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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Hi Mish,

Thanks for another rocking FF dear👏. It has always been a pleasure to read your FFs and even loved this one😊.

When I came to know the name of it...I was taken aback for a while, but when started reading it….felt this really gonna lead to some awesome track ahead

Here we go...

PART 1

"Parwah nahin hai aapki? Parwah nahin hai aapki, isliye paaglon ki tarah dhoondh raha hoon aapko, right? Itne dinon se ssath hain hum. Aur itna hi samajh payin hain aap mujhe? Kya kah rahi thi aap? Mar jaati zyada se zyada? Bolne ke pahle ek baar sochna hota hai Dr. Nidhi ki saamne waale oopar uska kya asar padega. Parwah mujhe aapki nahin hai ya aapko meri nahin hai?"

Well, you said that Ashu doesn't speak out much in this FF...but the above really relieved me...as I already said I was a little scared with the title, "Sacrifices😲." I just loved each and every word of it⭐️...its just reflecting beautifully how much he cares about his life, Nidhi.

You have nicely handled the track where Nidhi had duty in record room and the way Ashu handled the situation with Mallika was, being professional here, nice.

PART 2 and 3

Just Love Nidhi...all the childishness, bubbliness, straightforwardness, muaahhh...just love when she barges into Ashu's cabin with liberty...and whenever I read (actually read your FFs twice, thrice or whenever my mood is off...it just lifts up all my spirits), "didn't even knock before barging into his office," I get a smile on my face...I just have adoration of her vivacity.

Wowww...Ashu's birthday and Nidhi throwing a party for him🥳...I too joined it though you didn't call me personally😭...lolzzz...well, it really was a very nice thought...and the whole discussion about the leap year...it just took me back to my schooling😃...thnx for the revision😆...I really like their sweet, cute, little arguments...hope to see more of this sort.

The love they have for each other is amazing...without saying they say everything through their eyes...which you have depicted charmingly through your words when they stared each other at Dr. A's house☺️.

Ufff...Mallika😡...just can't bear her...but loved the way Nidhi gave her back word to word...yes she need to really keep her professional and personal life apart as Nidhi and Ashu told her...in a sweeter or bitter but a smarter way...just superb writing dear👍🏼.

"I hope aapne enjoy kiya party ko."

"Ab tak to bahut kiya," Ashutosh openly admired her presence.

And once again thnx for our loving Ashu...its nice to see the way he is opening up and expressing himself to Nidhi...when he was saying the above, it seemed to me...like everything was happening in front of me...muaahhh...

And even caring for her when he goes back to hospital to help her out and wanting her to take rest after the party.

What I appreciate the more in your FFs is you show both the professional and personal life of the characters😎, which I would have wished to see in the show very often...I mean you show the love story as well as never forget about the hospital and every once in a while...you show about the hospital, cases of patients, their treatment, how much interns need to learn, etc., etc...which has shades of a real life story than creativity...as well as giving us the knowledge of Medicine through your FF😆😃.

Loved how Ashu was getting attracted and loving her more day by day...which was clearly reflected when he unknowingly caressed her head...though was out of the trance very soon...poor me, wanted more of it😉.

Well, you did justice to Nidhi's character professionally too👍🏼...I mean she was an intern...though she never wanted to be a doc, but was happy with her profession because of Ashu...and wanted to learn things without any delay after her helplessness in diagnosing the patient and showing how much she wanted to become a doctor and serve the people.

Here comes The Cupid❤️...Armaan...❤️just love him...hope everyone has a friend like him. Loved the way he teased Ashu...asking him about the "Midnight Hospital Date." Wowww...Ahem...Ahem...would never forget those words. But bechara...can't win with Ashu at the end...never mind...I am sure he really gonna help them bring together in the future parts of your FF...and will be waiting for those parts...

Hey sorry dear just reviewed for 3 parts...will be doing the rest soon...as reviewing these aroused the desire to read your FF again...so I am gonna read it again and comment...

Love you...keep writing...hoping to see your next update soon...and please do keep on writing and don't say that its your last FF...as Dil always maange more...

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Shari30

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Mish meri jaan... goes shari in the Arman ishtyle as promised here is the review I hope that IF does not ban me after that...

Shari

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Mish I love you and you know it... have been reading your work since the Geet days and seriously Dk and its pale attempt at being a copy KTLK has allowed you to be simply too good { though here i would say maybe it is MB lovely perf as Ashu that did the trick}

Part 6

The opening itself is bound to get out attention...using their job you have shown how despite their decision to stay apart their love is and will continue to develop. The injection epi... experience v/s vulnerability and so strongly displayed... and you have to give it to your ashu, he is awww, he never underplays nids position, he helps when he has to and relinquishes control back to her, it is her case and she should be in charge.

Nidhi had again reverted to not knocking before entering his office.

To me this shows that their understanding is now stronger, they know where they stand so they will not change their ways. Hehe one can almost see an underlining authority of nids here J

The office exchange would have been a visual treat had we seen MB in that . They are associated thanks to their career but when they are alone like here in the office the masks can fall, Ashu can lower his guard almost. The discussion is interesting... and it's nice to see how ashu brings it back to them. The beauty of their relationship is how despite the odds here in the confine of his office they complete each other.

"Can I let myself go Nidhi? Bas jo thode din hamare paas bache hain unmein? Kya main tumhein apne man ki sab baatein bata sakta hoon. Jo ki shayad mujhe nahin batani chahiye kyonki is rishte ka, hamari feelings ka future mujhe maaloom hai. Lekin phir bhi..."

Simply perfect words,the longing and the bittersweet feeling of reason seeping through but haaaila I could almost hear MB murmuring these words.

To phir hum ye haq kyon na claim karein?"

As much as there was longing in Ashu's words , here Nids is voicing her feelings in a more open way... it is yours to take why do you ask ?

Well every nice dream must end... after a nice moment wid ASH NI now the entry of evil Mal must be the return to reality ur haan what reality!!! Actually Rukshar would have done justice to your malu more that the foolish woman we see on tv .

From being wid the love of his life now to the woman who wished to have been the love of his life.

they had silently conversed that Nidhi should leave.

Naino ki bhasha it seems.. these tiny moments are the nice illustrations of their love... words not needed... a look, a smile a move is enough.

