Devakshi FF - When Life Has Other Plans For You(New Thread)~ Ch30 Pg79 - Page 44

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Posted: 8 years ago
Commenting for Chapter-23.

Aayi to comment karne thi. Par precap pe akti thi.

Ab firse overview karna padega comment karne k liye.
Ruko abhi overview karke comment le kar aayi.

Yayayyy. Update started with Sona despo for talking to Dev.
Loved both of theirs urgency, need, want, longing n desponess to talk.

Sona office nahi jayegi. To Dev ka kya hoga.
Love their guns of words shooting eachother over ph. Still missing eachother. He did care that Ele not to think all the the happenings as wrong.


Awww. Dev teasing gharwali over saali.
Lovely it was. N Sona did give it back. N what she was blushing.

Ele did made Sona strong n pushed her to confess her side of feelings.
Aur ye kya dono msg msg khel rahe the. Suddenly Dev ne six maara. Terrace pe milna hai ab in dono ko.
Hope next time washroom select na kare.
Aur Sona needs to change dress to meet her own man Dev at the terrace of her own house. Something planned by Sona.


Gosh precap pe to atki hoon.
Can't resist to read the next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Commenting for Chapter-24.

Awww. Hero nahi bana aur partner in crime se bhi kaam karwa liya. Super pipe line ka idea tha yaar Gayu. I really wished n pitied that pipe.
Sona k extra akal bada acha laga.

Sona drooling over his BF cum husband. 😲 n that too as soon as she him at the door quick after opening the door.
N both going hand in hand in dark was my fav moment.


Then I loved loved Dev hugging Sona suddenly n expressing his state that he missed her the whole day.
Pics with both of them in awesome outfits was cherry on the cake. Must say romantic n rocking choice.

Yaar inke teasing n chatting chats bandh karwao aur romance aur passion ka tadka lao. But loved this convo of their as well. Sona blurring out the truth of Ele. N Dev amazed abt her secret sharing skills.

Sona's confession was so emotional n heartwarming.
Loved her journey from being a best friend to a wife n GF.
Let the beauty n purity. N hence lemme not detail on it n let it b felt by me.


Oh God plz koi funny insaan na ho. Aur adhura reh gaya.
Lemme complete it reading to next update. Too much excited.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 26

Fabulous Part

Oh Tina thinks that Sonakshi wants to trap her boss and she also talks to Jay
Sona on the other hand has been ignoring Dev as she wants to know about their first kiss and why she does not know about him
Jay and Dev speak but the moment Jay learns that the new employee is Sona he is surprised and happy in a way and I'm really glad that he found out because he will certainly help them especially with Bijoy
waiting for Dev to tell Sona everything about that party night
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Posted: 8 years ago
Commenting for Chapter-25.

😳

Not able to write further.


OK so it was Asha who broke their kiss followed by confession. I thought it to b some funny one but here it was a sensible lady. Our very own understanding n supportive Mumma.

Then there they leave with a sad heart unable to experience their first kiss. But as soon as got back to home Dev did made Sona blush to the brightest colour of red.

Their wassap convo was romantic n lovely. Enjoy their teasing n understanding session over the app.

N the next morning came with a start for them for their desires. N Dev has been very much naughty. He pushed Sona soo much that she hurriedly kissed him or such a long n then Dev revelation abt his first kiss left uncleared to Sona. She got hell shocked on sensing his meaning.

Yaar Gayu ab to m running for the next as updates r getting more interesting n exciting.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mkjr

oh my god right now oly i was upset with no update and here it is i guess something reaaly big is going to happen that unseen message the person who saw them and smirked jay's scolding revealition to bijoy and much more bad is going to happen but i hope somewhere there should be something good but ya this chapter was also too steamy hot lovely supsense one





The unknown message will be read out in the next update
The truth will be revealed soon
Whatever bad has to happen devakshi will face it together
So no worries 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

There is one thing that confused me "later she went to bed without even bothering to check her phone, which contained a message that could change her world...actually their world... drastically..."

Who had sent it and what was it ??




First of all thanku so much Ash dii for ur regular comments
Well the secret of the message will be revealed in d next update clearing a few thingw
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

awesome chapter sweety
thanks for pm...
pls do countinue soon !!






Thanku so.much dear
Will continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: CUTE_K2

Yeh toh Sabse awesome chapter hai di, issme itna saare intimate part daal diya aapne but I pity Tina bechaari😔 and I very excited🥳 to know what will Jay do to both these poor souls





Thanku jii ketaki jiii 😳
Jay jo karega rab karega
Tina kya kya hua hoga yeh socho filhaal 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SecretSuperstar

Wow dear this time a quick update
Yeh message ka kya twist hain? Hope devakshi isse close aur aayein
Camera in the cabin really ? Saari privacy toh gayi pani mein
Waise chapter process is rightly placed and hope ki iss Baar aap half century kar do updates ki
Do take care of your health






Yess a quick update last time
But a delayed one this time
blame my ill health and this weather which has caused me severe cold

Cctv cabin mein laganr waale ko nahi pata tha na ki whaaan kuch aisa hone waala hai 😆
Use laga ki office mein log sirf kaam karne aate hai

Half century?????
Na jii na
Bass do teen update aur
Phir happy waali ending 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _suchi_

Totaaal hot
I'm sweating now 😆
Dev aur kitna naughty banega
Jaisa papa waisa beta 😆
Asha was no less
Bechara tina
Dev should tell tina about d secret now

Btw I commented on page 54 pls chk tat too

Aur aaram se next chap likho main isse 10 bar paad lungi 😆



Suchi dear
Thanku for considering it hott
Pasina ponch lo
Dev ab nahi rukne waala
Sona bhi use nahi rokegi
Woh comment maine dekha tha par reply nahi kar paati
Thodi bust chal rahi hoon na

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