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achiever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#801

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Wonderful dear... Aaj k update mein toh bade-bade dhamaake kiye hain aapne... Too gud... I really havnt seen any person as polite as Dr. Ashutosh... Too gud... N rohan n ashu tiff was fantastic... Gals openly discussing ashu... Wow... N the teaser??? U r just gonna drive us mad I guess...

dhamake..😆.. i thot i fell short of it!😆😆😆..bt neways.. i achieved wat i wanted.. tho i m not fully satisifed with this chapter.. bt the nxt chapter is gonna make it up for mer..😃..

Nidhi in swimsuit is really interesting scene.. speculations r interesting for any writer.. coz.. only writer has tht liberty to twist and turn their story and bring in some aspects tht viewers cudnt even imagine.. and thn to surprise thm.. gives the pleasure...😈.. 😆😆😆 bt u r all going to enjoy the nxt chapter.. its gonna reveal a few intersting things too..😳..

and yes.. Ashu is of a polite breed.. and yet he tries to match up to Nidhi's expectations.. so he is a person who the girls wud fall for.. flatly..😆 bt the girls r girls.. thy belong to a most mischievious group.. so thy r in for a mischief..😆

rohan-Ashu tiff.. 😆.. Oh! I luved it sooo much!😆😆... Rohan seems to b submissive.. bt wait.. didnt i tell tht he is like Nidhi.. and our Nidhi is sherni.. so wait till rohan roars in his typical style!😆

Again thnk u so much for commenting..

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#802

Originally posted by: Blushsarika
Superb Update Achiever , Loved it.
The more interesting thing is Nidhi in swimsuit . I guess she will wear it out of jealousy when she will find other girls are trying to attract Ashutosh Physically.
Out of Jealousy.
Can't wait to read next update.
Continue soon.

😆.. as i have written in my earlier comment, speculations r good.. coz thy bring in surprises..😆😆... our Ashu-Nidhi r atypical so dont expect thm to do anything too typical..😆.. bt u will luv the swimsuit scene..😳

And girls.. oh i luv thm.. thy r a mischievious lot whose head is Angie! rest will b revealed in upcoming chapters..😆

thnk u so much for ur lovely comments..😳

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achiever

@achiever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#803

Originally posted by: alkaparmart
wow is it your name,achiever.it is fab chap,and nidhi is in full mood.and ashutosh so polite,please make next update soon,we can't wait.

thnk u soo soo much..

yes..u can call me achiever..

Nidhi.. ka gussa is like a bubble.. burst hote hi khatam ho jata hai.. so she is again melting for Ashu..😆.. bt she is testing Ashu's patience hard..😆 his anger we all know is like a fire.. once started it will burn rising slowly and will rage and burn till it doesnt burn out completely .. or till someone pours some cold water..😆 so it will b nice to c how thy try and understand each other better.. so it will b nice if thy step up on tht part too..

Ashu behaves always politely except for rohan!😆

thnx for the comments...😳

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achiever

@achiever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#804

Originally posted by: Pooja_0910
Fantastic update di...Nidhi is fuming with jealousy aur ye to bas shuruvat hai...Awww i would love to see Nidhi getting jealous and all girls drolling over Ashu hehe maja aayega...
--luks like u r mischievious girl too.. so thn u will luv their mischief with Ashu-Nidhi..😆.. thy r not gonna spare thm.. 😆

I always loved Ashu over Nidhi but in this chapter i loved Nidhi so much...the way she speaked through her heart and defend Ashu and showed how great human being he is...

--she was always like tht.. speaks her heart.. does the right thing.. and lives simply.. its Ashu.. who tries to control her.. obviously he thinks its for her betterment.. and in a way. he is rite... coz Nidhi acts so naively sometimes.. she still has to grow up..😊.. bt i dont like Ashu's controlling nature frankly.. 😆

Teaser ke bare me kya bolu i'm too excited..dont know how Ashu will control his desire after seeing her in swimsuit...

--rite... to control himself is hard for him.. tho he thinks he can..easily.. bt he is so wrong abt himself!😆.. this scene plays a very subtle role.. and its interesting..😛

Thanks for the update

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#805

Originally posted by: ZedZee92
Super fantastic update 👏 Loved it a lot
Especially the part wer nidhi is getting jealous... Too cute...

It will also be fun to see the boys ogling at nidhi later and ashu getting jealous 😆

Hehe😆 but tooo goood

Waiting for ur next update

thnk u soo soo very much for ur comments..

