FF - The Story Of 2 Love Birds..[ Part 13 upd 15th May - Page 36 ]

niniborn2rule

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

the process of falling in love is well potrayed...good job👏

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hellox

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: niniborn2rule
the process of falling in love is well potrayed...good job👏

Thank u..more to come soon..the next update has a sweet essence..comin soon..
Regards..

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Sarika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Supeb update,
Ashu toh nidhi ke khayalo me pagal ho gaya hai.
Loved his expressions.
Raga ki masti was very good.
Good going.
Looking forward for there lovely romantic interactions .
Continue soon

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hellox

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Blushsarika
Supeb update,
Ashu toh nidhi ke khayalo me pagal ho gaya hai.
Loved his expressions.
Raga ki masti was very good.
Good going.
Looking forward for there lovely romantic interactions .
Continue soon

Thank u..and yup..Ashni can feel some pinch..the next Part has a marvelous scene..hope it will be liked..wait and watch..
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hellox

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Posted: 13 years ago

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@Blushsarika..and yup..Ranga's part i have kept as a flirt and mastibhari one..much more to come for Ranga and Ashni..
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vanillaflowers

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

hi...

i simply loved the way ashu says nidhi par to line mat maro...

nice narration... keep it going... aur make the updates more frequent na... its tough to wait...

Lovely writing and keep rocking.

Vanilla.

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hellox

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: vanillaflowers

hi...
i simply loved the way ashu says nidhi par to line mat maro...
nice narration... keep it going... aur make the updates more frequent na... its tough to wait...
Lovely writing and keep rocking.
Vanilla.

Thank u..and ill be as frequent as possible with the updates..actually been busy with lots of work..so..hope to update next Part soon..thank u..
Regards..

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hellox

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Posted: 13 years ago

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@vanillaflowers..i have to give a gap of a day between my Parts..good see that u cant wait..next Part might be tom..
Regards..

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Mehek25

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Omg Hellox that was an awesome update...Hilarious from the point of Ranga entering Ashu's cabin...and dreamy from the point of Nidhi asking permission to go early...

Ur portrayal of the process of falling in love is done beautifully...Loved the way Ashu tells Ranga not to line marao on Nidhi...😊

Thanx for the interesting update and also the PM...

Waiting for next update...

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Pooja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Hey Hellox
Wonderful chapter...
This chapter is full of entertainment for me...
Ranga aadat se majbur...his dailogue was nice..second my darling ashu staring at his hands n then the whole scene is fabulous..hahaha everybody is asking kya hua? N then in ashu's cabin ashu said tum muze pagal kar dogi to priyanka by mistake...Ashu nidhi last part also good
Thank u...but next time make it looong

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