FF - The Story Of 2 Love Birds..[ Part 13 upd 15th May - Page 36 ]

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hellox

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Poojapange
Hey Hellox
Wonderful chapter...
This chapter is full of entertainment for me...
Ranga aadat se majbur...his dailogue was nice..second my darling ashu staring at his hands n then the whole scene is fabulous..hahaha everybody is asking kya hua? N then in ashu's cabin ashu said tum muze pagal kar dogi to priyanka by mistake...Ashu nidhi last part also good
Thank u...but next time make it looong

Thank u..glad its liked..
Regards..

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hellox

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Mehek25
Omg Hellox that was an awesome update...Hilarious from the point of Ranga entering Ashu's cabin...and dreamy from the point of Nidhi asking permission to go early...


Ur portrayal of the process of falling in love is done beautifully...Loved the way Ashu tells Ranga not to line marao on Nidhi...😊 


Thanx for the interesting update and also the PM...


Waiting for next update...

Thanks Mehek..glad that u liked it..and happy that hilarious part has been liked..more Ashni to come..next Part comin soon..
Regards..

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Bhanu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Lovely updates Hellox...Great going...loved part 5 a lot😃☺️.

The way Ashu says that "Nidhi pe toh line mat maro" its so nice...so he is already possessive about his girl😆😆.

Superb going yaar...the way AshNi love story is progressing is amazing...and should say very interesting. Loved everything in part 5...u know..dil ko sukoon mil gaya😊...muahhh...u nailed it. I guess Nidhi ne Ashu ko sach mein pagal kar diya😉.

Well, hoping to see more of AshNi scences in the future updates. So when can I expect your next update dear...plz make it soon..can't think about whats the next beautiful scene.

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hellox

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: anu13
Lovely updates Hellox...Great going...loved part 5 a lot😃☺️.

The way Ashu says that "Nidhi pe toh line mat maro" its so nice...so he is already possessive about his girl😆😆.

Superb going yaar...the way AshNi love story is progressing is amazing...and should say very interesting. Loved everything in part 5...u know..dil ko sukoon mil gaya😊...muahhh...u nailed it. I guess Nidhi ne Ashu ko sach mein pagal kar diya😉.

Well, hoping to see more of AshNi scences in the future updates. So when can I expect your next update dear...plz make it soon..can't think about whats the next beautiful scene.

Thank u so much..and yup..more Ashni scenes to come..next Part will be updated today 9t or tom..and the next Part has a beautiful scene..wait and watch..
Regards..

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hellox

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Part 6

Ashu takes Nidhi to her house..

Baba - ' Kya hua Nidhi..aaj itni jaldi aa gayi..oh..Ashutosh..tum bhi aaj aaye ho.. '

Ashu - ' Kya karu Col. Verma..halat aise hai.. '

Baba - ' Kya hua..sab tik toh hai na.. '

Ashu - ' Actually Nidhi ki tabiyat tik nahi hai..isliye ghar chodne chala aaya.. '

Baba - ' Kya hua Nidhi.. '

Nidhi - ' Kuch nahi Baba..bas aise hi.. '

Just then Dadi Bua comes..

DB - ' Kuch kaise nahi hua..khana toh khaati nahi hai..khaati bhi hai toh burger verger.. '

Nidhi - ' Bua..abhi toh nahi..plz. '

DB - ' Kya abhi nahi..isliye sochu ke tu itni patli kyun ho gayi.. '

Ashu interrupts..

Ashu - ' Bua..bua..chodiye..isse kamre main le jayiye..kal subah tak tik ho jayegi.. '

Baba - ' Thank u Ashutosh.. '

Ashu - ' Thats my job..chalo..main chalta hun.. '

Ashu leaves..

In the evening, Ashu is at home wen it strikes the status on Nidhi's health..he has never spoken to many gals over the phone..so he decides to msg her..

Ashu's msg - ' Hey Nidhi..how ru..hope ur health is improving.. '

Nidhi justs wakes from her nap wen she sees the msg..

Nidhi's reply - ' Hello sir..thank u for ur concern..health is improving..didnt have proper food and dint take enough water..so this condition.. '

Ashu's msg - ' Well..this routine doesnt suit a doctor..so better set a good diet rather than burgers.. '

Nidhi's reply - ' :-(..sir..actually in love with burgers..but will try shiftin the diet to roti and sabji..lol.. '

Ashu' msg - ' Wats lol..? '

Nidhi' reply - ' Laugh out loud..u dint know that.. '

Ashu's msg - ' Well i dont belong to this generation..so not much knowledge abt these stuff.. '

Nidhi's reply - ' Dont worry sir..ill teach u these stuff..and rather dont compare ur self with the youngsters..u still have dashin looks for ur age.. '

Ashu is in thoughts readin this msg..he doesnt knw wat to reply..some force makes him go to the mirror..he looks at himself and just gives a smile..

