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Posted: 13 years ago
CHAPTER 5




Turags
That was awesome. Once again u have picked up flawlessly.
It was adorable, awesome, wonderful.
I loved every word.😃
Edited by Libra - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Well written...liked the CV part...sorely missing in the show...and the BB-Nidhi part too...and the way you brought in the jaana zaroori hai kya...

But, I can see KPji has gotten to you...it is clearly reflected in your writing...there was too much of Mallika for one part...ab aap bhi hum pe zyati kar rahe ho...yeh toh batao...hamara gunah kya hai?!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fanktlk

WOW... Now I know why it took you so long... so sweet of you to incorporate yesterday's Anji scene...


i didn't see last night's episode just read the WU...i avoid watching while writing a chap...but Anji scene had to go in...sorry i kept you waiting this morning...😳

It is nice to see Ashu like a love struck puppy whining behind Nidhi... we didn't get a glimpse of them falling in love but now we can see them slowly but surely building their relationship..

yup...i wanted to show them falling in love again...😊

Loved them enacting the... jana zarori hai... that is one of my favorite scenes...

mine too...😉

Insecurities do not diasppear in a day... Beautiful progression...

Kudos!!

thank you..🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra

Turags

That was awesome. Once again u have picked up flawlessly.
It was adorable, awesome, wonderful.
I loved every word.😃


Ek se bhale do...yeah, we do make a good team..even if i do say so myself...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

Well written...liked the CV part...sorely missing in the show...and the BB-Nidhi part too...and the way you brought in the jaana zaroori hai kya...

But, I can see KPji has gotten to you...it is clearly reflected in your writing...there was too much of Mallika for one part...ab aap bhi hum pe zyati kar rahe ho...yeh toh batao...hamara gunah kya hai?!


😆 the other ff is full of fine moments and romance...and i have no M&Bs with me currently to take ideas from...😉

Mallika WILL leave this story too...there is no question...i am just phasing her out...thats all...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: turags


Ek se bhale do...yeah, we do make a good team..even if i do say so myself...😉

@underlined kuch cheezein mauka milte hi bahar aa jate hai...😆
turags very well writeen...the emotions were perfect and insecurities keep resurfacing ...very well expressed...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ek se bhale do...yeah, we do make a good team..even if i do say so myself...😉
@underlined kuch cheezein mauka milte hi bahar aa jate hai...😆
turags very well writeen...the emotions were perfect and insecurities keep resurfacing ...very well expressed...

kahan ki baat kahan le jaati ho nini...
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Posted: 13 years ago

No a big thank you... It is so difficult to steal time from home, work kid and hubby that I have to fight for my alone time merely manage to read..

How you guys manage and that too such beautiful posts... .🤗 Thank You!!
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No a big thank you... It is so difficult to steal time from home, work kid and hubby that I have to fight for my alone time merely manage to read..

How you guys manage and that too such beautiful posts... .🤗 Thank You!!

Divya, the genuine appreciation and applaud that we get from all of you is our main motivating factor along with the beauty of the characters that are in KTLK...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow...this update was worth all the wait!! the sheer size itself was rewarding👏...coming to the contents...i wonder is Mallika creepy? does she have "witch powers" the moment things appear good...she lands up!😡

but in hindsight i like how u made her come back...this is an issue which can't be settled with a single incident...She still has guts n Ashu still needs to digest that he has done a huge crime by supporting her...I recoomend that he should get a restraining order against mallika..this will assure that Nidhi n her baby are safe physically n this action of his will help Nidhi on a emotional level too...I truly want Ashu to take legal actions against her, all her previous attempts on Nidhi's life + she has threatened her a few days back too...this is enough for a case to be made...i wonder where Armaan is in this series? he too must make Ashu realise his crimes against Nidhi...Also he needs to seek his apology from Anji too...she should also take his class...😉all in all awesome update...i sincerely hope Ashu doesnot feel belittled towards Suraj n make further mistakes...same goes for BB...Thanks a ton for the PM!

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