AshNi OS#8: ~Stick With You~ (Page17) - Page 8

bold and beautiful😉
loved it

Wowww... It was very hot and sensuous OS.
But why are you thinking of removing some parts , I don't feel anything was there which could be called cheap.
Oh! Don't worry it was a lovely OS.
You have described after married life of Ashni so beautifully.
And please continue it.
Don't end it just here.
Would love to read more.
And thanks for the pm

amazing loved it don't remove any thing its perfect

It's so much hot and i really enjoyed it.👏👏👏

super hot & sexy dear while reading i was just feeling ☺️ ☺️
☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

sonali

HEY ANA loved it just loved it. 🤗. . . . .dont ever u think of removing any part 4m this. . . btw i m lovestory fan so i really like this. . . . . .

Hey Hi Ana di...
First of all thanks for another OS of Ashni...
U choosed perfect Title n Song for this OS...
Ashu is such a darling..''she is taking bath...alone?''..i love this dailogue...U wrote beautifuly all scenes including romance, fun, care n my favourite teasing...
I love this Naughty Ashu not only bcoz of his naughtyness but also for his cute behaviour, teasing,loving nature,romantic personality n last but not d least coz me imagine him as MB SIR...
Nidhi(KK) also perfect at her side n also very cute...
Thank you...keep writing...

first of all thanks for the p.m. and secondly u described the married life of ashni beautifully.👏 it reminded me of Mills and boon type of romance😳erotic yet romantically sweet☺️and dont think about removing any part its fantabulous👍🏼⭐️.loved the way u described him teasing her and her licking and sucking of the thumb ☺️and yes he can carry ne1 in his broad shoulders i can imagine😳.thanks again👏.love and take care😃

Originally posted by: niniborn2rule

Ana dont even dare to remove anything...very well written...👏

Originally posted by: sowmyap03

hot hot!!!! summer me itna hot update!!! nice one...

Originally posted by: SwastikAshNi

Don't imagine about removing but can think about adding.Superb Hawt!!!

Originally posted by: ritu3kumar

bold and beautiful😉
loved it

nini, sowmya, swasti and ritu
thanku so much guys for the super supoort😳
i got that warning...didn't removed a single bit😃
hope you had fun with this one and will have with the next one too😛

Originally posted by: Blushsarika

Wowww... It was very hot and sensuous OS.
But why are you thinking of removing some parts , I don't feel anything was there which could be called cheap.
Oh! Don't worry it was a lovely OS.
You have described after married life of Ashni so beautifully.
And please continue it.
Don't end it just here.
Would love to read more.
And thanks for the pm

thanku so much sarika dear
i needed that support and so glad to see ur response...😊
ahem ahem...cont it...well thats not really in my mind right now...but next OS is on its way😃

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

amazing loved it don't remove any thing its perfect

thanku so much jyothi dor being always supportive to me yara😃