OS:POSSESSIVE MR.DIXIT author note on pg3 updt 6aug

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A.K.Aggarwal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: coolmeet
Very well written.
18+ ab thoda Kam wala likhna...mods on hain

Thnxxx
I am nt goin to post 18+ out here it's only on watty like my other stories - swing passionate romance n seduction
Here toh emotional stuff only
Waise whts mods????
N plzzz continue ur story as well
Waise I read d story u suggested me so thanxxx n I took ur advice of not even thinkin to read FSOG

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Beautifully Written ...please continue... 👏

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monica160282

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Ohh wow. Superb start dear. Plz continue soon. Yday was a perfect opportunity to show some intense scene but makers failed to do that. I have full hopes on u. Atlast we can imagine what they could have showed. Do update soon.

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Chandni Davey.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

I couldn't believe my eyes to see the chapter been written coz I asked to write. A big n biggest Thank-You to U Dear.

N m really sorry I didn't know that 18+ is not permitted here.

I thought it will b allowed. So plz accept my apologies friends.

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Chandni Davey.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Wow amazingly n beautifully written Dear.

Loved the subtle description keeping in mind the rules of limits here.

The way Dev was been described n Sona's anger going down the drain n replaced by her love n want.

Jassi bechara yaha bhi daant se nahi bacha.

N Sona enjoying Dev's authoritative party was awesome.

Keep writing it more deep there n I'll surely read n comment.

I love DevAkshi n their nakhras.

I have read some previous write-ups of Urs n I know U r too good at it.

Really felt sad knowing abt two write-ups of Urs got deleted. N m sure I must have read that. Waiting for the next part.

Thank-You once again Dear.

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A.K.Aggarwal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Hey guys
I hv update the next part on wattpad which is strictly 18+
So anyone interested check it out on wattpad

https://www.wattpad.com/447072480-devakshi-os-series-possessive-mr-dixit-part2