What follows... hmm the perfect face a face... where you have ashu who with much strength lol almost gusto stands up for nids.. you feel the pride in his acknowledgement. As much as I am an MB fan that scene where he tells Mallu about nids was as appealing as dish water. But here... MB would have breathed fire here. He is logical, consistent and absolutely yummy .

Then the moment of epiphany where Malu wakes up from her Ashu mania and starts being logical. Her reaction is interesting as at least now she realises the pain that ashu is facing.

Mallu Nids face a face... a mature and well thought one... better this on any day that the 12 sec ki meeting v/s the 12 years. The nids here is a strong woman who by now is sure of her affections, they might have decided to part but she is stronger and she sure knows her man. You have to love the truths she throws at mallu.

Pata hai aapki problem kya hai? Aap Dr. Ashutosh ko jaanti ho hain, lekin kabhi samajh nahin payi.

Simple words yet so true... knowing and understanding.. two simple things that can be so poles apart, you think you know but you never understand how the person thinks.

Just as malu is left thoughtful so are we as reader, the words nids has used aver very powerful as it highlights the strength of their relationship... they are apart and will be apart but they are each other's support.

Final scene of the part is a nice interlude as it gives the right setting to showcase the change in mallu, in a way there is a hint that the episode has been an eye opener for Mal,.

Hehe rangnath... the best part of KTLK the perfect tension buster,

Lovely part... which continues to build up their love story yet the blending of an almost painful longing is here for all to feel.

If part 6 has been nectar to the imagination Part 7 is ambrosia. I could hate you on two counts... making me cry and feel bad that we would never see MB acting in something like this

Part 7 starts nice... we see nids back in her childish mood almost... her non understanding malu behaviour and ashu indulging her. Though like in part 6 here too through playful exchange they come back to the main idea... the share of happiness that each feel the other deserves.

Nidhi remained silent for a while. Then she spoke firmly, "Dr. Ashutosh. Agar aap mera intezaar karenge, to main hamare rishte par give up nahin karoongi. Mujhe nahin pata ki kaise hoga, lekin ek din main Baba ko zaroor mana loongi."

"Aap aise kuchh nahin karengi Dr. Nidhi Verma. Kissi obsession ko le kar zindagi kaise stagnant ho jaati hai, ye main achchhi tarah jaanta hoon. Aur aapki life waise hi stagnant ho jaye, ye main nahin bardasht karoonga."

You have got to love that one... the one who sees the glass as half full and the other as half empty. One can feel the pain of ashutosh when he stops her, but he remains firm and for that we have to admire him. The key word in nids comment... not give up... kind of ominous they don't want to give up but for the eyes of society they have to but they have not deep within their souls.

GOsssh mish how do you do it? I have told you many a time your writing is like wine which with time gets better and better... the farewell scene is a masterstroke and for that i bow down to your talent (i.e a super bear hug)

If you wanted me to stop wid my ashu/MB mania you should not have written this :P Gosh if MB had a scene like that it would have been skyrocket TRP.

From the start, the pain, the longing mixed with fatality. He has accomplished his duties in the eyes of society and he retires to nurse his pain.. away from her to be able to better face her. God woman i could so see MB in that. And when she comes in... goosebump moment... the silence at first said so much more than any words could have.

Again Goosebumps moment when you describe her feelings as she sees the back of him... one trying to gain control and then wham when he turns how she drinks in every single detail, and to the risk of repeating that should have been MB inside out. That hug, him letting go of his control... it had to happen and so beautifully depicted.

The emotions are so running high, you can feel both have reached the end of their control but trying their best to remain in control for the sake of the other.

And then whaaam Nidhi drops her news... oh well distance to zaroori hai... otherwise how not to succumb to yummy Ashutosh. But her giving her roll number hints at the continuity of her promise to him to do her best in her career.

Nidhi looked confused at his request, but gave him the mobile anyway. Ashutosh searched for his name in her address book and deleted it. Then he gave it back to her.

"Seriously Dr. Ashutosh?" she asked defiantly and gave him a challenging smile before leaving.

Heheee.,,, reversal of role... ashu as the childish one... almost naive as to how he hopes to go away from her life and her defiance is endearing.

Post departure... the mal ashu interlude is obvious after mallu has realised where she stands at least you have to appreciate her for trying to be the friend she should always have been.

"Uski koshish bhi mat karo Mallika. Bekaar mein tumhein disappointment hogi."

Fatalistic these words are but shows the depth of his emotion, him and his loneliness are enough... its him and Nidhi and no one else can step in.

And then you end in a dhamaka way

He heard a sigh at the other end and fell silent. There was nothing wrong with the line. The sound of that sigh took him back to a moment from two days ago. She had sighed just after he had released her from his tight hug. His eyes became moist and he slumped back in the chair. It was her. He should tell her not to call him, not to remember him. But he did not open his mouth. He sat there motionless, speechless so long as the call was on. She also did not say anything. After about two minutes, the call was disconnected.

Tears were flowing out of Ashutosh' eyes by then. But he realized that he was no longer feeling listless. He wiped his tears and got out of his chair. He went to the ward and busied himself in his work for the rest of the day.

It became a daily ritual after that. The call came. He picked it up, said 'hello' and then they stayed with each other in silence. He never heard her voice. But it wasn't needed either. He had saved that number in Nidhi's name in his mobile.

Sometimes she called twice a day. Sometimes late at night, when he was in the hospital. She seemed to know when he was staying at the hospital for the night. He had started carrying an ear-phone with him. He would pick up the call even if he was in the middle of some work. Then he will continue with his work, instructing the nurse about the medicines, admonishing the patient about not following the suggested diet, joking and playing with the kids. And she listened. For as long as she could.

The whole essence of their love story, its not what is or what should have been ... he knows he should have told her off but the temptation is too strong at least for these moments they are part of each other's life, they get their inspiration to go one.

Mish these two parts have been simply mindblowing...you have combined DK and KTLK and come up with something that is just perfect...

Yeh dil mange more

Shari

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sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Continued from Part 7

Happy Holi Update 😃

Part 8

Rangnath had invited Ashutosh to his and Anji's wedding and he had readily agreed surprising everyone. As it is, he wasn't the one to be seen around in parties or weddings. But since Nidhi had left, he had withdrawn even further. These days it was difficult to draw him out even for any official functions in the hospital.

