Nainoon ki Basha Samajhe na:Ashni SS Last part - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
Egerly waiting for next part, plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Well written...plz do continue...n plz dont write short FF's make it a bit lengthy ..coz before we start imagining, the chapter ends...😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks a lot 4 d lovely comments
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nainoon ki Basha Samajhe na Part 2

Thanku so much 4 d comments.I did'nt expect this much.I hope like b4 u all will giv me detailed comments

It was Anji's birthday party.
Everybody including Nidhi's eyes were searching for Ashutosh.Finally he stepped in.Anji ran and hugged him.Nidhi smiled.
Ashu:Happy birthday Anji..
He gave her a big chocolate box.
Anji:Thank you Chachu..
Anji cut the cake and served others cake.

Ashu:Anji..where is Nidhi?
Nidhi was overwhelmed hearing Ashutosh enquiring about him.
N:He still remembers me.
She ran towards them.
Anji:Finally Nidhi came.
Ashu:I just can't believe this.You grew so tall.
She smiled.
Anji went away.
N:Last time you said i looked sweet in my frock.Today how do i look in this saree?
Ashu:I must say..wonderful.Very soon you will get marriage proposals.
Her face became dull.
Ashu:One second.I will come now.
He went.
Ashu took a chocolate box from his bag.He brought it and gave it to her.
Nidhi was surprised:Thank you.You remembered to buy it for me?
Ashu:You are my Anji's best friend.How can i not bring it for you.But this time for God's sake don't finish it together.
They both giggled.
Ashu:Nice to see you after a long time Dr.Nidhi..
N:I became a doctor only because you asked me to become a doctor.But now i enjoy my work.It's a holy service.
Ashu:Really.

The next evening...
Nidhi went for a walk.She was surprised to find Ashutosh on the road.
She ran towards him.
N:Dr.Ashutosh!
A:Hi Nidhi..what a surprise!You like evening walk?
N:Ya..i feel relaxed...fresh air...people on the street.Nice feeling.When i don't have night duty i go for a walk.
They chatted a lot while walking.It started raining.
N:Wow rain..
Ashu also felt cool in the rain.Nidhi was surprised to see him enjoying in the rain.
She thought:Who said Dr.Ashutosh will not marry?He may be scared to get married after a bitter experience.But it's not that he does'nt believe in marriage.He is romantic.That's why he is enjoying rain inspite of being a doctor.She felt nice seeing him in the rain.
N:I think we had enough.We both will fall ill.
They smiled.They went to a near by tea shop and started sipping tea.
A:I love drinking hot tea during monsoon.

She was shivering,but she forgot the coldness seeing him sipping the tea like a cute boy.

N:Dr.Ashutosh,you are so romantic like the Bollywood heroes who enjoy in the rain.
His face became dull.
A:I love rain.That does'nt mean that i am romantic.I hate romance.
N:Why?Just because your fiancee cheated on you?
He stared at her unbelievingly.
N:I know your past Dr.Ashutosh.Forget your past.Fall in love again.Without love life is nothing.
He questioned her in a sarcastic way:Ok.You may be right.Without love life is nothing.But who will love a middle aged man like me?
She looked at his eyes:Someone who really loves you.There may be a beautiful girl for you somewhere in this world.You may not know where she is.
He looked at her face.

She was smiling.

N:Dr.Ashutosh,one day you come to my house also.
A:Ok.


At home also she was thinking of the rain scene.
N:Why i am always thinking of Dr.Ashutosh ever since i saw him?Why does he hold a special place in my heart?
She closed her eyes.She saw his face.She touched her bosom.She felt her heart beat.
N:I love DR.Ashutosh.The girl about whom i was telling him was me.I am the one who is born to love Dr.Ashutosh.
She saw the glimpses of the song
'sathiya, sathiya
pagle se dil ne ye kya kiya
chun liya chun liya
tujhko diwane ne chun liya
dil to uda uda re asmaan me badlo ke sang
ye to machal machal ke ga raha hai sun nayi si dhun
badmash dil to thag hai bada
badmash dil ye tujhse juda
badmash dil meri sune na zid pe ada
badmash dil to thag hai bada
badmash dil ye tujhse juda
badmash dil meri sune na zid pe ada

acchi lage dil ko mere har teri baat re
saya tera ban ke chalu itna hai khwab re
kandhe pe sar rakh ke tere kat jaye rat re
bite hai din thame tera hatho me hath re
ye kya hua mujhe mera ye dil fisal fisal gaya
ye kya hua mujhe mera jahan badal badal gaya
badmash dil to thag hai bada
badmash dil ye tujhse juda
badmash dil meri sune na zid pe ada
badmash dil to thag hai bada
badmash dil ye tujhse juda
badmash dil meri sune na zid pe ada...'{Singham}.
She imagined her and Ashu in place of Ajay and Kajal.

Another evening...
Ashutosh searched for Nidhi on the road.
A:Why did'nt Nidhi come today for a walk?Today she has no night duty.
He went to Nidhi's house.
She was surprised to see him.
A:Why did'nt you come today?
N:I was not in a mood.I'm happy that you came to our house.Please come inside.
He got in.
She thought:Dr.Ashutosh missed me.That's why he came here searching for me.
She felt happy.
A:Where is your father Colonel Verma?
N:He has gone for a meeting.
The light went off.
A:Oh!
N:Don't worry.I will a light a candle and bring it.
She went inside and brought a lit candle.Ashutosh saw her lovely face.He felt that in darkness Nidhi's face was shining like a moon in the dark sky.He could'nt take his eyes off her.Nidhi understood it and blushed.
He thought:What am i doing?What is happening with me?
He controlled himself.
A:I am going.
N:So soon?

A:I remember some important task to be completed.So bye.
N:Bye.
He went out.

He could not sleep at night.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
wow..Well Written..You have incorporated scenes from KTLK in your stories...These are best scenes of KTLK..rain scenes and Candle Chai...Nidhi is already in love...and Ashu is feeling attracted to her..Finally we are going to have..'pyaar ki aahat bhi hai and hichkichahat bhi hai'..Which was never shown in KTLK...I will enjoy that part in your FF...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Awesome update,Hey m so happy yaar,jese rabzonedge ne kaha,finaly jo serial me kabhi dekhneko nhi mila wo tumhare ff me mila, "pyar ki aahat bhi he aur hichkichahat bhi",Thnk u for that and next time i want looong update plzzz. I Like u r ff very much.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
comtinue soon dr...awesome👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Hey Jasmine...
Love d chapter...
I m agree wid both in ur ff 'pyar ki ahat b hai aur hichkichahat b'...
Hmm so now Ashu also attracted to nidhi..good going...
Eagerly waiting to read Ashu's feelings about Nidhi
Thank you
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
Awesome...I like the way you have incorporated scenes from ktlk into your ff. stopped watching ktlk but love reading the ff's so much more romantic and realistic.
Can't wait for the be the next chapter. Don't keep us waiting too long 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Loved your FF jasmine. Please continue soon.
Edited by Blushsarika - 13 years ago

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