KTLK- 2nd Ver. Chap 9 Final Chap page 55

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achiever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

such a nice story.. really luved the first chapter.. was in tears reading Nidhi's POV. wat she said was 100% true.. from Ashu's POV, he doesnt himself know y he puts Mallu ahead of everything.. something tht i so wanted to know..😆 .. bt the forgiving mallu part was wat i cud understand.. coz he is jst like Nidhi.. he tends to forgive ppl in his life.. bt y he kept Mallu still in his life is beyond my reason or logic.. or above any of those complex process tht heart runs on for me to understand!

i think i read another cahpter wer Nidhi returns home and thy reconcile.. i was hoping Nidhi stays put in her determination.. tht untill he actually proves tht Nidhi and her child is above all, she shudnt b going back to him.. bt she did in ur story.. so well.. its okay to c thm back..

if thr r any other chptrs to this prediction track i wanna read.. so can u make an index of those chpters on ur first pg please?

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ruchshah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: Libra

Aap peeche nahin aaye ji
Humne aapko invitation diya tha.😳

Peeche peeche aaye...yaa invitedly aaye...hum to khush hai for your collaboration!!!

So i believe that the "awesome twosome" will take this story fwd n turn it into a blackbuster!!!

cannot wait for the next update...however i hope this doesnt mean that u have orphaned the previous FF😭...so i must say...waiting for the both updates!!

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Suvika.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Aap peeche nahin aaye ji

Humne aapko invitation diya tha.😳

Peeche peeche aaye...yaa invitedly aaye...hum to khush hai for your collaboration!!!

So i believe that the "awesome twosome" will take this story fwd n turn it into a blackbuster!!!👏

cannot wait for the next update...however i hope this doesnt mean that u have orphaned the previous FF😭...so i must say...waiting for the both updates!!

😆 we are responsible adults...we don't orphan things like that...its like we are taking turns...this week my chap will be in this version - 2 and Anu's will be in version - 1 and the next week we will inter change our roles...howz that??

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fanktlk

@fanktlk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: turags

😆 we are responsible adults...we don't orphan things like that...its like we are taking turns...this week my chap will be in this version - 2 and Anu's will be in version - 1 and the next week we will inter change our roles...howz that??

Treat Week... 🤗 Thank You..

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Suvika.

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Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: fanktlk

Treat Week... 🤗 Thank You..

you are most welcome...may i know your name please?

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fanktlk

@fanktlk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: turags

you are most welcome...may i know your name please?

Oh Sujatha I thought you knew... I am divya...😊

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Suvika.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

you are most welcome...may i know your name please?

Oh Sujatha I thought you knew... I am divya...😊

no...i usually don't ask...just go with their forum names...but calling you "fanktlk" seemed awkward...so asked...hi divya...😃

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menaka

@ariyadasa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

Your script was awesome but the thing is you are doing a great injustice for the character Ashuthosh as he was a orphan he was eagerly awaiting to see his own child but if they separated for 5 months it may change the meaning of this drama well as KTLK fans we like to see how they are dealing happily in this period . Ashuthosh from his childhood he was suffering with loneliness . his only wish is to have a his own baby so in that happy moment if they were separated it is injustice for him as well as us . so please don' t give a clue to KP

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ruchshah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Hey i didnot want to hurt anybody's feelings by asking about your treatment of the previous version...i was a bit curious as u mentioned about ending that FF sometime back...

I am aware that u are pretty dedicted to these stories..but with what they show on TV...one never knows😡...its regressing at a supersonic speed...personally i have stopped watching the TV show 😲...waiting for update...i believe its due Friday morn😃...always i liked the way u have indexed this FF..made it all compact n structured👏Sorry if i came across as doubting your intentions!

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Anu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: ariyadasa
Your script was awesome but the thing is you are doing a great injustice for the character Ashuthosh as he was a orphan he was eagerly awaiting to see his own child but if they separated for 5 months it may change the meaning of this drama well as KTLK fans we like to see how they are dealing happily in this period . Ashuthosh from his childhood he was suffering with loneliness . his only wish is to have a his own baby so in that happy moment if they were separated it is injustice for him as well as us . so please don' t give a clue to KP

Thank you for,the comments. But we are writing the character as we perceive him to be. This FF has nothing to do with Mr Pandey, or his script. And in our FF Nidhi has forgiven Ashu, and he will get to enjoy the rest of her pregnancy. Besides, he is getting his daughter, and that is what he has wanted.

Of course it is your POV, and u have a right to that.

But this is Our POV wwhich we are writing.