But on second thoughts Rangnath realized that it was not so surprising after all. Nidhi was going to be in the wedding. She was coming for the first time since she left Lucknow after her internship. She had secured admission for PG in AIIMS and had stayed on in Delhi. Despite repeated requests from Baba, Dadi Bua and Anji, she had refused to come to Lucknow. Always giving one alibi or the other. It was finally Anji's wedding that she could not ignore and had agreed to come.

"Hello Dr. Nidhi," Mallika greeted Nidhi.

"Hello Dr. Mallika. Kaisi hain aap?"

"Main theek hoon. Aur aap?"

Nidhi just smiled and did not say anything.

"Ashutosh theek nahin hain Nidhi," Mallika said suddenly.

"Kya phir se Dr. Hardstone ban gaye hain?" she asked with a sad laugh.

"Nahin. Unfortunately woh bhi nahin. Pahle kam se kam apne dard ko gusse ki tarah logon par nikaal dete the. Ab woh bhi nahin karte. Children's ward mein bachchon ke saath jitni der hanste-khelte hain, bas utni der hi lagta hai ki woh ek zinda insaan hain. Uske alaawa zaroori baaton ke alaawa apni zubaan bhi nahin kholte. Aise to maine pahle unhein kabhi nahin dekha. Pahle jab koi cheez chhin jaati thi to woh bitter ho jaate the, obsessed bhi ho jaate the. Unhein who cheez wapas chahiye hoti thi. Ab to woh Baba ke ghar ke baare mein bhi kabhi baat nahin karte. Dr. Armaan bata rahe the ki'"

"Baba ka ghar? Matlab? Kaun sa ghar?"

"Aapko nahin pata? Ashutosh ke Baba ka ghar jo unke Baba unhein na dekar apne kissi aur rishtedaar ke naam kar gaye the. Shayad apni naatin ke'"

"Unke Baba ki nishaani ek ghar hai?" Nidhi got the shock of her life.

"Haan."

"Aapko pata hai ki woh ghar kahan hai?"

"Mujhe to nahin pata. Lekin Dr. Armaan ko shayad pata hoga. Unhone hi mujhe bataya tha ki Ashutosh ab uski taraf se bhi udaaseen ho gaye hain'"

"Dr. Armaan hain yahan?"

"Nahin. Who to abhi Lucknow mein nahin hai."

"Main unse phone par baat karti hoon. Excuse me Dr. Mallika."

Nidhi rushed into a room, locked it from inside and tried to get her thoughts in control. Was it the same house? She dialed Armaan's number and asked him about the location of the house. Armaan only had a sketchy idea, but it was enough to confirm her suspicion.

She cried her heart out. Partly from remorse and partly from happiness. Remorse because a house that he had pined for was with her all these years. So, somewhere she was the reason of his pain. But she was happy too. Thank God that the house was with her. At least there was something she could do for him.

He hadn't come to the wedding yet. Rangnath had told her that he would come. The house papers were at home. She hadn't taken them with her to Delhi. She never evern thought about them. She went out and took one of the free cars out of the wedding venue. She found the papers, put then in a cover and came back to the venue. Ashutosh had still not come.

"Dr. Mallika. Dr. Ashutosh nahin aaye ab tak?"

"Pata nahin Dr. Nidhi. Dr. Rangnath to kah rahe the ki aayenge. Lekin' Phone bhi off hai'"

"Oh!" Was she not going to see him then?

Anji was angry at her for having disappeared, "Kaisi dost hai tu Nidhi. Kuchh khayaal bhi hai tujhe meri kya halat ho rahi hai."

"Sorry Anji. Kuchh zaroori kaam yaad aa gaya tha. Lekin ab tu ghabra mat. Main poori raat tera saath nahin chhodne waali. Jab tak Dr. Rangnath khud mujhe bhaga na dein."

"Chup kar. Mujhe chidhane se teri galti nahin chhip jayegi. Ab jaldi taiyaar hone mein meri help kar. Ye dekh nail-polish nikal aayi hai. Remover kahan hai?"

"Shaant ho ja Anji. Main hoon na yahan ab."

It was three in the morning when the wedding finally got over. Anji and Rangnath were leaving directly for his house. The arrangements there had been taken care of by the wedding planners and Rangnath's colleagues from the hospital. So, Nidhi excused herself from going there. Anji also understood her state of mind. So, she did not insist.

Those who weren't going with Anji had decided to rest until morning at the wedding venue itself. Nidhi sneaked out of the large room all the women had lied down in and sat out in the garden. The papers were in her hands. Ashutosh hadn't turned up at the wedding. His phone was also switched off. Nidhi wondered about what would have happened. Had he fallen sick? But why would his phone be off in that case? He would have informed Rangnath as a matter of courtesy, at least. Why disappear? If it was to avoid her, why had he accepted to come in the first place?

Nidhi looked at her watch. It was 5 in the morning. Late enough for her to go out. Early enough that all the people tired from the wedding won't get up for at least 3-4 hours. Before leaving she rummaged through her luggage and took out some CDs.

She drove to his house. Hiraman Kaka opened the door for her and was pleasantly surprised to see her, "Dr. Nidhi. Aap? Aaiye na."

"Dr. Ashutosh hain?"

"Ashutosh to kal shaam ko shahar se bahar chala gaya. Bataya bhi nahin ki kab lautega. Lekin Armaan abhi wapas aata hoga."

"Ji. Theek hai. Dr. Armaan se mil kar jaungi."

"Aaiye please."

Nidhi exchanged pleasantries with Armaan when he came. Then she finally asked, "Dr. Ashutosh kaise hain?"

Armaan sighed, "Pata nahin. I don't know Nidhi. I really don't."

"Kya baat hai Dr. Armaan?"

"Pahle bhi kuchh kam complicated nahin tha woh aur us ghar ko lekar uska obsession. Lekin at least ye pata tha ki wohi uska aim hai hai life mein. Ab to kuchh samajh mein nahin aata hai. Apne baare mein to kuchh baat hi nahin karta. Itna bhi pooochhoon ki din kaisa raha to baat badal deta hai. Ek baar maine us ghar ki baat chhedi to kahne laga ki ab kissi cheez ko lekar koi obsession nahin rah gaya hai uske andar. Obsession na hona to achchhi baat hai lekin aisa lagta hai ki koi aim bhi nahin rah gaya hai uski life mein. Aaj kal to mere jokes par gussata tak nahin hai. Pahle se bhi zyada waqt hospital mein bitata hai. Aise dekho to kuchh bhi galat nahin hai. Lekin kuchh sahi bhi nahin hai."

