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achiever

@achiever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: Blushsarika
Hey Achiever you said that your next chapter will be chocolates and there first date.
Chocolate toh ho gaya but where is there first date.
You said that you have completed it . So why make us wait ,update it please.

About yous question when te heading of the chapter is there first date ,toh date to hogi hi, now don't play by asking this question.
What is going in your mind?
Now I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

I had planned 2 include both chocolates and first date in one chapter.. bt thn thr was so much to say.. so made it a 3 chapter affair.. now even the first date is gonna get a lot longer!

the nxt chapter is "will he?" 😆..

and thn the next chapter is 1st date! 😳..

sorry abt tht.. bt thr r lot of chrctrs and thngs betn these 2 luv birds.. and for a story flow.. all need attention! 🤔

bt thrs still lot of sweet romance for thm to express..😳

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Deepikikamandal

@Deepikikamandal

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#342

Its indeed a very good update...lovely display of naughtiness.!!!

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-AnaRoy-

@-AnaRoy-

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#343

wow.. superb.. but why did u stop.. :(
waiting for the next...

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harsha6

@harsha6

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#344

thnkss for d update!!
it was superb :) ;)

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heydoc27

@heydoc27

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#345

hey achiever u luk lyk d master of teasers,uff☺️
n 1 week for d next update1 weeek,seems too long yaar😉😆
n dis was d cute update,so thaaank you👏👏
hmm as i tell u r an intelligent rogue,humour and romance laced intelligence😉
hmm ashu-babu,man i tell u m guessing ders will b really really interesting!!!!
hmm next,next,next..uff😳😳
d chocolicius ashu☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
wel a well wats up wid dis mrs.sinha,uff ok i m lyk waiting,i l always b waiting for ur updates bud,go ahead n surprise us sumtym sooon😉😆😳
n as u have mentioned in ur replies,abt a lengthy first dat,hmm u l have more trouble,since v l b pestering u more😉

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ritu kumar

@ritu3kumar

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: heydoc27
hey achiever u luk lyk d master of teasers,uff☺️
n 1 week for d next update1 weeek,seems too long yaar😉😆
n dis was d cute update,so thaaank you👏👏
hmm as i tell u r an intelligent rogue,humour and romance laced intelligence😉
hmm ashu-babu,man i tell u m guessing ders will b really really interesting!!!!
hmm next,next,next..uff😳😳
d chocolicius ashu😳
wel a well wats up wid dis mrs.sinha,uff ok i m lyk waiting,i l always b waiting for ur updates bud,go ahead n surprise us sumtym sooon😉😆😳
n as u have mentioned in ur replies,abt a lengthy first dat,hmm u l have more trouble,since v l b pestering u more😉

no doubt update was cute but very very small and please update a long one 😆
suro hotay hi khatam ho gaya😆

her playful smiles , his teasing eyes and mischevious face ... best combo😆

i am waiting when both of them will say those 3 words

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karajekar

@karajekar

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#347

hey achiever it was such naughtiness ff

the way both were teasing each its something different like a soft air when blows to our ears

the feeling which we get for our love one pls conti soon now it unable to wait for the next i very well know next chap will something something yu know what i mean

sonali

Edited by karajekar - 13 years ago

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: heydoc27
hey achiever u luk lyk d master of teasers,uff☺️
n 1 week for d next update1 weeek,seems too long yaar😉😆
n dis was d cute update,so thaaank you👏👏
hmm as i tell u r an intelligent rogue,humour and romance laced intelligence😉
hmm ashu-babu,man i tell u m guessing ders will b really really interesting!!!!
hmm next,next,next..uff😳😳
d chocolicius ashu☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
wel a well wats up wid dis mrs.sinha,uff ok i m lyk waiting,i l always b waiting for ur updates bud,go ahead n surprise us sumtym sooon😉😆😳
n as u have mentioned in ur replies,abt a lengthy first dat,hmm u l have more trouble,since v l b pestering u more😉

thank u soo soo much for ur looovely comments..

I m luving tht u all r liking my teasers!😛...😆

Ashu-Baba confro is really interesting per me.. very different from wat our onscreen duo shared.. a completely diffrnt r'ship.. how it evolves is really interesting! i'll c if i can incorporate in chpt 21.. as u all need a little bit of big update.. lets c if i can make one..

Yeah.. this Ashu is pretty Chocolicious.. really...☺️☺️.. he makes us blush along with Nidhi..😆.. he is such a charmer! 😍

Mrs. Sinha.. well.. dont stress ur brain much.. she is jst for fun.. so no worries from her end..

the person to b worried for now r.. Baba, Mallu, Dadi bua, and "log" lets c who strikes first!

Edited by achiever - 13 years ago

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#349

Originally posted by: ritu3kumar

no doubt update was cute but very very small and please update a long one 😆
suro hotay hi khatam ho gaya😆

her playful smiles , his teasing eyes and mischevious face ... best combo😆

i am waiting when both of them will say those 3 words

--Small.. i thot it was big.. i actually edited quite a bit to make it shorter and crispier.. k.. will take a note of tht.. and give a bit bigger update.. bt not as big as the biggie one so dont worry!😆

yeah.. i luuuvv the spark betn thm.. its sheer joy to watch thm converse and b naughty! I think thr compatibility wins over the issue of age gap.. otherwise a 42-24 r'ship wud b quite boring.. tho thy think differently act differently and basically r 2 different completely personalities.. add to tht the maturity and experience of one and dynamism and vivaciousness of the other.. plus.. both of thm r soo soo cute in thr own ways.. thy do make a wonderful couple!

for the ILU part.. hmm.. let me think!😆

Edited by achiever - 13 years ago

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#350

Originally posted by: karajekar
hey achiever it was such naughtiness ff

the way both were teasing each its something different like a soft air when blows to our ears

the feeling which we get for our love one pls conti soon now it unable to wait for the next i very well know next chap will something something yu know what i mean

sonali

Sonali... thnk u very much for ur wonderful comments.. 😛..

yeah.. its tantalizing and teasing in most pleasurable way.. 😍.. yet it lacks tht passion.. tht intensity.. tht a couple shares.. tht still has to grow betn thm.. thr physical intimacy is presently jst at 1st stage!😉

So i m taking it slow.. let thm explore each other in every way.. emotionally.. physically... bt slowly... 😳.. knowing a person is a really something different.. thr r still lot of facets to thr personalities.. so thy will explore tht... so for now, let thm discover and understand this new wave of intimacy tht thy have started to share..😳