My Boyfriend's Best Friend : A ShaRica FF Updated Part 8 Page 19 - Page 11

I don't know what it is but there is something so captivating about this tale. Kinda feels like a silhouette that collects stained and broken glass and creates magic which reflects onto every single thing. That might sound wordy and confusing but I mean it's too much magic to contain in a truly real yet whimsical window. I feel Shayara is actually very strong. She is much braver than she thinks she is. There is so much strength contained within her vulnerability and I feel like no matter how hopeless she feels, there are so many visible signs of her somehow feeling that maybe one day, things will get better. There is so much story even in her body language and repeated attempts to contact Dev. But when she finally shapes up to talk, her own denial and state of crisis refuses to let her be happy and contradicts every bit of sunshine. I commend you on breaking the mould of a one dimensional character and still making such an emotional personality. She seems to be this drained and fragile hearted girl but so full of love but so broken as well.

Dear Penfolk,

Originally posted by: shreyj7

Ayeee it's my birthday on May 12 such a pleasent coincidence..

Finally I am so glad you updated...

Ughh don't even think that you are ending this any sooner..

Shayara, Shayara, Shayara now the old Shayara will live again after these 2 beautiful souls collide again and again hopefully!! Devrath ahh!! Finally found her finally these 2 souls connected.. the feeling though was amazing..

Dev your leaving message to Parth truly conveys a lot more. It symbolizes a lot!!

Kaushi ji,

Beautiful update!!

Can't wait for these souls to connect again.

You keep Writing and never think of stopping..

Update soon!!

you don't know how much I love you. My all time first reader! Loads of hugs!

Originally posted by: ROYALRED

Its amazing why r u disappointed dear we r loving ur story too much waiting for next of so long next time make it fast we all r loving it much it's different from other so do continue don't left it midway will be waiting for next thanks for update and pm take care many people here left their story midday please u don't do this thank u

Originally posted by: monica160282

Amazing. Plz do continue. The last dialogue by dev was so heart wrenching. Update soon dear. Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Amazing and the last message given to Perth was very thoughtful. ..its so true ..ppl like Perth are self obsessed ..I doubt if he would ever understand. .I waiting for Dev nd Shayara to.meet ...pls update the next chapter soon...

And a message for you dear...I love your writing..I enjoy every bit of it ..so I want you to write more...not every one is blessed with the skill of writing...you have that skill..you are gifted ..so nuture it.

eagerly waiting for ur next update

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

I don't know what it is but there is something so captivating about this tale. Kinda feels like a silhouette that collects stained and broken glass and creates magic which reflects onto every single thing. That might sound wordy and confusing but I mean it's too much magic to contain in a truly real yet whimsical window. I feel Shayara is actually very strong. She is much braver than she thinks she is. There is so much strength contained within her vulnerability and I feel like no matter how hopeless she feels, there are so many visible signs of her somehow feeling that maybe one day, things will get better. There is so much story even in her body language and repeated attempts to contact Dev. But when she finally shapes up to talk, her own denial and state of crisis refuses to let her be happy and contradicts every bit of sunshine. I commend you on breaking the mould of a one dimensional character and still making such an emotional personality. She seems to be this drained and fragile hearted girl but so full of love but so broken as well.

About Dev Dixit. I don't have words. Something about him just creates an equilibrium of sensitivity. Ironically, unlike an artist, Dev feels like a normal human but almost like in possession of childlike curiosity. And we he cares, he truly truly does. His profound words that leave a awestruck Parth behind not only mark a landscape of so many triggers to overthink for him but also shows his inclination towards healing Shayara's broken heart. He's not in love yet, not so I believe. He is impacted by Shayara's hurt mind that his own actions are there to defend her. This is not love for the romance, but love for humanity and love to help someone who's broken completely and the inability to see someone in pain and not help which also says a lot about Dev's character.

I'm so excited for this story to unfold!!!!! Thanks for this Penfolk. Sorry for such a long comment but this story gives me the chills :)

Originally posted by: RUQAIYA10

Dear Penfolk,

First of all I would like to say a big thank you for this wonderful chapter.The plot just keeps getting better and better. Now that they have established a connection I'm highly anticipating the moment the sparks will fly when these two souls finally meet face to face. I love this unexplainable bond between Devrath and Shayara. It just took one phone call and Devrath, a man she barely knows and is practically a stranger has now become her intimate confidant. This is getting too exciting.

Please dont think of discontinuing the story.The unique concept was what what drew me to it in the firstplace. here's hoping you won't take long to post the next chap. 😊

I am so so so touched, truly. The love you bestowed through this beautiful comment means a lot to me. Thanks for spending time.

Penfolk, that was a very good update. Worth the wait. The last dialogue by Dev took the cake. This is the only FF i'm reading so please don't keep us waiting for long. Waiting for the next update:)

Originally posted by: Gauri.0109

Penfolk, that was a very good update. Worth the wait. The last dialogue by Dev took the cake. This is the only FF i'm reading so please don't keep us waiting for long. Waiting for the next update:)