Nidhi looked down and bit her lips in an effort to control her reaction. Armaan spoke again, "I am sorry. Maine aapko pareshaan kar diya."

"Nahin. Aap sorry kyon bol rahe hain. Aap bas unhein ye packet de dijiyega. Main chalti hoon."

"Nashta to kar leti..."

"Nahin. Ghar par sab jag jayenge to mujhe dhoondhenge..."

"Nidhi," Armaan spoke again, "Ek aur baat thi."

"Ji."

"Mera ye project agle 5-6 mahinon mein khatm hone waala hai. Uske baad main wapas chala jaunga. Ashutosh aur bhi akela..."

Nidhi looked away, not knowing what to say, but fully understanding the impact of his words.

"Ashutosh naaraaz hoga agar use pata chalega ki maine tumse ye kaha hai. Lekin kya tum apne Baba se baat nahin kar sakti?"

"Mere paas koi plan nahin hai Dr. Armaan. Lekin itna assure karti hoon ki maine give up nahin kiya hai."

Nidhi left and Armaan smiled. There was some hope after all.

"Ashu. Kahan tha tu? Tujhe mahsoos hota hai ki doosre logon ko chinta hoti hai? Phone kyon nahin lag raha tha tera?"

"Main Kaka ko bata kar gaya tha Armaan. Shaant ho ja."

"Aur phone ko kya hua?"

"Phone maine phenk diya hai aur number disconnect karwa diya hai."

"What? Kyon?"

"Zaroorat nahin thi."

"Aur hospital ki emergencies?"

"Hospital mein bhi phone hai aur ghar mein bhi. Aur kahin main jaunga nahin."

"Aur baaki logon ka kya?"

"Tu to yahin hai Armaan."

"Aur Nidhi?"

"Nidhi meri zindagi mein nahin hai."

"Tu ye maanta hai, shayad woh nahin. Kal shaadi mein woh tera intezaar kar rahi thi."

"Pagal hai."

"Zaroor hai. Tabhi to subah-subah yahan bhi aayi thi."

Ashutosh was not surprised.

"Tu expect kar raha tha. Isliye gayab tha?"

Ashutosh didn't reply and made to go inside his room.

Armaan sighed and handed her the package, "Ye de gayi hai tere liye."

Ashutosh' face didn't give anything away. He took the package, went to his room and locked it from inside. Once away from everyone else, he held the package close to his heart and pressed it between his arms and chest as if hugging it. His eyes were closed and his face showed the pain that he hadn't shown in front of Armaan.

He carefully kept the package on the bed and sat beside it. His hands were trembling as he opened it. A file, a box of CDs and a letter came out of it. He quickly opened the letter.

"Dr. Ashutosh,

I am afraid, main aapko aaj tak koi khushi nahin de payi. Kal pata chala ki aapki ek khushi jis taale mein band thi, uski chaabhi mere paas hai. Isliye woh aapke hawale kar rahi hoon. Aapke Baba ki aakhiri nishaani woh makaan hai jo mere Nana mere naam kar gaye the. Paper work ke baare mein mujhe nahin pata. Isliye Jo bhi papers mere paas the woh aur ghar ki chaabhi aapko de rahi hoon. Ghar ke transfer ke papers mere sign lene ke liye kahan bhejne hain, ye aapko pata hoga kyonki aapne mera result dekha hoga. Naam aur department likh dene se yahan letters pahunch jaate hain.

Aur ab jab ye ghar aapko wapas mil gaya hai to shayad aap apne kuchh purane shauk phir se enjoy karne lagein, isliye kuchh ghazalon ki CDs chhod kar ja rahi hoon. Abhi mere paas itni hi thi.

Aapki
Nidhi"

Nobody saw it. But that night Dr. Ashutosh Mathur cried. He cried loudly. And when he had exhausted his tears, he put one of the CDs in his laptop, played the ghazals and drifted off to sleep without even changing out of his day clothes.

Armaan and Kaka looked at each other in surprise when they heard the sound of Ghazals coming out of his room.

"Nidhi. Bua ki jaan pahchaan mein Agra mein ek achchhi family hai. Unka ladke ne IIM se MBA kiya hai. Aaj kal Delhi mein hi posted hai," Baba told Nidhi later in the day, "Hum soch rahe the ki tum Delhi mein usse ek baar mil leti."

"Kyon? Main usse mil kar kya karoongi?"

"Agar tum log ek-doosre ko pasand karo to hum shaadi ki baat chalayen."

"Meri shaadi ki baat kahan se aa gayi Baba? Mujhe shaadi nahin karni hai."

"Kyon nahin? Ye Bilkul sahi umra hai..."

Nidhi sighed. Why was Baba acting like he didn't know. She also decided to evade, "Abhi padhai chal rahi hai meri. Main jaati hoon, mujhe packing karni hai. Thodee der mein train hai meri."

"Tum aaj hi wapas ja rahi ho?"

"Haan Baba. Aur classes nahin chhod sakti. Waise aap agle mahine aa rahe hain na?"

Baba nodded. Since Nidhi wouldn't come to Lucknow, he had made it a practice to visit her in Delhi every month.

"Dr. Armaan. Sorry to disturb you. Lekin Dr. Ashutosh ka phone ab bhi unreachable hai. Kya woh ab tak..." Nidhi had tried calling Ashutosh after reaching Delhi.

"Ashutosh wapas aa gaya hai Dr. Nidhi. Aur woh theek hai. Lekin usne kaha ki usne apna phone phenk diya hai aur number disconnect karwa diya hai."

"Oh!" Nidhi was surprised, disappointed and a little hurt.

"Aur use pata nahin kya hua hai Dr. Nidhi? Itne saalon se usne ghazalein nahin suni. Lekin pichhle do dinon mein shahar ke saare music shops ke chakkar laga aaya hai aur jitni CDs mili sab le aaya hai. Aur Jo abhi tak nahin mila hai, unke peechhe pagal hua ja raha hai."

Nidhi smiled, "Aap chinta mat kijiye Dr. Armaan. Ye achchha sign hai."

