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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey everyone,

I have posted the last part of this FF. Hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

And a bit of self-advertisement at this point. If you liked this and earlier FFs of mine, and you like mature love stories, you might also like my book Moving On. The links for purchase are in my signature (it is available only online, not in brick and mortar bookstores)

This book has been written by my real name. But shh.. don't reveal this name there. This is an FF only name and identity I have and I love it 😛

If you read it, would love to get a review. The facebook page of the book is here - http://facebook.com/MovingOnTheBook Please do join and help me market the book. 😊

Love
Mish
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmishtha02


I am going to take a stand of "essence of womanhood" in next part. Don't know if you will agree or not. Let's see. 😊

Just read the last part and the stand you have taken really makes sense... Very noble and right thoughts...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nahinnn!!!! Itni jaldi khatam kar diya.

Beautiful, beautiful update. Ashu's explanation on motherhood is perfect. Giving birth to a baby is difficult but what truly and exceptionally tough is, giving a good life to that child.

I agree with Armaan on the pamphlets idea. 👏 👏 👏

It was great reading your FF. Hope to see you back soonest with a new FF 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic ending...

The explanation was probably necessary as misconceptions regarding this are aplenty...loved ur take on it ...frankly never thought of it as u have written ...for that alone u deserve a big 🤗Kudos to u.

Throughout all the FFs in this forum ...all u writers have remained true to the characterisation of each and every character in the story...

Wish the the CVs ...the so called creative writers of KTLK had understood this simple thing and given us a good story with a beautiful script.
Sorry for this rant as it still angers me a lot...

Mish u r a fantastic writer and i wish u the best in all the writing endeavours in the future. Will defo buy ur book thru flipkart when i go to India.

Thanks for giving me all the FFs to read and enjoy !!!👏👍🏼

Gives me immense pleasure to see Ashu and Nidhi happy ...this will stay as happy memories !!
Edited by vasanthi16 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ApoorvaFan

Just read the last part and the stand you have taken really makes sense... Very noble and right thoughts...


Thanks AF 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki kash... yeh CV'S bhi tumhari FF ki tarah itni khoobsurat tariqe se story ko aage barhate to aaj bhi MB hamare sath hi hote, ab sirf itni umeed hai ki SK ke aane ke baad story ko proper way me execute kare with lot.s of ashni romance, positivty
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great,every point pf view about the Motherhood is just great.Thank you for such a wonderful Love Story and request you to come back with a New FF.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nsylesh

Nahinnn!!!! Itni jaldi khatam kar diya.

Beautiful, beautiful update. Ashu's explanation on motherhood is perfect. Giving birth to a baby is difficult but what truly and exceptionally tough is, giving a good life to that child.

I agree with Armaan on the pamphlets idea. 👏 👏 👏

It was great reading your FF. Hope to see you back soonest with a new FF 🤗


Thanks dear. 😊 Really glad you all liked this part. I was very keen on seeing reaction to this one. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 12

Like good things this too must come to an end. SO here comes the review for part 12-13

AWWW these two parts are simply knee melting, heart warming , and to me here the ashu we see would be a perfect blend of Ahmeer and Ashu.

Ashu is so endearing at the start of part 12, he knows what's wrong but poor thing does not form what angle to start the conversation. The tenderness in which he cares for her is heart-warming. Finally he decides to go the only way he knows medical rationality. His emphasising that nothing will change in my eyes emphasises his pain that she could have thought herself less worthy post that op.

Finally he breaks down and his emotions take the lead

"Nidhi,"Ashutosh suddenly went to her and held her hands, "Nidhi. You are a wonderful woman. The most wonderful woman in the world. Aur jo bhi ladka tumhari zindagi mein aayega, woh bahut khushkismat hoga. Ye ek fact hai, aur ye kabhi nahin badlega. Tum kabhi bhi ye mat samajhna ki is operation ki wajah se tumhari zindagi ruk gayi hai. Tum... tum meri baat samajh rahi ho na?

It is painful the way he does not say him but ek ladka in a way his insecurity is still somewhere part of the equation he does not see himself as the one who can bring her happiness I guess coz of the baba issue.

In a way nids reactions show her emotions as being quite raw as well... both may have accepted their feelings but at this point there clearly is a cross wire communication situation. Ashu in his mind trying to show nids that she would not change post the op and nids at the other extreme seeing herself as not being worthy of anyman... and here not wishing to impose herself on him.

And finally her reaction his what breaks through his defences and man do we love him for that... finally the good doc lets his heart do the talking.One feels for him when he says he will talk to baba, ask for his happiness/ her happiness as bheek...you see that now he wants to fight, the need to be with her is too much.

And the good Maam drops her news... you cannot blame her but goood you have to love ashu here , the feelings come out larger than life...

"You know what Nidhi. You have been such a fool ki ab main tumse poochhoonga bhi nahin ki tum mujhse shaadi karogi ya nahin. Mera wash chalta to abhi tumse zabardasti shaadi kar leta aur is operation ke consent papers par khud sign karta.

I just love these words... you feel the passion the need... now he is not gone listen to her... she is his and he wants to claim it loud and clear... she has done things her way but now its his turn... reminds me a tad of Rohan when he gets smitri back from Chennai and in DK when he said that if he listened to his heart he would see her here in his house. GOOOD mish MB would have breathed life to these words.

Agar tumhari is ek medical problem ki wajah se tum mujhe mil gayi, to main is problem ke liye oopar waale ko thanks kahna chahta hoon. Jo bhi hua, bahut achcha hua. Bahut hi achchha hua..."

Apoorvafan raised a question on that and I'd like to add on... they may seem Un ashu like but we have to bear in mind it is a man who is speaking with the heart here and the power of emotion is much stronger here... he is reflecting on the means ... hard though it is it did bring her to him.

The anji part and nids joke about BP serve as a good relief after a tension filled scene .. and you have to love the way anji handles it. Ashu as well is more at ease with expressing himself here which is a pleasure to see.

Heheh the post op seq is lovely just lovely... caring and protective ashu absolutely droolworthy and we see the bubbly nids resurfacing.

You have to love this ashu... he is a completely new man who fully assumes the relationship now... and he is right in a way... nids has been making all the sacrifices and now things have got to change... love the way he reflects on the whole thing... he now has the guts to see things in perspective and accepts his part in the sufferings both had to face.

Slowly but surely... the end part paves the way for part 13. Mish honey wished the CVs had a 1/10000000000000000 of the creativity that you have shown

Sharifa
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vasanthi16

Fantastic ending...


The explanation was probably necessary as misconceptions regarding this are aplenty...loved ur take on it ...frankly never thought of it as u have written ...for that alone u deserve a big 🤗Kudos to u.


Thanks a lot Vasanthi. 😊 🤗

And about what they are doing in the show. Sigh! What can one say.

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