Ashu's msg - ' Lol..nice joke on my looks.. '

Nidhi's reply - ' Lol..u learnt it so fast..and it wasnt a joke..i swear.. '

Ashu's msg - ' Cut the topic..take ur medicine and take rest..bye bye.. '

Nidhi's reply - ' Fyn sir..i will..u too take good care.. '

Meanwhile Armaan has been seeing Ashu from the very first msg he had sent..

Armaan - ' Kya bai..kya ho raha hai..mobile ko kuch zyada hi dekha jaa raha hain.. '

Ashu - ' Kuch nahi yaar..woh meri ek intern ki aaj tabiyat kharab ho gayi thi..toh isiliye uski tabiyat ke baare main puch raha tha.. '

Armaan - ' Wah bete..humari kabhi itni dekh baal nahi hui..tune meri tabiyat ki kabhi itni fikr nahi ki.. '

Ashu - ' Kya yaar Armaan..chal..ek kaam kar..tu burger khaa khaa ke apni tabiyat bigad..fir tu dekh main kaisi teri tabiyat ka khayal rakhta hun.. '

Armaan - ' Chal..chale.. '

Ashu - ' Ha..lekin sirf chay ke liye.. '

The duo leave with Ashu explaining abt the side effects of burgers..

Next morning Nidhi is resting on her bed wen Anji comes in..

Anji - ' Kya hua..Baba ne bataya tabiyat kharab hai teri.. '

Nidhi - ' Kuch zyada nahi..woh parso ulta sidha khaa liya fir paani bhi nahi piya..toh uski wajah se todi weakness aa gayi.. '

Anji - ' Tu bhi na..chal..abh kaisi hai tabiyat.. '

Nidhi - ' Tik hai.. '

Anji - ' Toh ek kaam karte hai..City Mall main aaj shopping karne chalte hai..aaj last date hai sale ka.. '

Nidhi - ' Yaar..main soch rahi thi main hospital chali jaati hun.. '

Anji - ' Baad main chali jaana..fir sale khatam ho gayi toh.. '

Nidhi - ' Tik hai..tujhse kaun jite..chal.. '

The duo get ready and leave for the mall..After shoppin Nidhi is leavin the Mall premises wen Ashu just passes away..he notices and leaves..Anji leaves for home and Nidhi leaves for the hospital..

Nidhi reaches the hospital and meets Ashu..

Nidhi - ' Gud afternoon sir.. '

Ashu - ' Nidhi..tum subah kahan thi.. '

Nidhi gets scared and answers - ' Sir..main ghar par thi.. '

Ashu angrily - ' Tum jhoot bol rahi ho..tum City Mall main thi..agar tumhari tabiyat tik thi toh fir hospital kyun nahi aayi? Isliye kyunki tum shopping main busy thi..Am i ryt? '

Nidhi is shocked to knw that Ashu knows that she was at the City Mall..

Edited by hellox - 13 years ago

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hellox

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

@all..and people new to my FF..have a look at the Index on Page 1 for previous Parts..thank u..
Regards..

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Bhanu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Nice update Hellox...yes of course Ashu (MB) is more than dashing ☺️ for his age...just love him. Ashu angry on Nidhi...hope he is playing some prank😛 on her...so update soon...and hey thnx for the PM.

Edited by anu13 - 13 years ago

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AMBIKA2561979

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Sorry...for the late reply..i had read all the previous parts, but cudnt reply...WONDERFUL FF...ASHU is soo caring towards Nidhi...😊...n the way ASHU tells RANGA to atleast spare Nidhi...soo cute..😉...

- ' Kya yaar Armaan..chal..ek kaam kar..tu burger khaa khaa ke apni tabiyat bigad..fir tu dekh main kaisi teri tabiyat ka khayal rakhta hun.. '...😆😆..loved it...

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hellox

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: anu13
Nice update Hellox...yes of course Ashu (MB) is more than dashing ☺️ for his age...just love him. Ashu angry on Nidhi...hope he is playing some prank😛 on her...so update soon...and hey thnx for the PM.

Thank u..and regarding Ashu's anger..wait and watch..
Regards..

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hellox

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: AMBIKA2561979
Sorry...for the late reply..i had read all the previous parts, but cudnt reply...WONDERFUL FF...ASHU is soo caring towards Nidhi...😊...n the way ASHU tells RANGA to atleast spare Nidhi...soo cute..😉... 
- ' Kya yaar Armaan..chal..ek kaam kar..tu burger khaa khaa ke apni tabiyat bigad..fir tu dekh main kaisi teri tabiyat ka khayal rakhta hun.. '...😆😆..loved it...

Thanks dea..and yup..the line told by Ashu to spare Nidhi really puts a sweet pinch in the Part..thanks for the support..
Regards..