The package reached to him at the hospital. "From" address mentiond on the envelop was just "Pediatrics Department, AIIMS". But he knew. He impatiently opened the package to find a huge box of CDs inside it along with a small note.

"Dr. Armaan se pata chala ki aap ghazalon ki CDs khareed rahe the. Ismein almost woh saaraa collection hoga jo aapne pahle suna hoga. Aur inmein se kai ab stores mein nahin milte."

Ashutosh cried once again!

Nidhi was crying too. Ashutosh disconnecting the mobile had deprived her of the only way remaining of being in contact with him. And as if that was not enough of a pain, Baba had called her that day asking her to meet Rohan. The boy Dadi Bua had in mind for her.

"Tum apni zidd nahin chhodogi Nidhi?" he had said.

"Kaisi zidd Baba?"

"Dr. Ashutosh ki'"

"Maine kaun si zidd ki Baba. Jo aap nahin chahte, woh to maine nahin kiya. Lekin ab to aap zidd kar rahe hain na. Main shaadi ke liye taiyaar nahin hoon Baba. Aap please mujh par pressure mat daaliye."

She rued over what was happening in her life. Everyone meant well for her. Baba as well as Dr. Ashutosh. And yet, both of them were hurting her. She couldn't even hurt them back for a revenge. She loved them both.

Continued in Part 8

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Continued from Part 8

Part 9 - (Thanks a lot Sharifa for her detailed reviews 😊)

Ashutosh stared at the mail from Dr. Mathew, whom he had known for several years. He had recently joined the pediatrics department of AIIMS and had invited him for giving a guest lecture there. Ashutosh was unable to make up his mind. Typically such requests were honoured in the profession. But this was for AIIMS. And it meant...

He re-read the e-mail. It was for the first year students. Nidhi would be in her second year now. He would be able to avoid her, he decided and sent his acceptance.

"Ashutosh. That was a great lecture. You should be in an insittute like this. Achchhe teachers ki bahut zaroorat hai is profession mein. Being a good teacher, along with being a good doctor is so rare. Students tumhein sach mein sun rahe the yaar. It was too good," Ashutosh was in Mathew's office after delivering the lecture.

"Tum overboard ja rahe ho Mathew. Maine koi aisa aasmaas se taare todne waala kaam nahin kiya hai."

"Ashutosh. Main din-raat students se deal karta hoon. Trust me I know their reactions. Stop being so humble yaar. Lucknow mein kya kar rahe ho tum? Come to Delhi. AIIMS will more than welcome you."

"Sab log Delhi hi aa gaye to Lucknow ka kya hoga Mathew. Main wahin theek hoon." Lucknow was so connected with Baba that Ashutosh could not imagine settling down anywhere other than Lucknow.

"Achchha suno. About the lunch..."

"May I come in, Sir?" someone knocked at the office door and asked.

Ashutosh heard the voice and stiffened. It couldn't be anyone else.

"Please come on. Who is this... Oh. Dr. Nidhi Verma. Please come. Are... Main aapko batana kaise bhool gaya Dr. Nidhi ki Dr. Ashutosh yahan hain? Aap logon ko to introduce karwane ki zaroorat nahin hai."

Ashutosh and Nidhi stared at each other. Nidhi's surprise was obviously greater because she had no clue about him being there in Delhi. Ashutosh was embarrassed. He didn't know why though. Was it for coming there or was it for not informing her?

Mathew seemed completely unaware of the storm lurking under their controlled demeanours, "Ashutosh. Ye bhi ek reason hai ki mujhe lagta hai tumhein teaching mein aana chahiye. Ye Dr. Nidhi Verma. Kamaal ki training di hai tumne inhein. Waise to khud bhi PG student hi hain, lekin ward mein MBBS interns inse itna darte hain jitna ki mujhse bhi nahin darte. Mazaal hai ki koi paanch minute bhi der se aaye. Ya zara bhi apni duty shirk kare. Aur khud to ye hamesha samay ke pahle hi taiyaar rahti hain. Aur haan - apni in saari aadaton ka credit tumhein deti hain. Kyon Dr. Nidhi?"

Nidhi smiled nervously, "Sir aap bhi... Hello Dr. Ashutosh. Aap kaise hain?" she asked him formally.

"Main theek hoon. Aur aap?"

She gulped slightly before replying, "I am fine."

"Dr. Nidhi. Aapse ek favour chahiye tha," Mathew said.

"Yes Sir?"

"Dr. Ashutosh yahan ek guest lecture dene ke liye aaye hain. Aur mujhe abhi unhein lunch par le jaana tha. Lekin meri ek urgent lunch meeting schedule ho gayi hai. To main ja nahin sakta. Taste of Delhi restaurant mein do logon ke liye table booked hai. Agar aap lunch time par free ho to kya aap Dr. Ashutosh ko host kar sakti hain?"

"Ji?" Nidhi looked at Ashutosh unsurely. He didn't give any indication of whether he liked the idea or not. "Main free hoon," she said hesitatingly, "In fact post-lunch bhi meri duty nahin hai. To koi problem nahin hogi."

"That's great then. Ashutosh. You have a taxi, right? Aap log use use kar sakte hain."

"Okay Dr. Mathew. Waise main aapko ye project reports dene aayi thi," Nidhi handed him a file.

"Yeah. Thanks. Main ise padh loonga."

"Chalein Dr. Ashutosh? Ek baj rahe hain, lunch ka time to ho hi gaya hai."

"Yeah. Sure," Ashutosh spoke for the first time during the entire lunch planning.

They were quiet during the short drive to the restaurant. It was awkward anyway. They were face to face after more than a year. And the presence of the driver made it impossible to talk.

"I am sorry," were the first words he said after they were seated.

"Kis liye?" she tried hard to controlled, but her voice quivered.

"Yeah," he spoke, his guilt looking obvious, "Bahut saari cheezon ke liye, jo maine kiya, aur jo main kar raha hoon. Sirf isliye ki mujhe nahin pata hai ki what can I do better."

They were interrupted by the waiter who served them the water and asked them if they wanted to go a-la-carte or for the buffet. Ashutosh looked at Nidhi.

"Buffet," she told the waiter. That would give them more time to themselves without any interruptions. They picked up soup and salad and came back to their table.

"Aapne mujhe bataya bhi nahin ki aap yahan aa rahe hain," Nidhi questioned him.

