Good post Mudra, waise kisine koi bhi romantic scene nahi likha to i m trying:Characters: Ashni and Ranji...
Situation: Ranji visiting Ashni after a big quarrel - specifically anji is angry with ranga,
The Scene:
Nidhi tries to wake ashu for tea. He is not getting up.
N: Jaldi uthiye warna...
A (with eyes closed, but mischieviously): Warna?
N: aap mujhe chalenge kar rahe hain?
A (yawning, noncommitedly): umm hmm
Nidhi suddenly takes his hands lovingly towards her mouth. ashu happily expects a kiss, but instead nidhi bites his lil finger. ashu shouts and nidhi giggles loudly...ashu in mock anger half gets up, puts the tea ciup on side table and suddenly pulls her onto the bed into his arms and holds her tight.
A (with mock anger): how dare you?
N (getting scared) i m sorry, pl. mujhe maaf kar dijiye... mujhe bhi na kabhi kabhi kya pranks soojhte hai..
A (mischieviously and huskily): pranks soojhte hain to ab unka anjaam bhi bhookto..." he cuddles her and starts snogging her all over with nidhi unsuccessfully trying to break free. he is about to kiss her, when the door bell rings...nidhi seizes the opportunity and gets out of his hold, reaches their bedroom door in no time and teases him by waving her thumb (thenga) and goes laughing to open the door. Ashu shakes his head smiling and goes to the bathroom.
Nidhi opens the main door and sees ranjie at the door.
nidhi: anji, dr. rangnath, aap dono itni subah subah? anyways andar toh aao.
anjie is looking v. upset and ranganath is looking v.. confused as to what to say.
Nidhi: Anjie kya hua tu itni upset kyun hai? koi prolbem, i mean problem hai kya?
anji (seeing that nidhi was laughing while opening the door, does not feel like spoiling her mood):
problem toh hai nidhi, vo aaj ki pooja ke liye mujhe yellow saree pahanni thi...aur amma mere liye leke bhi aayi thi bade pyaar se, lekin usme daag lag gaya isiliye socha tere paas haina vo yellow saari vo borrow kar leti hoon. (mischieviously) lekin lagta hai aap dono ko galat time pe disturb kiya.
Nidhi blushes profusely at this, but changes the topic hastily
N: Tu bhi na anji itni si baat se upset ho gayi, tu ruk main abhi leke aati hoon aur dr. ashutosh ko bhi bula deti hoon...
Nidhi runs to her room still blushing, thinking 'oh god, m i so obvious?' she sees that ashu is in bathroom so starts looking for the saree, she suddenly realizes that she had kept it on the top shelf. looks towards the bathroom thinking: "vo bahaar aayenge toh unse kahungi upar se utaar ke denge" After a moment, thinks 'lekin, un dono ko kab tak wait karaaoongi?" grabs a stool, climbs on it and searches for the saaree, finally spots it, says aloud: mil gayi
ashu (from the bathroom door) kya mil gaya.
nidhi is startled and is about to fall, when ashu runs and grabs her in his arms and the saari that nidhi had in her arms opens and drapes around them.
Nidhi (pleadingly): chodiye na
Ashu (with mock innocence): pakadta nahi toh tum gir jaati
N: Thik hai lekin ab to chodiye
A (huskily): kyun?
N: Bahar anji aur dr. ranganath aaye hain ...
A: Acha...toh?
N: (surprised): Agar vo andar aa gaye toh hume aise dekhenge
A (mischieviously): Dekhne do
N: (pleadingly): Dr. Ashutosh...
But ashu doesnt relent.
in the meantime, ranjie have started quarelling again with anji shouting and ranga trying to manao her. anji, in an attempt to go away from ranga, goes towards ashni room, and seeing the door open, goes inside absentmindedly and sees ashni under the saari and suddenly her anger disappears and she starts laughing loudly... Ashu immediately starts putting nidhi on the floor, but now its nidhi's turn to tease.
N: ab kya hua kyun mujhe utaar rahe hain? thak gaye kya?
A (Shocked): Anjie...usne sab kuch dekh liya
N (Teasing): toh?
A (Stunned): really nidhi tum...
N: Aur waise bhi the damage is already done...(winks)
but ashu makes her stand on floor anyways and removes the saree from over them and hands it to nidhi.
Anji (stops laughing): Aap dono lage rahiye, hum chalte hai...(and goes out and lovingly puts her arms in ranga's arms who has almost reached the bedroom door...ranga surprised but happy..
Meanwhile ashni blushing heavily, but nidhi recovers and runs after anji with the saari
Nidhi: arre anjie, ruk, ye saari toh leke jaa...
anjie (laughingly): Arre nahi, ab mujhe uski koi zaroorat nahi...uska use aap log love tent ki tarah zaari rakhiye. hum chale ...and ranjie exit and walk arm in arm towards their car.
ashni blush again and hug.
In the car,
Ranga: anji aapne aisa kya dekh liya wahan pe jo aapka saara gussa gayab ho gaya aur mujhpe itna pyaar aa raha hai?
anji (blushing): kuch nahi
r: bataiye na please
anji tell him, blushing all the while.
R: hmm... dr. ashutosh bahut smart hain...ab mujhe bhi samajh aa raha hai
A: kya samajh aa raha hai aapko?
R (mischieviously): Ghar chalke demo doon ya yahin car mein?
anji blushes
sorry guys for such a long scene...lekin kya karoon lamba hota gaya...hope you enjoy it
Edited by sshirley - 13 years ago
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