AshNi: post dargah scene OS

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Posted: 13 years ago
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OK... here's my imagination on what could happen after the dargah scene .. its in 3 parts


Part 1


AshNi scene at dargah


Armu: Jab aap dono hum dono ke saamne kabool kar sakte hain ke aap ek doosre se pyar karte hain, toh ek doosre ke saamne kyon nahi?


Ashu looks flabbergasted, happy, relaxed, excited, hopeful..eyes Nidhi

Nidhi looks shy and lowers her gaze smiling 😳

RoMaan look at them both..

Rohan: Toh? We are waiting..😛

Ashu:(blushing and flustered)…ye, ye.. kya kar rahe ho, yaar? ae Armaan, what is this, yaar?😳

Arm: Karna pada, mujhe karna pada.. aap dono gaadi mein baith toh chuke the, par gaadi start nahi ho rahi thi..😆

Roh: haan, toh dhakka dene hum dono aa gaye😆

Arm: Ab humne toh humara kaam kar diya, dhakka de diya, ab Ashu beta, gaadi start karo!🤣

Ash: (still looks flustered).. arre.. yaar.. (looks around then looks at Nidhi, she's looking down coyly)..

Roh: Nidhiji aap hi kuch kahiye..

(Nidhi still not looking up in shyness)

Ashu: Aap dono zar chup karenge please.. ye bhi koi tareeka hai? 😡

Arm: You know. he's right! Ab pyar ka izhaar karne ke liye mahoul bhi toh chahiye (imitating Dilip Kumar).. humne toh bhagwan ke saamne sach keh diya hai.. ab in donon ko kehna hai.. bol beta, kahan kehna chahta hai? Yahin.? ya phir kisi bageeche mein, ya phir apne aspatal ke kebin mein?? (imitating Sanjeev Kumar)

(Rohan Armaan look at each other and chuckle)..

Ashu's now getting angry😡

Roh: Ek idea hai Sir.. Hum humare original plan follow karte hain.. pehle pet puja phir love ki aarti… 😆

Arm:(going all gooeyeyed on Rohan) Arre, pyaare (blowing a kiss at him).. tune toh meri mooh ki baat cheen li.. Hum kya pichle janam mein miya-biwi the kya? Tu mere man ki baat itni acchi tarah se kaise samajh leta hai? 🤣

And RoMaan walk away, with hands over shoulders, leaving AshNi behind..😳😃

AshNi look at RoMaan and then at each other, both are ecstatic, but at the same time unsure and struck by shyness. Nidhi coyly looks away after an intense eyelock..

Ashu (shyly and unsurely): Hum bhi chalein?

And they both walk behind RoMaan, stealing glances at one another when they think the other is not looking..



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justprati thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow...jst too gud yrr...
Very nice imagination...
Keep writing more
n merry christmas :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superbbb Lizzie continue please <3<3<3<3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing gal ..u done it brilliantly ..
plz bring more for us..
love to rad that too
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pretty good must admit :)

Very possible scenario for Mon 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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adorable cute funny...keep it up. waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
Wow.. really good one Lizzie... liked the RoMan masti.. and AshNi shyness..!! I so wanna see AshNi walk out of that dargah as a couple!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8

Ashu in Armu's car and Nidhi in Rohan's.. plan is to meet at Lucknow darbar for lunch..

Ashu keeps looking back to see if Rohan is following with Nidhi..😆

Arm (humming: pyar hume kis mod pe le aaya…) 😆

Ashu: Arre yaar, ye sab kya tha, kyon drama karta rehta hai yaar tu? Tujhe toh actor hona chahiye tha! 😃

Arm: Karna pada meri jaan, karna pada.. varna tu toh aansoo baha baha ke ghar mein flood kar raha tha aur mujhe toh swimming bhi nahi aati! Khud ki jaan bachane ke liye karna pada! 🤣

Ashu looks frustrated, again turns behind in impatience 😆 ..

Arm: Aa rehe hain, aa rahe hain, itni betaabi.. arre sabar kar, sabar kar.. sabar ke kabab mein haddiyan nahi hoti! (and laughs loudly at his own joke)🤣

Ashu rolls his eyes and looks heavenwards..😆

Armu: Arre.. tujhe toh mujhe aur Rohan toh Thanks bolna chahiye.. aur who bhi gidgidakar.. mmm(singing)..Hum hi ne teri prem ki naiyya ko doobte doobte bachaya hai!!😆

Ashu says nothing, just sighs..

Armu: Arre yaar bahut bhook lagi hai.. ye hotel kahan hai yaar.. jab main bhooka rehta hoon na toh dimaag kaam karna band kar deta hai..

Ashu again looks behind..

Ashu (in anger and frustration): Jaldi chalao yaar!! 😆


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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey both parts are superbb...u are so into characteriztn..loving each character so much..and the post dargah scenario is MASHALLAH..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
Armu is so funny 🤣 .. 'ansun baha baha ke ghar me flood kar deta... aapni jaan bachane ke liye karna pada' 🤣n .. lolz Ashu is all bechain to... see his dil ka chain. .aka Nidhi! 😳


Super cute update...

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