Ashutosh nodded and did not say anything.

"Agar main abhi Dr. Mathew ke office mein nahin aati to mujhe pata bhi nahin chalta..."

"Nidhi please!" Ashutosh pleaded with her. He had no answers to her questions.

She stopped talking and started sipping her soup. They went through the motion of having their lunch without talking further.

"Aapke paas abhi time hai?" she finally asked when they came out of the restaurant.

"Haan. Meri flight raat mein hai."

"Ghar chalenge aap?"

"Ghar?"

"Well - ek bedroom ka chhota sa flat hai..."

"Lagta hai PG students ke pay badh gayi hai," Ashutosh joked, "Akele flat le kar rah rahi ho?" It was unsual for PG students to stay on their own. Typically they would share accommoation with other students.

"Baba pay par rahe hain iske liye."

"Hmm.. Chalo phir."

Although they were silent in the driver's presence as they drove towards her house, but the little joke about the pay had broken the ice. Both could feel that.

"Mujhse bahut naaraaz ho Nidhi?" Ashutosh asked her after they reached her home.

"Aapse naraaz ho kar kissi ka kya kar loongi main," Nidhi replied sadly.

"I want you to move on Nidhi. I want you to be happy."

Tears came to Nidhi's eyes when he said that.

"Nidhi..."

"Dr. Ashutosh. Duniya mein do log hain jinse main bahut pyaar karti hoon. Aur itni khushkismat hoon ki won do log bhi mujhse bahut pyaar karte hain. Hamesha meri bhalai ki sochte hain. Lekin phir bhi - woh dono jo karte hain, usse main khush rahne ke jagah hurt hi ho jati hoon. Unke intention mein to koi burai nahin hai. Main unse shikayat nahin kar sakti. To mujhme hi kuchh galat hoga na? Mujhme hi koi kami hogi ki mere aas paas itna pyaar hote hue bhi main khush nahin hoon. Bataiye na Dr. Ashutosh? Kya galat hai mujhme? Baba bhi meri bhalai chahte hain, aap bhi. Lekin phir bhi main khush kyon nahin hoon?" Tears were flowing out of her eyes staining her cheeks.

"Oh God!" Ashutosh shut his eyes in pain when he saw her crying and baring her heart. Then he went to her and pulled her in his arms, "I had no idea... I am ashamed to admit Nidhi ki main apne dard mein, apni pareshaaniyon mein itna kho gaya ki kabhi socha nahin ki maine tumhein akele chhod diya hai. I am so sorry. I am really sorry Nidhi. Aur main bahut sharminda hoon. Main bilkul andha ho gaya tha..."

"Aapne apna phone kyon disconnect karwaya?" Nidhi asked angrily after they broke the hug.

"Main... Mujhe laga... Ab main kya explain karoon Nidhi? Obviously main galat tha. Jaise main soch raha tha, woh galat tha..."

"Lekin soch kya rahe the aap? Dr. Rangnath ko promise kar ke bhi aap wedding mein nahin aaye... Phir ghar se bhi gayab the... Aur uske baad..."

"Nidhi. Jis wajah se maine aane ka waada kiya tha, usi wajah se use tod bhi diya. Main taiyaar hua tha wedding mein aane ke liye. Kyonki main tumhein dekhna chahta tha, tumse milna chahta tha. Lekin aakhiri waqt par mujhe realize hua ki jo kuchh main kar raha hoon, usse tumhare Baba ko jo waada kiya tha woh tod raha hoon. Isliye shaadi mein nahin aaya. Phone disconnect karwa diya kyonki mujhe laga ki hamara phone par baatein karna bhi sahi nahin tha. Jab tak tum Lucknow mein thi, utna waqt maine khud ko, hum dono ko diya tha... Lekin uske baad... Main khud par to sakht ho hi raha tha. Lekin kabhi mujhe ye nahin realize hua ki tum par kitna sakht ho raha tha main."

"Phone katwa kar aapne mere saath bahut bura kiya Dr. Ashutosh," Nidhi also had to let it out, "Aapko pata hai main kitna tadpi hoon aapki awaaz ek baar sunne ke liye? Sirf who 'hello' jo aap bolte the. Kabhi kabhi woh bhi nahin bolte the. Bas phone utha kar apna kaam karte rahte the. Lekin usse mujhe kitna sukoon milta tha. Aap bahut bure hain. Bahut bure hain. Bahut galat kiya aapne mere saath," Nidhi complained and started crying again.

"Nidhi. Please, please rona band karo. Suno - main abhi tumhare saath chal kar naya connection leta hoon. Pre-paid immediately mil jayega na. Tumhare naam se le lenge. Tumhara to address proof bhi hoga. Abhi chalo..."

"Ye Delhi ka number hoga. Lucknow mein roaming par rahega."

"To kya hua? Chalega to hai na. Chalo abhi mere saath..."

Nidhi smiled finally, "Uski zaroorat nahin hai Dr. Ashutosh. Mujhe aap par bharosa hai. Aap Lucknow ja kar naya number le lijiyega. Abhi bas aap baithiye. Jo thoda samay hai, main aapke saath bitaana chahti hoon. Main aapke liye chai laun?"

"Button daba kar?" Ashutosh asked playfully.

"Nahin. Paani electric kettle mein garm kar ke usmein tea-bag daal kar."

Ashutosh laughed and nodded.

Ashutosh noticed Nidhi limping slightly as she brought back tea. He got up and took the tea tray from her hands.

"Kya hua? Tum aise limp kyon ka rahi ho?"

"Nahin to. Main bilkul theek hoon."

"Nidhi! Hum dono doctors hain. Cut that crap."

"Pichhle kuchh dinon se kabhi kabhi pet mein dard shuru ho jaata hai. Koi khaas nahin hai. Theek ho jayega abhi thodee der mein."

"Kitne dinon se?"

"Kuchh pandrah-bees dinon se."

"To tumne check up kyon nahin karwaya?"

"Hum doctors waise bhi paranoid hone ke liye badnaam hote hain."

"Better be paranoid than sorry! Batao kahan dard hota hai?"

"Dr. Ashutosh. It's not important. Seriously."

"Explain it then."

She was a doctor and it wasn't such a big deal for her to speak about menstural problems with her colleagues. But he was not just a doctor, but also a man she loved. The hesitations and shyness of of a man-woman relationship came naturally to her in this case. But he was adamant, "I am waiting."