Nidhi's jealousy.. ki jst shuruat hai.. girls r not going to sit still..😆

wow.. i liked the idea.. bt i always thot rohan was more thn enuf to make him jealous..😆.. lets c if i can twist my story this way. it definitely has a scope and.it sounds tempting..😆

Edited by achiever - 13 years ago

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heydoc27

@heydoc27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#806

wel!achiever thnks for d pm,but urs s pretty much on d top of d posts,so once u login u wont miss it!n before i saw d pm,i had read it!😉
i feel d J part has just strtd v just have to sit bak n see errm read😎
wel if d readers cudnt resist his charm,wat r d bechaare "ladies" to do?!!😉😆
hmm i knw m totally biased n neva leav an oppurtunity to say how many eva times dat me actually we r head in heels ova d doc!😳😉
but u juts pull us back wid projecting an adorable couple..
but d way u have done d characterisation of rohan is ..😉😆seriously!
d best part s d strng narrative,amazing..
kudos..

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

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Posted: 13 years ago

#807

Nidhi is successful in cutting lot of years from Ashu's age...BTW, when is the seperation? 😉

Edited by Anjani9 - 13 years ago

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#808

Originally posted by: heydoc27
wel!achiever thnks for d pm,but urs s pretty much on d top of d posts,so once u login u wont miss it!n before i saw d pm,i had read it!😉..
i feel d J part has just strtd v just have to sit bak n see errm read😎
wel if d readers cudnt resist his charm,wat r d bechaare "ladies" to do?!!😉😆
hmm i knw m totally biased n neva leav an oppurtunity to say how many eva times dat me actually we r head in heels ova d doc!😳😉
but u juts pull us back wid projecting an adorable couple..
but d way u have done d characterisation of rohan is ..😉😆seriously!
d best part s d strng narrative,amazing..
kudos..

wer r u and wer is ur FF.. i m seriously missing it.. i guess i lost its track wen i went MIA for a few weeks.. plz PM me the link if u have updated it..😊

oh.. i m humbled really.. and grateful tht thr ppl who take time out to read even my marathonish update with such gusto really.. personally i m so confused with all the FF's tht r being posted.. some r really nice.. bt if u follow each one of thm.. u lose track of the story.. i dont know how u ppl r managing it.. neways..so i m grateful tht ppl still like to follow my FF inspite of its slack pace...

the J part is really interesting also from Ashu's POV.. and now tht Rohan is back into picture.. he is in to lagao some tadka..😆 and also as my friend Anjani here is so restless to c AshNi seperation.. i think Rohan can b pretty useful to me..😆 bt bt.. it will not b a typical J track..

.. it has intersting twists and turns!😆

😆.. well.. with girls.. firstly thy r not at all ladies!!! 😆 u will b in for surprise if u expect typical soap drama form thm.. nay.. thr r smart girls.. so sit back and njoy at wat thy do!😆 dont expect any blonde-type behaviour from thm.. coz thr head is Angie..😆

yes.. i have tried so hard to bring out some negative traits of him as i promised.. bt wen i sit and write.. in the end he comes out as positive person..and Nidhi again melts for him! Wat to do.. he is jst so charming!😆 hmmm... luks like i have to try real hard to bring out his flaws..😆

again thnk u so much for liking my Ashu-Nidhi.. will b waiting for ur nxt reply..

tc.

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#809

Originally posted by: Anjani9
Nidhi is successful in cutting lot of years from Ashu's age...BTW, when is the seperation? 😉

u r one eager girl who keeps me in check from getting too sweet with Ashu..😆.. keep reminding me tht he is afterall human.. and thr is a dire need of seperation rite now!😆

on serious note, u will c the difference in Ashu's behaviour with Nidhi and the rest of the world once he goes back to hospital.. i havent focused on tht part yet.. coz my story revolves around Ashu-Nidhi.. bt i guess.. its essential to protray his different types of behaviour towards different ppl.. bt surely with Nidhi.. he forgets he is 40 yrs old.. afterall tht was the reason y he fell in love with her in the first place..😊..

and seperation is on its way.. dont worry.. a little bit of patience.. please.. coz my story, i know, is going at snail's pace 😆... even with the marathonish chapters..🤔...

so bear with it.. bt ur wait will b worth it.. coz u will get good dose of seperation.. soon!😆