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@ divya : thanks dear 😊
I was waiting for ur comment 😳

Originally posted by: busybee..

@ divya : thanks dear 😊

I was waiting for ur comment 😳

Awww sweetie..Love you...🤗

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

Awww sweetie..Love you...🤗

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Shirley such an awesome scene...👏..You write so well dear...Plzz continue writing more...😊

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

good one Mudra...

Rohan comes back...With Mallu...

Anji Nidhi-Shocked...-rohan Tum Dr mallika ke saath kyaa kar rahe ho??

Dr Ashu-Mallika tum ko Ghar se Nikaal Diya tum Phir se aa gayi..wo bhi Rohan ke saath..

Rohan in Angry Man Avtaar-Shut up Sab chup ho Jao..Mallu Meri Biwi hai..ek shabd bhi uske khilaf Mat bolna..

Mallu *rolling her Eyes*..

Ashu,Nidhi and Anji Mathe par hath rakh kar.."Hey Bhagwaan"😆

i am also instant writer yippieee...

Thanks AVA,

Originally posted by: sshirley

Thanks AVA,

but where is ur contribution

Ji.. Ava... even we want to read your contri

Originally posted by: -Ava-

I am no scene-script-writer, but I would like to see separation track between these two. Where due to some major fight, the two love birds would separate and Nidhi would leave home and go back to her parents place, but she still continues to work at the same hospital as Ashutosh. They would still meet in the hospital cause they work together,but would keep it only at professional level. In the mids of separation track I would also like to see a jealousy track on Ashutosh's part, where he is jealous due to a new doctor hitting on Nidhi. And in that track of jealousy would bring Ashutosh and Nidhi closer together. As part of the jealousy track there should also be some comedy involved as well where Ashutosh would give the new doctor some weird tasks to complete. And of course in the end I would like to see these two back together and some awesome love scenes.

As you can see that I am complete sadist. 😆

Good track...but I see a danger with our writerji... This Ashutosh should not become a male version of Mallika...

Originally posted by: -Ava-

For once I would want to see him act Nidhi's age, rather than his own age (too mature). And hell no to Mallika version of Ashutosh 😆

True. he should not be so stiff...😆

Lovely post Mudra ,
here is my instant Khichdi :-

On there first wedding Night , Ashu gone to hospital to attend some emergency case and Nidhi waiting for him.

Khaali baithe baithe Ashu ka intezaar karte karte suddenly Nidhi got serious and worried.

Nidhi talking to herself - maine iske baare me pehle kyu nahi socha.

At the same time Ashu Entered and heard her.

Ashu - pehle kya nahin socha Nidhi
Nidhi Ashu ko dekhte hi harbada gayi
Nidhi - Aap Aa gaye , surgery kaisi thi
she was still talking in harbarahat
Ashu - Nidhi kya hua tumhe , tum theek toh ho
Nidhi - mujhe kya hua , kuch bhi toh nahin , Aap jaakar change kar legiye.
Ashu - Are you sure
Nidhi - haan
Ashu - Ok
Ashu goes to Washroom , After he was gone , nidhi picked up her phone and called to Anjie at 3 am in the night
Nidhi - Anjie phone utha...
She did not pick up , Nidhi tried again , this time Anjie took up the call.
Anjie - Nidhi itni raat me phone kyu kiya , koi problem toh nahi hai.
Nidhi - Anjie tu mujhe bolne degi tab toh mai bataungi
Anjie - Aachcha bata
Nidhi - Anjie Dr. Ashutosh ne mujhe kal se hospital join karne ko kaha hai
Anjie - toh isme problem kya hai tu bhi toh apni internship poori karna cahati hai
Nidhi - Anjie tu samajh nahi rahi , bahut badi problem hai isme .
Anjie - yaar tu kis problem ki baat kar rahi hai , mujhe toh koi problem nahin dikh rahi , waise bhi tu ab KGH ke Dean ki Biwi hai , teri toh aish hai Nidhi.
Nidhi - yehi toh sabse badi problem hai .
Anjie - kya problem hai Nidhi
Anjie got irritated this time , she was in half sleep

Nidhi - Anjie problem ye hai ki Hospital jane ke baad waha par sab mujhe Mrs. Hardstone kahenge.
Anjie - What ? She could not control her laughter.
Nidhi - Anjie tujhe kya ho gaya hai , mai itni badi problem me hu aur tu has rahi hai.
Suddenly she heard someone laughing from behind , she turned around , Ashu was standing there laughing . She switched off her phone .
Ashu was laughing uncontrollably
Nidhi realised he heard them
Nidhi gusse me - isme hasne ki kya baat hai
Ashu -Nidhi is problem ke baare me apko mujhse sadi karne se pehle sochna tha
Nidhi - agar aap hospital me itne strict nahi hote toh ye problem hi nahi Aati
Ashu - but nidhi you loved me for what I am
Nidhi - ye toh sahi hai

Ashu closed her in his arms seeing her cute face