The Fractured Love - A KRPKAB Short Story, Part-5 Updated on Pg. 4

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Rachana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

I want dev to ask ques to his MAA

jo b kaho I luv u mamaji finally😆👏

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ROYALRED

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Thanks for pm about update it was superb kab se show mein yahi chahiye tha but nothing you did it great job dear keep it up waiting for next update and

happy friendship day

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cscs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Another brilliant update.

M loving the flow and growth in characters.

Waiting for Devakshi conversation now.

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Uttara1112

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Lovely update. Thank you. BTW, I still can't see private messages so sorry if I dont respond to them:((

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OrangeShip

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Wow lovely brilliant story. Kudos to your writing and thanks for updating :)

Means a lot!

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OrangeShip

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Now I am eager to read how they will interact.

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Kuku_92

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Hey dear...

Read first 3 chapters

They were beautifully written... Just loved it...

The mental state of sona , her fears are very well pen down n they seemed to be so natural.

How i wish ki serial mein bhi aisa kuch dikhate...

I just loved sona n asha bond

Will comment after reading last 2 chapters

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Kuku_92

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Hey dear

Read last 2 parts also...

Finally Dev ke sath sath sabhi ke saamne saare sach baahar agye hai... Good 👏

Dev also realised ki sona also loves him deeply n he was wrong... Eager to know what will happen next...

Kya Dev sach mein ghar chhod ke chla jaega??

Thanks for d pm...😃

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sp12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Hello Everyone

Thank you for the comments/likes. I apologise for not updating the story for quite sometime now, was caught up with office work and with the show ending i did not have the heart to continue, it hurts so much. But the show is back now and so is my motivation.
The next update will be on Sunday, once again my sincere apologies for the delay and big thank you to everyone for the encouraging words.

Regards
SP