"It's probably just the menstural troubles," she had to say.

Ashutosh was more seasoned than she was. He wasn't hesitant, "Pandrah-bees dinon se? Ye hamesha to nahin hota tha?"

"No."

"You fool. Can't you see it is not normal, then? Not the regular menstural troubles. Mujhe bharosa nahin hota ki tum kabhi-kabhi illiterate, uninformed gaon ki auraton ke tarah khud ko treat karti ho. Chalo abhi hospital."

"Dr. Ashutosh. Please. Theek hai. Main check up karwa loongi. Lekin abhi nahin."

"Bilkul abhi. Kam se kam aas paas koi diagnostic centre to hoga. I want to see an x-ray."

"Aap thodee der mere saath baithna bhi nahin chate kya. Kabhi mobile lena hai, kabhi hospital chalna hai. Hardly kuchh ghante hain..." Nidhi was genuinely agitated.

Ashutosh sighed. Then he took out his ticket from the bag and dialed the customer service number, "Yes. Main apna ticket cancel karwana chahta hoon... Yes - I know ki sirf taxes refund honge... Please jaldi kijiye... No. I don't want to reschedule. I don't know when will I travel next. Please cancel it." He addressed her impatiently after canceling the ticket, "Happy? Ab chalein?"

"Ji," Nidhi had to give up, "Diagnostic centre hai paas mein."

They got the x-ray pretty quickly and Ashutosh appeared worried after looking at it.

"Kya hua?" Nidhi asked.

"I hate you for doing this Nidhi. Tumne mujhse waada kiya tha ki tum apni health ka khayaal rakhogi. Dekho ise - I am 99% sure there is a tumour. Chalo hospital abhi."

Nidhi was also shaken when she looked at the x-ray, "Ye... Ye kuchh aur bhi to ho sakta hai na..." she said more to herself than to him, "Mujhe realize nahin hua..."

Ashutosh could not remain angry when he saw her so scared, "Koi baat nahin Nidhi. Nothing that can not be treated. Aur sirf x-ray se confirm bhi nahin ho sakta. Chalo hospital."

Nidhi followed him silently.

Doctors in the gynacology decided to do angiogrpahy to rule out other possibilities with similar symptoms. It was an invasive procedure and she had to be given anaesthesia for that. She had still not become conscious when the report came to Ashutosh.

"Tumour hi hai Dr. Ashutosh," the gynacologist told him, "Immediately fatal nahin hai. But it will grow and ultimately uterus remove karna hi padega. Jitni jaldi kar diya jaye utna behtar hai. Warna pain badhta hi jayega."

Ashutosh nodded. He had also called Dr. Mathew who was Nidhi's boss in the hospital.

"I think we should inform her family," Mathew said.

"Yeah. Tum aisa karo Mathew, inke father ko seedhe call mat karo. Woh ghabra jayenge. Main tumhein inki friend ka number deta hoon. Unhein inform kijiye. Wahi inke father ko bhi bata dengi."

"Sure. As you suggest Ashutosh."

Anji was promptly informed and she rushed to talk to Baba. She called back saying that she, her mother Shyama and Nidhi's Baba were taking the next flight to Delhi.

"Doctor," a nurse came out of Nidhi's room, "Unhein hosh aaya tha lekin woh bahut pain mein thi. To maine unhein pain-killers aur sedatives de diye hain. She is sleeping again."

Ashutosh was disappointed. He was hoping to talk to her before her Baba came. But that chance was gone now.

"Aapne unhein diagnosis bata diya hai," he asked the nurse.

"Ji. Koi problem hai kya? Mujhe laga ki who khud doctor hain..."

"Nahin, nahin. Its okay," Ashutosh assured her.

"Tum mere office mein wait kyon nahin karte Ashutosh," Mathew offered, "Tumhari flight?"

"Cancel karwa li hai."

"Oh," Mathew appeared surprised, but he did not say anything, "That's nice of you."

"Mathew. Do you think you can extend my reservation at AIIMS guest house for a few days? I will pay for that, of course. Ya phir yahan aas-paas koi hote hai..."

"Don't worry Ashutosh. Guest house mein reservation ki problem nahin hogi. "

Continued in Part 10

Edited by sharmishtha02 - 13 years ago

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Bhanu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Hi Mish..

Thanks for Holi present dear...just read part 8 and getting ready for the ride of part 9...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: anu13
Hi Mish..

Thanks for Holi present dear...just read part 8 and getting ready for the ride of part 9...

Thanks Anu 😊

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Binat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Love the way you write, it feels like I am watching them instead of reading the FF.

Cant wait for the happy ending😊

And hope to read many more FF's by you

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niniborn2rule

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Superb update...changed ashu...so finally nidhi has been able to make ashu realise that they r nothing without eachother...great great...well done dear...eagerly waiting for the next ones...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#139

Review Part 7

Here comes the MB addict wid yet another detailed review...

Part 8 a bit like AR rehman songs ... need a second reading to get its full meaning.

So let's start...

Hehe love the opening... Rang-anji shadi... almost as if picking form the engagement sequence in DK... hmm shadi=return of the prodigal daughter. The nice part from the intro is we get to see how ashu is perceived by others and we can appreciate the full cost that he has to deal with.

I cannot believe am saying that but you have made like Mallika, and what i like here is that her analysis of ashu is more genuine as a friend who is deeply concerned.

Nids "Kya phir se Dr. Hardstone ban gaye hain?" she asked with a sad laugh. Though a seeming off hand remark shows her real feelings and thought, as if almost hoping for that to be true.

Hmm the house resurfaces and i must admit in a surprising way, yet it is all done in a logical way

The non appearance of ashu serves to murky the water... he is not here kyon kahan ??? wets our appetite as readers we ask ourselves the same questions that Nidhi does.

Hmm the climax here is the going to ashu's house, the expectation that gets watered down. She goes there wid hope only to meet with armaan.

"Pata nahin. I don't know Nidhi. I really don't."

The helplessness of Armaan is clearly visible he is at a loss and i do ke Hmm i almost feels as if armaan resents nids here especially when he describes the changes in ashu, as if the ashu he could read so well now has become a mystery.

Lekin itna assure karti hoon ki maine give up nahin kiya hai."

Nidhi left and Armaan smiled. There was some hope after all.

