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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for ur super duper weekend update... :))
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: niniborn2rule

read the 14th part as well...too good...a bit too sensuous for late night reading...😛 😉..but as always u are at ur best...and as far as my quick replies r concerned i do really wait for ur post dear..



thanku so much nini
sensuous...lolz...😆😆...but glad you liked that
OOO thats so sweet of you nini..

ok i want a quick reply now..😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_SK



thanku so much nini
sensuous...lolz...😆😆...but glad you liked that
OOO thats so sweet of you nini..

ok i want a quick reply now..😉

Ok dear here comes my quick reply...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: akshaya24

only 2 part???

but i've many doubts:
will ashni knows abt aryan as mayanks father?
will world knows abt ashu as potent having his own children??😆
will ashu says i love u nidhi??
whooop...so many q

ur 13 n 14 chap r beautiful😊
cute scenes as u said.loved it.but why dont u extend these cute scenes??😳plsss
liked the way ashu asked ...no begging for a kiss..😆 and nidhi's reply also.
thanks for the update and pls do start writing these short but very sweet stories about ashni.



akshaya dear...all the questions are gonna be answered
about extending those scenes...God how i wish...but i m bound by the rules and as when i wrote this fic, i was naive😉😆...otherwise there would have been hell of scenes😆😆😆

luv ya
ana😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Poojapange

Hey i love ur all chapters...very well return..love Ashni..waiting for next chapter..when u ll post it???



thanku dear...welcome to my post
the fic will be ending tomorrow...here is a quick update

luv ya
ana😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 15

A Year Later


Life was perfect for all now……..Shaina Aryan and Rohan Anji were married…………On the same day…………it was fun actually

When Rohan came to know about Shaina Aryan, he asked them to wait as he and Anji will too get married on the same day………………it was actually a plan……to make ashutosh get close to his parents again

And it worked…………..seeing mayank running in the house really made them get drift to him and that automatically became the reason of them to again accept ashutosh along with Nidhi

Now, Yograj and Nandita were happy having shaina as a new member in there family and they simply adore her………..She too love them equal as she loved her parents……………..Ishaan got a new friend and do share his secrets with her

Shaina was the first who Ishaan told about his crush on Suhana…………actually crush was not the right word…………..it was actually a fully developed love…..shaina teased him much but was happy….she told Aryan and they both talk about this to Yograj and Nandita……….Firstly they give Ishaan a long lecture of why he can't simply say that to them………..but later hugged him and its all done….

It was almost 10 months to Shayan and Ro-Anji wedding

Nidhi and Shaina along with ashutosh and Aryan came to the mall to get some stuff for there coming babies

Nidhi and Shaina went into a shop to get some maternity clothes for themselves……..Nidhi chose one and went into changing to try that out…………

After changing, she look at herself in the mirror and her hand automatically reached to her tummy as she smiled caressing it………she was 8 months pregnant and within few days………a new life with take breaths in her hand…He/She will be special as they will be there part……..Nidhi remember the day she came to know about this

~FlashBack~

Shock…………a great shock……that struck Nidhi after getting confirmed from the doctor that she was pregnant……she was dumb struck as how can this happen……………Oh its not like she don't want that but, as she knew about ashutosh being………

Cutting the crap in her mind……..she reached home with mayank to get all her answers

Ashutosh was already there waiting for her as she was not there at home from the time he was back and it almost going to be 2 hours

As she entered, ashutosh hold her from his shoulder taking a sigh of relief………and hugging her quickly

"Where were you? You know I get so worried………." He keep hugging her till the time he felt her hands on his back, calming him down and he felt that all tensions running away from him

Nidhi broke the hug and putting Mayank down on floor as he start running to his room……...She made him sit on couch and take a seat beside him……….ashutosh was feared…to loose her……………..in such small span of time, he get so used to her that it was almost impossible for him to thought his life without her…………..

Today he came back home before time to just surprise her, but on not finding her at home…….made him surprise…………….he called Shaina, Rohan but no one knew about her…………..and now, he just sit there hugging her waist

"Ashutosh, I need to tell you something" She said softly………..combing his hairs

"Hmmm" he said still feeling her warmth

"I am pregnant ashutosh" ashutosh drew away from her as after a sudden shock………a smile formed on his lips and that grew wider and wider till he excitedly hug her again

"Thank you Nidhi………thank you so much….." He hugged her tightly………he was extremely happy

"I wondered will I ever get to hear this…….thank you Baby" he said as a tear run down his cheek

He break the hug and kissed her cheeks………..Nidhi felt blissful but still she was confused and her face clearly said that to him

He move back cupping her face and said

"Anything wrong Nidhi?" He asked looking worried

Nidhi look up at him and started

"Actually…i……..its not like I am not happy…..but ashutosh…you…….." Ashutosh got her question and confusion…..

