Updated OS-Cont Suhaag Raat on Pg 6 - Page 3

Hi All,😊

This is my version of the current House Track in KTLK

After a 6 hour long surgery Ashu is sitting in his cabin but his mind is all the time thinking of Nidhi. How could she do this to me, make a joke out of my Baba's house ??

Just then he hears a knock and Mallika enters.

Mallika - Hi Ashutosh kaise ho aur Surgery kaisa tha

Ashu -Oh Mallika good to see you back, Surgery toh successful tha, tumhari Tabiyat ab kaisi hain.

Mallika - I am fine Ashutosh par tum thoda upset dikh rahe ho..

Ashu - Nahi I am fine..

After a few moments of silence...

Mallika -Ashutosh Main tumhe tumhari zindagi ki sabse badi sachayi bataane aayi hoon par mujhe pata nahin ki tum kaise react karoge.

Ashu is suddenly interested & asks - Mallika kaisi sachayi ??

Mallika - Mujhe tumhare Baba ke ghar ki owner pata chal gayi hain..

Ashu is now overcome with delight - sach kaun hain Mallika main abhi unse jaake milna chahunga...

Mallika - Ashutosh mujhe pata nahin kaise yeh bataoon..

Ashu irritated - Mallika pls paheliya math banao, seedhe se mujhe unka naam aur pata bataon.

Mallika is overjoyed that finally her plan is coming to the climax.She closes her eyes & tells

Ashu tumhare Baba ke ghar ki owner aur koi nahin but Dr. Nidhi Verma.

Ashu just stares at her bewildered. He is unable to react or utter anything & seeing this Mallu says - Ashutosh Main jaanti hoon tumhe yeh baat sunhe kitna bura laga hoga par yahi sachayi hain, who ladki sirf tumhe bewakoof bana rahi thi.

Ashu finally gets back his voive & speaks - Mallika tum itne yakeen se kaise keh sakti ho ki Nidhi us ghar ki owner hain???

Mallika - Main jaanthi thi Ashutosh tum itni aasani se mere baat par yakeen nahi karoge & shows him the file which Nidhi had given to Aditya.

Ashu snatches it from her & starts reading it. His expressions changes from shock to upset to hurt to anger & finally hatred while Mallu rejoices reading these expressions.

Unable to bear it anymore Ashu gives her the file back & leaves for home while Mallu feels her plan to separate Ashni is finally nearing success.

Ashu reaches home & locks himself in his bedroom while Armaan keeps calling him from outside.

Armaan - Ashu kya hua tum mujse bina baat kiye andar chalegaye, baahar aana.

Ashu - Armaan pls mujhe akela chod do..

Armaan - Ashu tumhe aise takleef main nahi dekh sakta pls baahar aao.

After sometime Ashu finally opens his bedroom door & comes out.

Armaan - Kya hua Ashu? Nidhi se kuch baat hui???

Ashu- Us ladki ka naam matlo mere saamne Armaan, I justtt hate her. He blurts it out with great difficulty & Armu looks shocked at him.

Armu- Tum itni si baat keliye use nafrat karte ho, comeon Ashu yeh thik nahin hain.

Ashu - Tum nahi jaante us ladki ne mere saath kya kiya aur agar tumhe pata chalegi toh tumbi use nafrat karoge.

Ashu then tells him about the truth of Baba's house & Armu gets into thinking mode.

Armu- Suno Ashu jaha tak main jaanta hu Nidhi dhoka delewali ladki nahi hain zaroor kuch misunderstanding hua hain aur tumhe pata karna hoga ki yeh ghar uske paas kaise aaya aur usne tumhe yeh baat aajtak kyun nahi batayi

Ashu who is still angry - Mujhe kuch nahin jaana hain Armaan mein already bohot dhoka kha chukka hoon.

Armu is determined & calls Nidhi from his phone several times but she doesn't answer.

Ashu - Dekha she is least bothered now, phone nahin uthayi naa.

Armu - Tu chup kar & calls Rohan ..

Rohan answers the call after several rings & immediately updates Armu on Verma's heart attack & how Nidhi rushed to hospital leaving Ashu waiting for her.

Armu - Ashu suno Nidhi ke baba ka heart attack hua kal raat...

Ashu gets happy to hear Nidhi was coming to meet him & says- Kya ??

Armu - Haan Rohan ne bataya ki who kal raat tumse milne aadi raaste aayithi aur tabhi usne Nidhi ko call kiya or Mr. Verma ke heart attack ke bare mein bataya toh Nidhi foran beech raaste se hospital keliye nikal gayi.

Ashu - OMG toh Mr. Verma kaise hain aur Nidhi

Armu - Mr. Verma toh serious hain aur Nidhi ... Nidhi kit oh tumhare sakt zaroorat hain Ashu tumhe abhi waha jaana hoga.

Ashu ( still the truth that Nidhi owns the house keep plying on his thoughts)- Dekh Armaan mujhe Mr. Verman ke bare mein sunke toh bura laga par mein Nidhi se milne nahi jaaonga especially ab jab mujhe pata chala ke wo baba ke ghar ki maalkin hain.

Armu is now getting irritated with Ashu - Dekh Ashu apni naarazgi dur rakh pehle aur jaake use mil or mauka dekh ke use ghar ki bare mein bhi pooch. Bina Nidhi se baat kiye kisi bhi natije pe mat aa.

After lots of convincing by Armaan , Ashu finally agrees and leaves for the hospital.

To be continued.

Pls leave your comments 😃

omg what an awesome piece of work ash👍🏼...awww i wish that we get to see something like this instead of the illogical track the sadist CVs are producing

Now thats what we all want to see.. 😊 ... Ashu being a HUMAN first and an OCD-lunatic later..!!

I really like it Aarathi. It's exciting and logical. Thank God Armaan convinced him and also that Armaan called Rohan and Rohan told him the most important details...

can't wait to see what happens next!

I wish, the brainless, not so creative 😕 , creative team takes this track...😊..

Please post soon...😊

i dont think he s gonna meet her

Good update...hope this is what happens and everything clears up ASAP!!

loved it...great writing Aarathi 👏 😳

how i wish this whole story comes true...CV's thoda viewers ka ray liya karo...take tips from us😉..

ur article is mind blowing aarati!!!!!...so romantic yarrr!!!!!☺️...