And that is what changes my perception... shayad armaan was being hard to elicit a reaction and maaan does he get one. In a way the dance of extreme has started... the more ashu will want to let go the more he will end up be haunted by her.

The exchange between ashu and armaan is too good ... the worry is here but the more armaan tries to come near ashu goes away. Then comes the killer sentence... "Nidhi meri zindagi mein nahin hai." Haaaila i could visualise Mb saying that and how he could look saying so.

Once away from everyone else, he held the package close to his heart and pressed it between his arms and chest as if hugging it.

Once again it is in loneliness that he can let his guard down let the pain come out...let the facade fall and be the human that he is one who is hurting because the love of his life is not here.

Loved that part coz it reminded me of the phonecall seq just like last time he finds the courage to go through in Nidhi again showing her importance in his life

The proposal interlude another necessary must but at the same time the attitude of nids is commendable you can feel her frustration but she never oversteps her limit firmly she does let her position be known.

In a way this part is a roller coaster, but you have to feel bad for Nidhi as she is at the receiving end of it all. Her hurt is visible for all the feel when she realises that her lifeline that is the phone is gone completely gone. But you have to appreciate her selfless nature, she is hurt but again she is just out to bring him some happiness ( in a way i feel that this is more zoya than Nids)

"Tum apni zidd nahin chhodogi Nidhi?" he had said.

"Kaisi zidd Baba?"

"Dr. Ashutosh ki'"

Very poignant scene... she too now lets go... her pain her frustration... she feels like a puppet being torn in all corners yet each one is trying to make her see things their way not taking in what she could be feeling and in keeping the promises to her baba and ashu she ends up dying of slow death and the tragic part here is that no one is realising how she is being affected... baba thinks he is doing his duty that ASHNI can never be together because it would not work whilst Ashu feels that by pushing her away he is giving her the chance of a better life.

The MB addict will hit again tomorrow as part 7 needs some more re reading and i need to come out from dreaming of MB acting that part 7 out...

Bear hug for double update.

Shari

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hey Anu,

Thanks so much for the detailed review. I owe you an extra update for this one 😛

Originally posted by: anu13
Hi Mish,

Thanks for another rocking FF dear👏. It has always been a pleasure to read your FFs and even loved this one😊.
When I came to know the name of it...I was taken aback for a while, but when started reading it'.felt this really gonna lead to some awesome track ahead

Glad you weren't disappointed. 😊 Actually the title seemed to have scared many people. Probably coz in daily soaps, sacrifices are often synonymous with stupid logic, unnecessary drama and more often than not misunderstanding between the leads. Here I have tried to depict a situation where even the decision to sacrifice is a joint one.

Originally posted by: anu13

Here we go...

PART 1

Well, you said that Ashu doesn't speak out much in this FF...but the above really relieved me...as I already said I was a little scared with the title, "Sacrifices😲." I just loved each and every word of it⭐️...its just reflecting beautifully how much he cares about his life, Nidhi.

He does, doesn't he? 😊 Here he ends up blurting it out. He didn't want to, but she almost cornered him by repeated accusations of him not caring. Nidhi can be quite a handful. 😆

Originally posted by: anu13

You have nicely handled the track where Nidhi had duty in record room and the way Ashu handled the situation with Mallika was, being professional here, nice.

Thanks. In the show they have thrown professionalism into gutters. 😭

Originally posted by: anu13

PART 2 and 3

Just Love Nidhi...all the childishness, bubbliness, straightforwardness, muaahhh...just love when she barges into Ashu's cabin with liberty...and whenever I read (actually read your FFs twice, thrice or whenever my mood is off...it just lifts up all my spirits), "didn't even knock before barging into his office," I get a smile on my face...I just have adoration of her vivacity.

😳 😳 😳 😳

Originally posted by: anu13
Wowww...Ashu's birthday and Nidhi throwing a party for him🥳...I too joined it though you didn't call me personally😭...lolzzz...well, it really was a very nice thought...and the whole discussion about the leap year...it just took me back to my schooling😃...thnx for the revision😆...I really like their sweet, cute, little arguments...hope to see more of this sort.

What to do? I myself wasn't invited. Had to barge in without permission or invitation like Nidhi. So, good that you did that too. 😛 And yeah - Nidhi loves to prove herself right in front of Ashutosh. Not that he minds it though. 😃

Originally posted by: anu13
The love they have for each other is amazing...without saying they say everything through their eyes...which you have depicted charmingly through your words when they stared each other at Dr. A's house☺️.

I can only blush ☺️

Originally posted by: anu13

What I appreciate the more in your FFs is you show both the professional and personal life of the characters😎, which I would have wished to see in the show very often...I mean you show the love story as well as never forget about the hospital and every once in a while...you show about the hospital, cases of patients, their treatment, how much interns need to learn, etc., etc...which has shades of a real life story than creativity...as well as giving us the knowledge of Medicine through your FF😆😃.

Arr... That's dangerous territory. Don't get educated in medicine through my FFs. 😆 I didn't study even biology in +2, much less medicine after that. I do some Internet search though and so some of what I write may sound like genuine. But rest assured, it isn't. 😃

Originally posted by: anu13
Well, you did justice to Nidhi's character professionally too👍🏼...I mean she was an intern...though she never wanted to be a doc, but was happy with her profession because of Ashu...and wanted to learn things without any delay after her helplessness in diagnosing the patient and showing how much she wanted to become a doctor and serve the people.

Yes. Yes. I am so happy - you noticed this. I feel that in case of this younger woman, older man romance, especially when in workplace setting, the entire idea of the younger person learning from the older one is very important. The respect that Nidhi has for Ashu's experience and competency and the appreciation he has for her sincerity - I think plays an important role in why they love each other.

Originally posted by: anu13
Here comes The Cupid❤️...Armaan...❤️just love him...hope everyone has a friend like him. Loved the way he teased Ashu...asking him about the "Midnight Hospital Date." Wowww...Ahem...Ahem...would never forget those words.

😳

Originally posted by: anu13
Hey sorry dear just reviewed for 3 parts...will be doing the rest soon...as reviewing these aroused the desire to read your FF again...so I am gonna read it again and comment...

Thanks so much dear. I really loved getting this detailed comment. It is such a pleasure to know when you are being read in such detail. Would look forward to further reviews as well.

😊

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