He understands that………..he create this situation himself so it was of no use to run awy from it now

"Nidhi" ashutosh stand up turning his face to other side

"I am not unfertile……….." he said and take a gap as Nidhi get up to hear him

"After my marriage with Mallika, we actually tried for a baby……………but Doctors said that she is not well enough to have one…." He covered her's unfertality smoothly

"I do know what world do to a girl after knowing this reality………They blame her, accuse her, abuse her that she is not even able to give her husband a single happiness…………They either made her left her house or push her to make her husband get remarried……That's why I take all the blame on myself so Mallika will stay in peace………….but I didn't know that it will too not help me to keep her with myself" Tears traced down his cheeks as Nidhi too get tears hearing him, so broken he was
She move forward and just hug him from behind while kissing his back

"You were Right ashutosh……….don't blame yourself" She made him turn and hug him tightly

"I am really proud to have you beside me……..i love you" her words really encouraged him….Mallika is not going to come back…..its true but he is not going to loose his today ever……….

~FlashBack Ends~

Nidhi come to reality and changed back into her dress and made the receptionist pack her dress

Ashutosh on the other side, was standing with the stroller of Mayank as he was asleep…….and ashutosh was fumbling through some soft toys……………..he buys a long green colored snake with lot of Pooh, Bears, Dolls and battery toys…….Aryan too buy many as may be Shaina is just 6 months pregnant…………….they soon gonna need it………..so Future Safety

Ashutosh Nidhi and Aryan Shaina went to baby cloth section and buy some small suits which can used equally for a baba or a baby…………….they don't want to know there child gene as it feels more exciting to think what it will be and to wait for the day to uncover this truth

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Nidhi went to her routine check up………….ashutosh stay outside as Mayank was not to friendly with Hospital's atmosphere…….

After check, a worried doctor look up at her and started

"Nidhi, we told you before that this child means a danger to your life…………..you should had done that" A serious look of him really left her shattered

How can she do that……….she asked herself many times….how can she kill her own child……

Doctors asked her that she should abort the child as there will be complications………..but seeing ashutosh's happiness, really give her support and she simply refused…………There was nothing to talk about……….Nidhi knew that…….she knew with his love…..she will be fine and there baby too

Nidhi just stand up and make doctor come to the window of there room which give a view of corridor…………..there she saw ashutosh playing with Mayank and many others adored this son father pair….she smiled seeing ashutosh filled his mouth with air and mayank patting its check that make a "Phaw" sound come out from ashutosh and Mayank was giggling on that

"See his smile Doctor? Do you know how hard it was to make him smile……………but now, when he is, I am not going to take this happiness away from him….can you ask me now?" Nidhi look at doctor who sigh and crossed her head

"Its your wish Nidhi…………our work is to try to safe lives…" Doctor went back to her place and Nidhi saying a little 'Thank You' come out from the room

Ashutosh approached her and asked

"Is every thing Ok?" Ashutosh said getting serious

"Can anything happen to me while having you beside me" Nidhi said knowingly

Ashutosh smiled at her trust on himself and putting his hand around her waist………..lead her to the car

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Ashutosh put Mayank on his little bed, as he was about to be two in a few weeks…………The boy was growing up fast……but what to say…….his mother made him eat to much that he had too

Ashutosh smiled, and picking up the bottle of oil from Mayank's room…………he went to his room where like always………ashutosh knew Nidhi must be sitting with a huge ice-cream bowl in her hand……but which flavor……….he wondered

Her mood swings were great but this habit, never changed…………..she need a bowl of ice-cream but with a new flavor, every day……...Ashutosh always take care to update his fridge with every flavor…….as if she not, she will make a puppy face and sleep without talking to him and in the morning……………………a long manofy session have to take place

Ashutosh saw her sitting, watching a movie………..waiting for him to join her in ice-cream like daily with sweet little talks of them

"I do think you will gain too much weight after having him………" He said putting a spoon in her mouth grinning……..as she narrowed her eyes

