving heart for all n sundry...but he's a heartstone as far as Nidhi is concerned😡😡

(sorry for my ranting...but when u see the TV series...my blood starts boiling😉!)

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Sujatha.rao

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Anu...very beautifully written...Nidhi's pain was heartrending..!

However, Ashutosh's granting pardon to Mallika surprises me...because I don't think it is in his place to do so...the sole right to grant pardon to Mallika rests with Nidhi...and Ashutosh would not be the man I beleive him to be if he did not sense this...

Since this is a Prediction OS, while I would love to see their conflict, heartbreak and reconciliaton for sure, if Ashutosh is going to be portrayed as so insensitive to his wife's pain as to actively involve Mallika in every facet of his life regardless of Nidhi's opinion, then I don't think I will be able to personally watch the show!

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Anu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao
Anu...very beautifully written...Nidhi's pain was heartrending..!

However, Ashutosh's granting pardon to Mallika surprises me...because I don't think it is in his place to do so...the sole right to grant pardon to Mallika rests with Nidhi...and Ashutosh would not be the man I beleive him to be if he did not sense this...

Since this is a Prediction OS, while I would love to see their conflict, heartbreak and reconciliaton for sure, if Ashutosh is going to be portrayed as so insensitive to his wife's pain as to actively involve Mallika in every facet of his life regardless of Nidhi's opinion, then I don't think I will be able to personally watch the show!

Sujatha, I love Ashutosh's character too much to make him insensitive towards nidhi. Believe me when I say that kahani abhi baaki hai.

Thi was only half of the second part. I am too tired to edit the rest right now. So I have only put in the first half. The second part of this will come tomorrow. All of you are misunderstanding, my ASHU. Yes he did do wrong, but MY nidhi will set him straight. And Mallika no matter how reformed will always be Mallika, just not go to KPjis extent.,very mild version , but she will always make mischief. And ashni can never be parted for long.

So...😳

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Suvika.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Libra

picture abhi baaki hain...aur turags bhi Anu ke saath hain...toh kahe ka tension...😉

but on a serious note, Sujatha, BB himself said Ashu is bound by his own conscience...understood...he did what he did basing on that...but the cost of it or rather the brunt of it fell on his wife...his actions are bound to cause ripples in his life that will last longer than the time it takes for him to get the word "sorry" out of his mouth...

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Sujatha.rao

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Libra

Sujatha, I love Ashutosh's character too much to make him insensitive towards nidhi. Believe me when I say that kahani abhi baaki hai.
Thi was only half of the second part. I am too tired to edit the rest right now. So I have only put in the first half. The second part of this will come tomorrow. All of you are misunderstanding, my ASHU. Yes he did do wrong, but MY nidhi will set him straight. And Mallika no matter how reformed will always be Mallika, just not go to KPjis extent.,very mild version , but she will always make mischief. And ashni can never be parted for long.
So...😳

Anu...I get what you are saying,...and yes, the story still remains to be told...and no, I don't misunderstand Ashu...he is the reason why I even watch the show primarily...and I have no issues with him making mistakes based on his perception of right...but disregarding Nidhi's opinion on Mallika completely and including her in their life is, to quote Ashu himself, galti nahi guna hai!

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Sujatha.rao

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: turags

Suja...exactly my point too...I don't mind conflict based on perception of what is right...but if AShutosh thinks that he has the right to forgive Mallika or even include her in their life disregarding Nidhi's choice, then am sorry but he is not the Ashutosh I believe him to be,...!

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