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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3


They reach the Lucknow Darbar. They're asked to wait for a table. Rohan and Nidhi also arrive.

Armu: Arre kitni der lagegi??? Tab tak toh main mar jaoonga bhook ke maare! At least starters toh bhijwa dijiye!! 😆

AshNi are hungrily checking each other out!! 😳

Matre'd: Sir, rooftop par ek table hai.. aap check kar lijiye, agar theek ho toh???

Armaan: Accha, theek hai, main check karke aata hoon..

Follows Maitre'd inside.

Rohan is still hanging around. Ashu looks at him irritated. Rohan looks and smiles at Ashu.. Ashu wants him to get lost.. He's looking at Nidhi with longing, but doesn't know what to do. 😆😛

Ashu (suddenly as if struck by a thought): Main Car mein mera phone bhool gaya, abhi aata hoon!

Goes to Armu's car and calls someone.

Ndihi and Rohan are waiting. Nidhi's phone rings, she looks at caller and eyes widen. hides the phone from Rohan and picks up.

Nidhi (very soflty): Hello

Ashu: Kuch mat kehna, sirf sunna.. ye dono kabab mein haddi hume baat tak karne nahi denge aur mujhe tumse bahut saari baatein karni hai. 😳 Tum chup chaap koi bahana banao aur baahar aa jao

Nidhi: Kya?? Kya boloon? 😕

Ashu: Kuch bhi, I'm waiting 😆😉

Nidhi hangs up and looks at Rohan. He's smiling. She looks frustrated, grins back at him..this goes on for a couple of minutes, Nidhi is panicking now, wringing her hands, suddenly turns around and says..

Nidhi: Maine na bahar ek golgappe waale ko dekha.. just outside.. Rohan bahut bhook lagi hai. Please ek plate la do na..😆

Rohan: Arre abhi khana toh kha rahe hain hum, hotel mein.😕

Nidhi: Tab take main mar jaoongi, bahut bhook lagi hai, please Rohan please...😆

Rohan: OK tum bhi chalo phir, saath khayenge 😉

Nidhi (flustered, does't know what to say, then suddenly thought strikes her): Arre nahi, phir table haath se nikal gaya toh? Rohan please.. Armaan ji ke liye bhi toh wait karna hai, accha nahi lagega na? 😛

Rohan looks unhappy but agrees.. leaves the place. Nidhi watches him leave and takes the other direction, runs to the parking where Ashu is waiting. They both smile at each other and get into the car and drive off to... someplace where they can be ALONE!!!!!!!




Edited by LizzieBennett - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12

ahaaa...love couple eloping...wow..

it will be great if they follow your screenplay...😍

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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Awww... our AshNi are so eager to spend ALONE COUPLY time.. 😳love it..!! Very sweet and cute update.. Lizzie..!!

Thank u for a wonderful Xmas gift.. 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg 2 n three are even better ...god work dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ndihi and Rohan are waiting. Nidhi's phone rings, she looks at caller and eyes widen. hides the phone from Rohan and picks up.

Nidhi (very soflty): Hello

Ashu: Kuch mat kehna, sirf sunna.. ye dono kabab mein haddi hume baat tak karne nahi denge aur mujhe tumse bahut saari baatein karni hai. 😳 Tum chup chaap koi bahana banao aur baahar aa jao

Nidhi: Kya?? Kya boloon? 😕

Ashu: Kuch bhi, I'm waiting 😆😉

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😲adorable idea!!!!!!!!! they should do this. it's fresh and took me by surprise...very romantic too...👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Awww... our AshNi are so eager to spend ALONE COUPLY time.. 😳love it..!! Very sweet and cute update.. Lizzie..!!


Thank u for a wonderful Xmas gift.. 🤗


Hey.. my pleasure.. Merry Christmas to you too!! 🤗 Now if only the CVs would give all us AshNiacs this gift!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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marry Christmas to all..and one more fab part dear..u are fast lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow Lizzie the third part wasthe most natural & cute,,,,,hope they show something like that in the show❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LIZZE ! very nice, totally perfect , u r very good writer, i wish ki kisi production house ya directer ki nazar tumhari script par pad jaye and they appoint you as a writer in their productions... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Haaye Mera Ashu itna romantic & desperate hogaya that he is fooling Romaan and running off with Nidhi 😍

Lizzie wonderful OS yaar. Very well written pls continue & show some more romantic moments that we are eagerly waiting for.
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