"So will you feel ashamed of me like that" Nidhi asked gulping down her ice-cream

"oh……..never baby….." he said trying to correct his statement sense….."I can never be ashamed of you………….whatever you will look like………………..for me you always will be the most beautiful ever" Ashutosh kissed her cheek with his ice-creamed lips that made Nidhi skin sticky

"Ashutosh" Nidhi said making a face

Ashutosh smiled and again move towards her cheek and lick it which made Nidhi left with a blush

"You are tooo………" Ashutosh stopped her in between saying

"Romantic……….i know that" Nidhi giggle along with him

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All tensed, rooming into the corridor of the hospital……..ashutosh was more stressed as first time he was facing this situation as a husband and a father……………….he remembered coming along with Shaina but then he was a friend……….and this time, its his love that's facing the situation…

All was fine……………as what he knew…..but the reality was something else and he felt that too himself

His heart was constantly giving wibes in his body and was making him more tensed………..Shyama and Abhinav were there for there son and daughter-in-law and Mayank was back at home with Nandita and Yograj………….All assured him, but what about this little heart of him

As doctor came out and the voices inside the room faded…………..ashutosh's heart skip a beat and he get more serious seeing the doctors

"It's a Daughter" He said as that made Abhinav, Shyama smiled but ashutosh was more curious to know about her

"and…..Nid….Nidhi" he said holding his heart

Doctor came infront of him and hold him from shoulder………………Abhinav Shyama too get serious on this as doctor speak

"Sorry but she is in Coma" no words were more to come…………no more words left to say…

A complete silence took over the atmosphere as the jingling voices of the nurses, patients, doctors all faded to him and he get faint

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nidhi in coma???????😭 😭

but well written ana...a completely new ashu and changed ashu...great job..
Edited by niniborn2rule - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi,

Thanks for a very nice update Ana...

Wowww a year passed away...and the secret/truth of Ashu was finally disclosed.

But what turn over of events dear...Nidhi being pregnant, Ashu reunion with his family, the two marriages...and NIDHI IN COMA😲...oh my God...where did this come from...can't see Ashu again in pain😭...

So whats gonna happen next...I am all heart broken💔 for our AshNi, biting my nails in tension, shock😲...

Can't wait for your next part...do update very soon please...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey great FF! Just finished reading the last three chapters. Great updates 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago

I missed three updates..chapter 13, 14,15...😔
Just now finished reading all three...😃
Shyna was a gem of a woman, a fighter , she had to face so many storms in her young age, and that made her strong...But still she needed her love back in her life , and it is so nice to their misunderstanding ends...Aryan came to know about Mayank,Shyna came to know why Aryan backed off and now nothing is there to hide from each other, which is so important in a relationship 😊

In Chapter 14, haaye...☺️😍 ☺️
Ok let me recover 😳...Again Shyna took a great decision about Mayank. She is biological mother and she loves him so much, but Mayank is now Ashu, Nidhi's son...They can take care of Mayank in the best possible way and like their own son.They are just perfect parents of Mayank...
I loved the scene when she put pillows around Mayank, to protect him from falling while in sleep. She takes care of every little little things of Mayank, No one else can do that for Mayank.

Then as the story progressed I have a confusion. Do Ashu and Nidhi know that Aryan is father of Mayank ? If yes, how ? If no, when he will come to know ?

And after that,,,,Oh girl ... You said, when you wrote this you were naive
If now, it will be hell of a scene. Please please please go ahead with the hell of scenes 😳 in the actual ASHNI story, in your other FF 😳.
"they both exactly know the points to hit and that's what they did all night "-------I was very interested in knowing the points ☺️ 😳 ...They lost in their own world, and I am in dreamland dreaming about our ASHNI..☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Chapter 20 : I was afraid of this situation once I read about Nidhi hiding her complications in pregnancy from Ashu. She loves Ashu so much, that she can do everything for his happyness.
But she forgot that for poor Ashu happyness equals Nidhi only. And if Ashu loose Nidhi, I am sure he will hate their daughter for that..

( Please do not make it filmy like Nidhi died, Ashu hates her daughter, and after 20 years Ashu found their daughter looks ditto to her mother Nidhi ...😭 😭)

Please please update soon...Cant bear Ashu in pain. Cant see ASHNI separation. We have to go through so much in our personal lives. We can not bear the same in something we love to dream about..😭 😭

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