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tweetycat

@tweetycat

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

loved your ff.😃 its simple yet appealing and lovely👏👏 liked the way he lies to her everytime was wondering how will Nidhi react when she gets to know about the truth about all the lies of his😲 and how will he react when he gets to know the whole truth about her retionship with his BABA❓🤔.plz continue soon😉😉. love and take care🤗

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Sarika

@Blushsarika

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

👏 👏 so sweet and lovely update.
After five years Ashutosh came to know who helped his baba.
He was thankful to nidhi.
But what will be his reaction when he will know about Nidhi and her relation to his Baba.

Nidhi and her soft and simple nature add charm to the story.
It can be guessed ,if her dadi has so much of self respect.
Then Nidhi must be like her dadi .
Better if she does not find about the fact that ashu is bearing all her expences .
But if she comes to know about it what could be her reaction.
Curious to know it.
Good going.
Waiting for the next one
please update soon
and thanks for the long and lovely update

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vasanthi16

@vasanthi16

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Excellent update...laid the foundation for the relation between Ashu and Nidhi.

Nidhi is so sweet , innocent and quiet here...

Ashu lies for her so sweet...he wants her to get the opportunity as he knows she has it in her to be a good doc.

Loved their convo on the plane...Nidhi's Dadi sounds awesome !!!

Wonder how Nidhi will react when she comes to know Ashu has lied to her and paid for her out of his pocket ...

Waiting for the update ...soon pls !!

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sharmishtha02

@sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: ritzy09
awesome...though I was little surprised taht a doctor like nidhi did not know about checkin baggage and cabin baggage

Thanks dear. 😊 Nidhi is just a fresh MBBS graduate. She has studied in the same city where she lives and is from a family that is financially not very strong - essentially lower middle class. Flying is not the most common means of transport for them in India yet :) For long distance, they take trains!

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busybee..

@busybee..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

hey sharmishtha really nice update . . 👏👏👏👏👏

i just loved it. . . . . .n loved nidhi n ashutosh. . . .i was really thinking about mb n kk . n ya really nice dialogues. totally loved it. . . . .. .

thanks 4 really nice update.

n come soon with such a rocking update . .

i eagerly want to know about nidhi's reaction when she come to know about d expenses done by ashutosh . . 😊

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sharmishtha02

@sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: vanillaflowers
Mish...
Wonderful... Really flawless writing
Am really able to imagine the fears of a girl who is travelling on a flight for the first time.
I am gonna join the others and ask for the next update ASAP.
Vanilla.

Thanks Vanilla. Update will come tonight as usual 😊

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sharmishtha02

@sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Binat
Awesome. Smooth flowing and such simplicity in the relationship. Can see the start of a good friendsip between Ashu and Nidhi.

Cant wait for the next update😳

Thanks dear. 😊 This FF is going to remain simple in the treatment of the story. No major drama. All will be handled with quiet and maturity!

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karajekar

@karajekar

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

thanks for your ff it was nice

sonali

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nandinidavid

@nandinidavid

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Awesome update, but i was greedy for a bigger one. The way you developed the conversation between them is superb, brought back the memories of MB, started visualizing the body language of MB in the whole conversation. THANK YOU SO MUCH for giving the wonderful update.

True, Air travel is not very common even in middle class unless, it is an emergency and travel exceeds more than over night journey. Though, I'm from an urban upper middle class family, I have taken flight for the first time for official work as office was paying for it. Good to read the realities of social and economic upbringing and dynamics of social realities.

Thanks again for the beautiful work and post the next part ASAP

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sharmishtha02

@sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: heydoc27
thnk u for d update😃n i just bows😊
flawless😃
as i always say m ur big tym pankha,d first one i evr read was DK adaptation,since DK will always remain close to my heart n so will b ur FFs😊
d apprehension regrarding d flight n ur descritions of d whole enviro s a comfort setting for us to imagine evri oda stuff literally,i mean d last thing abt ashutosh resting n thinking😊
will b waiting eagerly for d next update😊

Thanks a lot dear. 😊 Good I chose to write DK adaptation first 😉 Gave me some SK loyalist readers immediately. 😃 Next update will be up tonight.