My version of Ashni yesterday.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yesterday was a very important Episode and in my opinion had to be a detailed & a complete episode on Ashni.

Here's my version of yesterday's episode

Nidhi reaches the tea stall & finds ashu waiting for her.
Ashu looks upto her & thinks how much he missed her.He walks towards her & says Hi.

Nidhi smiles at him & feels relieved to see him safe.

Ashu is observing her keenly & finds the general enthusiasm in her missing,that lively bubbly Nidhi was quite today.

He thinks Well she is upset at me for sure as I was not reachable from 2 days...

Meanwhile Nidhi is worried how to break the house issue to him.
Both head towards the chai stall & order for tea.

Ashu is closely observing her & tells - "kya baat hain Nidhi you are quite today are you angry on me"

Nidhi thinks how can I ever be angry on you - "Nahin main aapse naaraz nahin hoon" & gives a small smile.

Ashu - "Main jaanta hoon tum mujse naraaz ho ki main do din se tumse baat nahin ki nahi tumse mila par I was hurt Nidhi that you didnt come to meet me on New year's eve"

Nidhi finally relieved that the topic came up gets up and walks a few metres Ashu too follows her.

Nidhi - I am sorry Dr. Ashutosh I was coming to meet you on that very night. There were some truths I wanted to tell you.I know you will be shocked,hurt but the truth is she closes her eyes & turns her back to him & says I am the owner of your Baba's house.

She waits for Ashu's reaction & turns to him, he is simply staring at her.
Nidhi continues - As soon as I came to know that believe me somewhere I was happy that atleast I can fulfill your dreams & the reason I called you to that house was to gift you the same house. But I was on the way when I got a call from house that Baba has had a heart attack. Nidhi is in tears now...
On one side you were waiting on the other side baba was serious I had to choose between the 2 of you & at that moment I immediately rushed to see Baba. I thought I will explain all this to you but in urgency I left the phone in my car & later next day when I called you were not
reachable... and she cries.

Ashu is tranfixed at the same place & he recalls all the scenes of that night. She wanted to gift me the house... she was coming to meet me... Her baba had heart attack... God what an Idiot I have been... I didnt even think what might be her condition & started assuming things... How
could I ever doubt on her... Shame on me...

He sees her crying & his heart flips & slowly goes towards her & touches her shoulder.Nidhi turns to him teary eyed & ashu wipes her tears & hugs her.
They stand like that for a long moment & Nidhi cries her heartout on Ashu's shoulder while Ashu caresses her head.

Nidhi- Aap naraaz toh nahin hain.

Ashu - Nahin Nidhi I am not, infact I am angry on myself that I could not be with you when you were going thru so much.I am not a good lover who cant understand his love.

Nidhi raises her finger to Ashu's lips to silence him- Pls dont tell like that,you dont know what you are to me.

Ashu smiles at her & tells dont worry now I am here with you and everything will be fine.But what happened to Baba,why this sudden attack.

Nidhi suddenly gets worried & looks at him & says - Baba had recently taken up a huge bank loan for some new business which failed badly & so in that shock he had a heart attack but now he is stable.

Ashu - Oh Nidhi I am so sorry you went thru so much all alone.Thank god baba is fine I would like to see him immediately

Nidhi - I will take you to him but there is something else I want to tell you. I had an ultimatum from Bank to repay the bank loan & since I didnt had any source I had to sell your house for loan recovery.I called you several times to tell you about selling this house but your number was always not reachable.Believe me if I had any other option I would not have touched this house.

She didnt had the courage to tell him face to face & so she turns away & after few seconds looks at him.

Ashu is shellshocked - You sold the house...
Nidhi is looking at him with tears & scared how will he react.

Ashu turns his back to her & recalls about the visarjan & Gautami's words.
She had no other source to repay bank loan... she had to save her baba...she wanted to tell me about selling the house... she has called me several times & armaan too ... what else could she do... He keeps thinking and finally realises there was nothing wrong in her decision.

Meanwhile Nidhi keeps waiting in anticipation.
Ashu turns to her smiles & comes upto her and holds her hands. Its ok Nidhi infact I am proud of you. You did the right thing & anyone in your place would have done the same.

Nidhi - Are you not angry on me for selling the house?
Ashu - I have overcome my hate & anger Nidhi now all I have for you is just pure love. I know the house was important to me but I have realised that nothing is more important to me in this life than you NIDHI & hugs her again.

This time Nidhi cries with happiness hugging him.Ashu lifts her face wipes the tears & kisses her forehead.
After some moments both leave to see Baba.


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Edited by ashblore - 13 years ago

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vasanthi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice Ash...this was most people's expectation yesterday...hence the disappointment with how the scene was actually shot...
I just finished watching the episode again ( last night i watched with almost half asleep as it was very late by the time it got uploaded)
Felt ok...not bad...hand on shoulder was most possible scenario as they were sitting next to each other and when she told him abt the heart attack...he could have instinctively put a hand on her shoulder or even squeezed her hand ...but the director missed that opportunity and then after that moment passed , any physical contact would have looked fake...so i am hoping this hichkichahat...does not last long and they do move towards little gestures of tenderness and love !!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful Ash.. .gorgeous... OS of the scene... ...that was so important.. n shown so bland!!

I hope sum ppl dun think that the hug in ur OS is sinful or something.. lolz...

Loved it yaar.. beautiful take..!! 👏

Words like...'Tum naraz to nahi ho...' etc.. were totally amiss yday... n Nidhi saying..'Aap aise dubara kahin nahi jaenge' (like she says to Rohan all th time)


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Posted: 13 years ago
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I ALSO LOVE MONDAY'S EPISODE AND ASHNI WAS SUPPERB.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Beautiful Ash.. .gorgeous... OS of the scene... ...that was so important.. n shown so bland!!


I hope sum ppl dun think that the hug in ur OS is sinful or something.. lolz...

Loved it yaar.. beautiful take..!! 👏

Words like...'Tum naraz to nahi ho...' etc.. were totally amiss yday... n Nidhi saying..'Aap aise dubara kahin nahi jaenge' (like she says to Rohan all th time)




Yes..tanu a lot of things were left unsaid yesterday.
As for the hug...if wishes were horses ...i am eager to see how the physical part is handled in the following episodes...it has to come...no doubt abt it...a simple hand behind back while walking together, holding hands...come on these r basic...am sure AshNi can handle this...and am sure the director can make them do this...we r not asking for the moon...for that our FFs r enough 😆


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well written scene. Keep it up.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well written...maybe you should give the cv some of your ideas, rather disappointing, one would have hoped that at least whilst clearing up misunderstandings between them they could have shown more compassion towards each other.

Nidhi's baba suffered a heart attck the least ashu could have done after knowing why she did not pitch was to put a comforting arm around her or even hold her hand...seriously cold.
whilst telling her that he would like to pick up from where they left why could her not hold her hand. This is serial is far from romance, in fact they express their love for each other to friends rather than telling each other.

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